Nope, you went somewhere you weren't supposed to be 'cause you're a nosey bastard and walked through her test portal. So no, this really isn't a 'Twilight screws up a spell' story.
I was feeling a bit like a victim at this point, regardless
"of the fact that it's my own damn fault for deciding to stick my fat proboscis into the business of whoever was causing purple light to come from the equipment shed I wasn't supposed to be going in."
me to feel the first pangs of anger about being yanked from my life
Yanked? Yanked?! NOBODY FUCKING YANKED, PULLED, PUSHED, COMPELED, LURED, OR EVEN FUCKING SUGGESTED YOU GO INTO, THE OBVIOUSLY SUSPICIOUS PURPLE LIGHT!!! If you had walked into a storage shed at my high school to investigate a strange blue light you'd have gotten your nose broke. You did not interrupt the weekly poker game... or my pipe time! Why did I smoke a pipe in high school instead of cigs? Fuck you that's why! ... No seriously, that was why. Some variation of 'fuck you, Caveman smash' or 'why the fuck not' depending on whether you were interrupting me.
Now, to Saltybedspackle instead of Mason.
As she spoke, she had the same kind of voice that I remember from watching those old movies with people from the south. Like she would say "mint-julep" or "Oh my stars" at any moment.
Rarity.... doesn't sound anything like a southern belle. Cherry Jubalie sounds like a southern belle. Rarity sounds like a rich bitch from a northern country club at best.
What I want to know is, how old is Scootaloo compared to him? I mean, I feel like the cops are going to bust down my door for just reading this. But I want to know what happens.
"Mason! I think you'll find these garments much better than that rag you've been wearing. I rather enjoyed crafting these to your proportions... It's been so long since I've been challenged."
I let go of the door, took a step into this room and took a closer look at the box. It was grass alright. The light from the sconces shimmered against the vibrant dark green blades. Was this...?
I expected there to be Three Seashells next to the grass. You guys know what I am talking about.
I fear this poor kid will lost virgin soon.
It seems every chapter you show a bit more improvement. Keep it up
A Iguana with wings hmmmmm....time to photoshop!
5588236 Haha I kinda wanna see that too.
Rarity dyed her mane blue?
Nope, you went somewhere you weren't supposed to be 'cause you're a nosey bastard and walked through her test portal. So no, this really isn't a 'Twilight screws up a spell' story.
"of the fact that it's my own damn fault for deciding to stick my fat proboscis into the business of whoever was causing purple light to come from the equipment shed I wasn't supposed to be going in."
Yanked? Yanked?! NOBODY FUCKING YANKED, PULLED, PUSHED, COMPELED, LURED, OR EVEN FUCKING SUGGESTED YOU GO INTO, THE OBVIOUSLY SUSPICIOUS PURPLE LIGHT!!! If you had walked into a storage shed at my high school to investigate a strange blue light you'd have gotten your nose broke. You did not interrupt the weekly poker game... or my pipe time! Why did I smoke a pipe in high school instead of cigs? Fuck you that's why!
...
No seriously, that was why. Some variation of 'fuck you, Caveman smash' or 'why the fuck not' depending on whether you were interrupting me.
Now, to Saltybedspackle instead of Mason.
Rarity.... doesn't sound anything like a southern belle. Cherry Jubalie sounds like a southern belle. Rarity sounds like a rich bitch from a northern country club at best.
What I want to know is, how old is Scootaloo compared to him? I mean, I feel like the cops are going to bust down my door for just reading this. But I want to know what happens.
Uhh... I may not be an editor, but I found this.
I believe you can figure this out from here, just sayin'.
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I couldn't help but laugh at this comment... I get your point though
This chapter disturbed me... A rare occurrence, let me tell you.
"Mason! I think you'll find these garments much better than that rag you've been wearing. I rather enjoyed crafting these to your proportions... It's been so long since I've been challenged."
Subtle Rarity, real subtle.
This was a awesome ,sweet ,and funny read.
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U gonna say that for every chap?
I'm liking the story so far. So, I'll be posting any errors I find in the comment section if you don't mind ^_^
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Amen to that.
SHE LIES!!!
although it's a little annoying how readily they use the slang "man" both audibly and in thought...
I expected there to be Three Seashells next to the grass. You guys know what I am talking about.