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Once I stole forty cakes and I did not give them back!

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Twilight thought the Breezies were just a myth. But when Spike begs her to turn him into a pony, a spell she uses turns him into one of the mythical fairy ponies.

NOTE: This is kind of one-shot, if that's the word, because I'm just going to post it and not edit it much. It's just for cute fun. I was watching a video of G3 ponies and there were these tiny fairy ponies called Breezies and I thought they were cute so I wrote this.

*THIS IS NOT A SHIPPING STORY. I do not like the Spike/Rarity ship as he is a little boy and she's a grown woman. Please do not try to claim it is.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 14 )

First! Pretty cool story bro. I can haz moar?

Not bad. Interested to see where this goes.

One-shot would usually mean a one chapter short story, so I don't think that's what you mean...

Also, shouldn't Spike be tagged as a character?

Oh right! I just thought he'd be included in the tag, but it's main 6 not main 7. :facehoof:

Oh and Wind Whistler is great. The best pony ever! :yay:

I tried to put a bit more effort into this chapter. :scootangel:

516456 Yeah, easy mistake to make, he's part of the main group half the time so I tend to think of him that way.

516464 Oh yay! :yay: Another Wind Whistler fan! I have a huge soft spot for characters who are the voice of reason, or just see what needs to be done and do it, or have huge vocabularies, or talk either too much or too little, or are just generally nerd-ish. Wind Whistler's all that and a bag of chips. :heart:

On a side note, if you could try to use the reply button in the upper right corner of comments you reply to (it should make a string of numbers come up in the comment box), that'd help me a lot, 'cause that way I get a notification and will be sure to see it. It was an exceptional case of good luck that I noticed this story again so quickly without one, while I was browsing the latest updates, and actually read the comments again. And yeah, now to read the new chapters! Yay!

Twi: "I should send a letter to...oh wait." :rainbowlaugh: Oh, I had a good laugh at that. You know, I can't actually think of another fic I've read where something like this has happened...I'm sure there must have been some where it wasn't as central to the plot, but it seems really underused now that I think about it. Twilight not being able to ask the Princess's advice on a problem because the problem is something wrong with Spike immediately makes it more interesting...

Ah, jeez, I know it's a pain to do it right, but it's lame to have Zecora make an appearance but not make her rhyme...I guess it's a decent example of what she might be like if she didn't, though.

Still an entertaining read, despite the various ways it gives away the lack of effort put into it...

521547 DOH! Didn't realize I could do that. :facehoof:

I'll try to put a bit more effort into it, thanks for the feedback. :yay:

wats a breezie?:rainbowhuh::derpyderp2::rainbowderp::unsuresweetie::applejackunsure:

He wants to be a pony! :pinkiesmile:
Seems alright to me!

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