"Darling darling darling!" said Twilight.
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this is awful cause' pinkie pie is so innocent
but it's good cause of the writing stye
dude. this is just... you know waht i mean
WHY THE BUCK DID YOU WRITE THIS!?!?
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One might also ask 'why the buck did you /read/ this'... The warnings make it pretty clear what happens.
Hmmm. What happened to Pinkie in Without Magic was worse.
Dude you could at least make pinkamena fight back and win or SOMETHING
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Thanks, I'm glad you appreciated it :)
This should have an Anal chapter. Nuff' said.
You have somehow managed to make a story that deserves all the likes and all the dislikes.
Good job.
This is terrible. And awesome.
mfw
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This video is my reaction to my own writing a lot of the time.
Very well written.
WHY THE HELL WOULD PINKIE PIE DESERVE THIS?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
I couldn't tell if that was an error near the end or not, but pretty good writing. The only thing I didn't care for as much was the scene with the mother. It didn't flow or make much sense from what little context we got. The purpose of that scene was to kill the reader's any sense of hope as the scene begins.
But the comparisons between events and descriptions are nicely done and easy to remember thusly so. That is not easy to do. Full use of the 5 senses also very good.
Wow.. very descriptive and well done executed.. i have to say it is very well done.. i enjoyed your style and this poor pinkamena story.. have my approval and thanks for sharing this piece :3
uhh.
uhhhhhh.
uhhh.
:(
i expected more like the mother joining in making pinkie eat her out while daddy rapes her