The Zealot
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Well. A threesome involving two futas and a femboy with excessive cum. I feel like I'm dreaming. These are my favorite kinks and I had to read this despite it being the middle of class (teachers don't really care and no one wanted to know what I was doing, so it was safe). The story was, fairly good. A lot better than most stuff. Usually when I find that rare fiction that appeals to me in the kinks, it's usually badly done. But this was good, despite being rough around the edges. By that I mean you really cut to the chase and gave no reason as to why the protagonist did what he did other than "it felt right". There was no character building either, but sometimes, that's okay. Sometimes I just want a good clopfic without boring character development and you provided. It was also humorous, so extra points for that. And you say this was your first attempt at clop? You did a great job if that's true. Although, in my opinion, it could've used more details, like the smells of their genitals, or more descriptions to really drag out that build-up, the fast pace of it was nice for moments when you want to get to the good part quickly. And it leaves room for the reader to imagine their own details. So I'd say this was very well done. I will definetly come back to this sometime again.
"9/10. It shreked my Gunnar Optics" - xXx Epic Sax Guy xXx
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Hoh my gawd I love you so much.
And thanks for the suggestions! If I ever get the nerve to write another clopfic I'll definitely take them into consideration.
Side note, I feel for ya about the clop. If I ever find anything that appeals to me it's usually really silly, and I can't read it.
~Have a wonderful day.
Zealot, i must say that this has reached a spot in my top 10 clop, you've managed to land on a couple of my kinks and have done it well, and too me it seems like Nevermore ends up being a sub for the princesses which honestly, is kind of a fantasy of mine
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~Aw, thank you so very much. Also, I know right? Doesn't it just seem like it'd be wonderful for the princesses to take care of you?
Well, I'm glad you've enjoyed my little story, and I hope you have a wonderful day.~
Does this happen to be inspired by the biblical story of the woman on the roof? Remarkable similarities if it is a coincidence.
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I uhm... I've never read the Bible.
*Prays the church people don't murder him*
5111661 No worries bro. I figured you might have because of the name 'Zealot'
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Yeah, that makes sense I guess... It's from Star Craft, by the way.
Dammit, now I have to read that story.
5138644 Just make sure you have constructed sufficient pylons first...
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Indeed, sufficient pylon construction is a very important part of daily li-
*You must construct additional pylons*
GODDAMMIT!
5146675 and that is why you must constuct excess pylons based on (current pylons divided by 4 + current pylons divided by 10) rounded upwards
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I find this to be very useful, thank you good sir.
first and only? naw man you should make a sequel or something perhaps , not a half bad set up here.....
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Well, I might write something unrelated later... still trying to write this chapter of my main story.
how'd he end up on the roof to begin with i wana know
5710932 The magic of storytelling. And this one pegasus guy in bar downtown was a total cunt.
I think a sequel is in order, incorporation some of B Stall's suggestions, perhaps with some BDSM as well.
Praise be the glorious dicks! Because this is one heck of an awesome story.