So, I go to Comic Con, dressed as Kel'Thuzad in his lich form. Well, it was sort of missing his phylactery, and boy was I hoping to get it here. Lucky for me, a salesman, dressed as the Merchant from Silent Hill, (I assumed he too was cosplaying.) happened to have a really good version of Kel'Thuzad's phylactery, and cheap. I purchased it, despite the nag of being genre-savvy telling me not to, and now I'm Kel'thuzad in the middle of an Equestrian Gang War. Lovely. Ah, well, at least I have the real Kel'Thuzad to help me out, and the Warcraft 3 Kel'Thuzad voice. A Displaced tale.
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I hate to sound like an asshat, but please keep in mind that characters you're trying to portray if you're going to borrow them.... You're writing Kel'thurzad so far out of character it almost hurts to look at. Again, please forgive my rudeness, but comeon man...
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Oh no, you don't sound like an ass. In fact, I was hoping someone would have an idea on how to make him a little more in character. I don't know how to have him in-character without him just fucking off into a mental corner.
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My advice, go play WC3's Human and Undead campaigns again and then FT's Undead campaign. Get a feel for his character and personality, and then apply that to your story.
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Alright, took a moment to replay those moments, and tried to make him somewhat more within his character. Tell me if it's better or worse now.
more plz
I can see something interesting happening later on in this.
I feel like someone used "Locate City"