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Hodgepodge
"Darling darling darling!" said Twilight.
Hodgepodge
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This description. I'm already in love with this story. xD
is it weird i guessed which one it was.
Well, after reading it. I have to say, while I did love it. The guy's dialogue got repetitive fairly quickly. It seemed to almost all be "a good slave doesn't/shouldn't/always" "because I'm a good slave" and the like. While you may have been going for a mind break type scenario, it comes off more as if he's there willingly and enjoys it and it's just a kinky D/s relationship rather than actually being kept as a sex slave or anything. She could've been rougher or done something he seemed against but accepted if you were going for broken.
Overall, still loved it. It just got a bit repetitive. Other than that, very minor/personal complaint in that you described her cock fairly strangely. Just a tube is kind of boring/unnatural, and, imo, the flare is one of, if not, THE best part of horsecocks.
That Chapter Title. CATCHY AND SORE. Lol
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....how is it you know this?
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How do I know what?
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That.
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I mostly meant aesthetically, but, anyway there are these things called dildos. If we're talking about how it actually feels in a human, the flat ass head is one of the worst parts lmao.
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.....oh....
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Are you like, new to the fandom?
Is this your first clop fic?
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Nah. It's just that I was baffled out by your weirdly specific description.
dat smile on her face
it's so radiantly smug
not sure if afraid
After reading this, I want vomit
You damn fillycons!