When you meet a pretty girl you like, what happens next? Does a huge love story spark out? Or does a deep tragedy happen? Or is it ignored?
Love is weird, and this describes of how love is most of the time for some folks.
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This needs proofreading, but it definitely has the right material.
It could use proofreading, as Shadow of the Night said. I still like it. Good job.
So... they end together as the mutual feeling of missing AJ and AB? and grateful withing each other??? Or I missing something?
5334707
No.
It's supposed to describe how Big Mac learned to live again...
In a say, Rainbow "helps" Big Mac get out of his depression and try to move on...
But, no, there isn't supposed to be a relationship with Mac and Rainbow, orany gratefulness, cause I don't think I implied on Rainbow returning the love..
Please note any errors that made you misunderstand, I will happily fix them, and when my editor has time, I'll ask for a complete on this..
5334925 the jumps of time were not that clear, and some (,) was what give me the general impresion of that idea.