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Chase123


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Well, every filly has problems at school.

Like she stole my necklace, or she teased me.

Well, Rainbow Dash, the tough little filly, will face a scene where she might be in a duel with a loss of her own.

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I'm not going to leave an upvote nor a downvote...

But I feel this story is lacking a little substance. I like the issues its tackling, and overall the emotions and writing is very good - but there isn't enough substance to give me a good picture of exactly what is going on.

I encourage you to expand this piece a little. Flesh it out and give me more details on exactly what is happening.

I had to be tough, so know would see emotions in me.

Know? Sure that shouldn't be "no one"?

Where did you get the icon for your avatar?

Comment posted by Chase123 deleted Jun 20th, 2015
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