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Prince_Zodiac


A writer of many accounts. I've done writing before so I'm perfectly confident that I can bring wonderful stories to anyone who will take the time to read them.

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Life is never predictable. Some people are born, destined for greatness, their fates predetermined for them to rose above the rest, and live wonderful lives. Other's are just meant to be average. To have their day to day, and never make a mark on the world.

For this family, it's neither.

A dragon king, who fought a war three thousand years ago, now released from his stone prison. A mecha, with incredible power, and a past he wished didn't happen. A demon, her body not her own, and within her mind sleeps a different kind of beast. A machine, his mind corrupted, his past stained with madness. A ranger, who understands what his allies do not, and survives on his own. A man, born to fight the nightmares that plague the omniverse, yet is a nightmare himself.

Though different, they are family, and this is their story.

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Hey everyone. This is the rewrite of my original displaced stories, which I'm hoping this improves on. Now a few of these characters aren't mine. Many belong to PyraBlue Heart. Hopefully you old fans out there will know which ones. I won't say here because it'll spoil things, but I will when they come up. Anyways, hope I can make a better story than what I first had.

Disclaimer: None of the songs or music I use in this story are mine. All songs belong to their respective owners.

Chapters (17)
Comments ( 66 )

If the displaced characters were voiced, what would they sound like?

Interesting, vary interesting.

Also
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Spoilers here, if I got these right.

couldn't figure out the others but I'm pretty sure I got them right.

I've been meaning to ask, what's going to happen with My Best Friend's a God?

Question, all main characters are in one world or in different (like in first/s fan fiction)?

Will the Rakes be making a comeback?

Also, when I you first wrote Lisa's story, did I ask if you'd include an Australian creature like a Yowie or Bunyip?

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I'm not sure if you did, but just wait and see.

... Why did my mind jump to the question of, "How awesome would a Metal Shadow be?"

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GOD DAMN MAN now I'm a little afraid to read anything you write, I mean there's waiting for the next chapter and then there's waiting for the cancellation.
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OH NO that would be edge on top of edge. metal already edgy but shadows is

that was his theme for gods sake seriously look up that games theme and you'll get a lot of music like that.

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Don't worry. Those just got canceled because Pyra no longer wanted to write those stories, and I wanted to revamp them anyways. I intend to complete this one.

Wait, I'm confused, last chapter was during the battle with Tirek, and now we're at when discord broke free, what's going on?

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The chapters switch from character to character. As you'll see in the AN, this is Gale's second chapter, which means it's taking place in his universe. All of the characters have yet to meet, so they live in their own universes for now, and all of their universes are at different points in time. That's why Alduin fought Tirek in the last chapter, and Gale began his fight with Discord. The next chapter will be about Lisa, as the pattern of characters follows the same order as the first six chapters until they all meet up!

Nathan the ranger reminds me of "dog" from half life 2

... You might need to label each chapter for the character.

Is this the guy that turned into the Galactic Ranger from R&C:UYA or is this the guy that turned into Metal Sonic?

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Metal sonic. Don't worry, for now on, you'll be abelt to tell the difference better. Besides, if you notice the context, Phoenix Ranger Nathan is still sealed away.

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I know.
I was mostly making a point for the sake of anyone that comes into it new.
Largely for the fact that they're both named Nathan

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How did you do that infinet comment thing you just?

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every comment has a number that's associated with it and comments can be edited I'm not sure how to explain it after that

Comment posted by Flame Heart deleted Dec 14th, 2017

Good story, but why make so many point of views at the same time? Is this all in the same universe?:rainbowhuh:

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No, different universes. None of them have met yet, but even when they do I'm going to keep this style. Keeps the story fresh, since, even though it's all first person, it focuses on one character.

This is very well written old friend. But rather confusing from all the POVs.

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The switch in POVs is to keep things fresh and interesting, showing multiple situations from different views. There is a constant pattern to who's chapter comes next, so hopefully that helps.

so... why didn't you just put these into six different stories and, i don't know, give them actual plot?

It makes no sense as to why you didn't just make six different stories for each character. It's already proven to be at different time periods, so why have them in the same story? I might as well just skip to the chapters that feature the one I like, but I shouldn't, because this shouldn't be one single story.

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Writing them all as separate stories was getting tedious the first time I did it, especially since the situation would make no sense if one of the characters came into a battle mid fight unless you've read both stories. Wrtting them all separately also made it hard to keep them all on track, and I would also ignore some of my characters. This method is a way to help me ensure everything stays neat and orderly.

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Though in a separate comment I did address why I've made them all into one story, I would like to say to this one that all of them share the same plot. It wouldn't make any sense to write six different books when they're all the same story.

I suppose I could structure it like this; say you're reading Alduin's stories, but then he encounters Gale. If you want o know who Gale is, you'll have to transfer over to his story and read everything up to that point, and about whoever he meets up with, to understand what's going on, and that was too much work for some readers, and it was far too messy in my opinion. Keeping them all in one story keeps everything orderly and structured, and that makes it easier for readers to stay with the plot.

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Whoa dude, the story just started. Give the guy some time to establish everything.

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Considering how a few readers have gotten confused, I have decided to add a label to each chapter to make it easier to tell.

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... *click* ... well... s:yay:, now that thought's going to be stuck in my head now...

So should I have read your other displaced stories first before this one? I thought it was a remake of a displaced dragon.

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It's a remake of all of them. You don't have to read any of the previous ones if you don't want to, as this was rebuilt from the ground up.

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