This Confusing Attraction

EStronger Together
MLP: FiM
Romance
Sad
Slice of Life
After sharing an especially special moment, Rarity and Fluttershy decide what to do next.
Fluttershy
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Fluttershy is confused by this new-found feeling that she is experiencing. Should she express it? Or would it ruin everything if she did?

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beirirangu

beirirangu #1 · Oct 4th, 2014 · 6 · ·

That's it? It just ends right there? ...

Windlife

Windlife #2 · Oct 4th, 2014 · · 11 ·

Are you going to keep goin with this story if you ddo please add me alicron OC he is realyl coll aand you would like him so would lotsw of people like the sotyry a lot.

Eonflare

Eonflare #3 · Oct 4th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Well, that was an abrupt ending. Sounds like Twilight is being a bit overprotective.

goaway

goaway #4 · Oct 4th, 2014 · · ·

Dear diary,

Capital D for Diary.

Ever since that day I've been attracted over to the library

Over is unnecessary.

I cant use that one,

Missing apostrophe.

happy,or if

Space after the comma.

I can last this horribly beautiful mess.

Deal with.

each-others

Unnecessary hyphen.

Interesting story. Could be better with some editing, but I have to give it props for being different.

The blacks

The blacks #5 · Oct 4th, 2014 · 1 · ·

5094872 Lmao dude check your spelling :D

BewhoUr

BewhoUr #6 · Oct 4th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Some what of an interesting story, as usual.
First of all, I do not care what you say, you are putting this on hiatus. Its to good to end right there.
Secondly, I love the storyline. Flutterspike is just so…. Daww!
and this is coming from a spikedash shipper
There are some grammar mistakes, and it could have been a little slower paced, but overall its great!
"Twilight won't let Spike date ponies because its not scientifically safe!!!"
Nailed it.
And for the record, you showed Rarity and Fluttershy's bond like I couldn't do.
Now let me go into my closet and patiently wish death apon Twilight sparkle.

LiveLife

LiveLife #7 · Oct 4th, 2014 · 1 · ·

5094872
I'm sorry, but I'm not going to do that. It just doesn't fit in the plot!

LiveLife

LiveLife #8 · Oct 4th, 2014 · 1 · ·

5095264
Just edited...I wrote this really late at night! Please forgive me!

LiveLife

LiveLife #9 · Oct 4th, 2014 · 1 · ·

5095022
I feel like that is how she would react...

LiveLife

LiveLife #10 · Oct 5th, 2014 · · ·

27 LIKES!!!!???? i THINK I MIGHT FAINT!

Sand Storm

Sand Storm #11 · Oct 5th, 2014 · · ·

So it a X X short Fic?

LiveLife

LiveLife #12 · Oct 5th, 2014 · · ·

5101149
No...Just Rarity X Fluttershy!

LiveLife

LiveLife #13 · Oct 5th, 2014 · · ·

5101149
Well...that's for the sequel! For this one, you are spot-on!

Sand Storm

Sand Storm #14 · Oct 6th, 2014 · · ·

5102323 So then the next well be about Rarity and Futtershy having to think about the whole 'Spike can't date a mare because his a dragon'. For me it seems as the two well fall in love with each one while still having feelings for Spike and well try to talk to Twilight about the whole thing but soon finds out that she has feelings for her little brother/best friend which would lead to a triangle love...thing.

But if that not the case then you could do a pre-sequel with Spike's POV where you could say the Spike actaully has feelings for Shy as well but is confused on who is he really in love with...Rarity or Fluttershy...or maybe both?

Whatever it going to be I do hope Spike and the two mares would be happy in the end.

LiveLife