Time, is something that I do not have to spare. The waters of my life is slowly dripping away before me. I cannot stop my inevitable death. It approaches me like an old friend. Patiently waiting as my life ebbs away. I do not fear death. I welcome it, with open hooves. But... Before I die, there is one wish that I hope to see fulfilled. It might prove difficult, even impossible. However... I no longer have anything to lose. And I hope to at least find some form of comfort before I leave this world, forgotten and swept under the drain.
I wish to meet my love, Princess Luna.
Chapters (1)
*silently cries in a corner* Oh my gosh so perfect.
~Flow
Well done (added to Sad Luna)
Whelp, didn't need those feelings anyway
Well...I-I...Now I'm an emotional wreck...I'm going to go curl up in my bed a cry for a bit...
THE FEELS!
Emotional music to compound the feels.
I absolutely loved it.
Few spelling and grammar errors here and there, and I felt like it could have been longer to give more of an emotional impact.
The scene of him declaring his love needs to be rewritten, it's just cheesy as all hell.
5230727 I did some editing! I agree, there was a lot of errors, (I must double check) Hope you like this newer one!
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If you like I can put it into a gdoc for you and fix the errors
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Would you really? I'll appreciate it a lot. Never really had anyone edit stuff for me before.
THANK YOU!!
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I don't mind, but you should get a go-to editor.
If you want it done today, drop a donation >>HERE<<, otherwise I'll do it when I can be bothered. That can take anywhere from a couple days to a few weeks
This story is almost like an incident that occurred in my life. She was beautiful and funny and I was strong and loyal. But that one day when the grim reaper decided to take her away due to an odd type of cancer I wept. After reading this my heart aches for the one I loved and her precious smile. R.I.P Lauren may you live on forever.