Diehard Brony/Whovian. Discord is best villain, Fluttershy is best canon pony, and askdiscordwhooves is best pony (check him out on tumblr). any questions? Hope to be a valuable member here!
OC-Centric Story: Winter Gale and Scootaloo share a bunk in the Ponyville Orphanage, unknown to the rest of the CMC; or anyone else in Ponyville, for that matter. Winter hasn't been there as long as her friend, but they're really close, and Winter is wishing for something more. When that doesn't happen, she allows herself down a dark path, leading to spilled blood and damaged friendships.
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Welp?
Welp not my friend this is a nice concept you have running here. I was slightly confused who got knocked out because scootaloo was going to school and stuff but then realised it was your oc (I believe welp) when I re -red it. I tend to read things fast by accident (and boy do I miss things)
Aside from my reading abilities I like this in fact i really like this. I like the idea and the fact that scootaloo is in an orphanage home actually appeals to me so that's a plus!
Also I love the name Winter. So nice and calming (I must stop watching frozen)
Aside from that I would love to see more development in the next chapter on backstory or winter and scoots friendship or something but until then I say this is worth a 4/5 spike moustache rating.
5194829 I'm glad you enjoyed it! I know I need to put more of the backstory into the actual story, but that also happens to be a key plot point, which I hand out sparingly. While this AU is much like the show, it is a bit darker, and the backstory will correspond with such views. I hope the story continues to receive at least 4 out of five moustaches, and I appreciate the thoughtful comment!
also, never stop watching frozen. ever.
5196535
Well said whovian well said.