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FabulousDivaRarity
I'm a Proud ABDL mommy. Writer of padded pony fics, a lot of fics about Shining Armor and his mom, several about Rainbow Dash and her family, and far more mom stories than you can imagine.
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Very nice. Well-written and I'm glad you included a lot of the associated emotions with such an ordeal. Also the simple behaviour of her attacker. The only thing I'd say would be to try to find a more poignant thought to end on, a punchy statement or implication of what might happen going forward. Even just rearranging it to describe her hope for a certain type of sleep before stating that she did sleep, perhaps?
Anyways, just trying to give you a proper comment. Takeaway message: this was hot ^_^
I like the focus on Rarity's thought process; most fics concentrate more on the physical act, so this made a nice change of pace.
*<>* umm how meh ask this ...could we get a sequel where rarity gets rutted by th pack in a frenzy
I don't usually like rape but, this is good, it's really good.
She probably deserved it tbh
This is actually amazing sorry. I wouldn't mind knowing what happened to rarity after this considering chances of her being rescued are next to non most likely out cum is she lives the rest of her days that Diamond dog breeding b****.