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Aduro


Well, some of you may know me from around the internet, most of you probably won't. I'm a romance writer on Deviantart, who also seeks to get published

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Suddenly this thing is missing a whole ton of chapters but my "To Read" chapter counter just went up

3683344 Its a full on rewrite. Its the same story, just rewritten.

When is this story coming back, I miss it sooooooo much!

4137026 I'm not exactly sure...I've kinda lost interest in MLP.

That's a shame, it's understandable, but a shame. Hope all goes well

4141666 But...so you know, I am doing a 'remake' of the MLP universe to an extent. Its now a single kingdom in the world I designed.

Really?:trixieshiftright: do tell?
I am interested

4141910 Well, I'm still generally working on it. But it requires me to remake the characters and the general ideas. They're far less childish.

4148015 well, I'm looking forward to it:pinkiehappy:
Please when it's fin make a blog or even message me because this will be amazing I'm sure!

4149197 Hehe. It'll be pretty damn good.

4151500 Check my blog here. You'll see more info.

Update soon please :D

4213825 I already said this in my blog...

I left the fandom.

Well, that escalated quickly

4579443 Of course it did. How else would someone like Silver escape?

4579633 I know it's in his nature, not only does he succeed and escape but also got some action in the process

“Don't you ever knock!” Luna roared in her Canterlot voice.

Celestia: Nope! :trollestia:

By the gods.... Silver knocked up Nightmare moon :rainbowlaugh:

4661312 DING DING DING! WE HAVE A WINNER!

Called it! :pinkiehappy:

Well, Silver's fucked...:rainbowlaugh:

4714096 In thirteen different colors too mind you.

Man, you're really cranking out these updates. I like it. :twilightsmile:

4733730 Well, the story is completely written. Which means, I can update it daily until its done.

4733774 There are a total of 19 chapters. I hope you enjoy them.

Anti up bitch! Nightmare's after Child support!:rainbowlaugh:

4733966 Hehe. She is. I'd also appreciate a few more comments even though this story IS completely written.

Love is one fickle bitch.

Time to make peace with Luna, Nightmare. It's the only way to ensure you and your foal's survival.

4744646 Just continue to read...you'll see what happens.

4744827

Well post the next chapter already! I hate being left in suspense:flutterrage:

4745092 I have my rules; One Chapter a day.

If emerald knocks up Luna, I'm gonna rage... and then continue reading

4750046 Not yet, no. Don't worry. Luna's not going to get pregnant. Yet.

silver you poor bastard

4764559 Yep. But he had it coming.

Good ending! Wonder what happens to Nightmare Moon afterwards.

4846813 When I decide to write the sequel, you will find out.

There are SO many paragraphs that could have been cut to make this chapter more engaging. Just because you can stretch out an entire chapter with exposition and inner thoughts doesn't mean you HAVE to! I mean, what's the point of writing an entire paragraph asking questions about Nightmare Moon's identity that the audience can easily ask THEMSELVES without said paragraph, if you were going to follow it IMMEDIATELY after this paragraph with a line of dialogue bringing up the EXACT SAME QUESTIONS YOU ALREADY POINTED OUT!!!

In the censored words of the immortal Yatzee "THIS IS NOT GOOD STORYTELLING! You're suppose to WEAVE exposition into the narrative, not hand the audience a #### glossary as they walk into the theatre!"

4952692 Sadly these were the earlier parts of this story. I realize and accept I made a number of mistakes in the first 3-4 chapters of this story before it really improves. I also admit that I have a bad habit of repeating myself.

I'd also like to add this for you: Every writer has their own unique style. Sometimes though it takes several stories to fully develop it.

issue. She hasn't been to Canterlot Castle. She and Tia lived in the everfree forest castle. how do you mess that up?

5169692 Yeah...forgive my mistakes...no story is perfect.

5335755 Does have two M rated scenes in it. Yes. So it can be considered as such.

:pinkiegasp: if you can guess whats sexual about this emote you win a cookie!

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