A long time has passed since Cloud left Equestria behind. Now the time for the return is growing near, but what mental scars does the lost paragon carry? And can a romance shattered by foolishness regrow its roots?
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...p-pinkie go bye bye? Why pinkie need to go bye bye?
Noooooo
Oh no! Pinkie's dead! That's not good.
So he's basically a super saiyan now, right?
Given there is no Tragedy tag, I'm assuming she either isn't actually dead, or that you are bringing her back to life.
If not, I hate you, and I'm done with this story.
Uh-oh. Cloud is angry. It's likely that this will not end well for anyone caught in that storm. This dark turn was inevitable, which is very hard to miss with all the dark undertones in this story, and I find myself fairly satisfied with how it turned out. But what was that about the staff being powerful enough to stop Discord? I can't recall if that was mentioned before in previous chapters...
Oh, well. I guess one more reread amongst many others wouldn't hurt. Keep up the good work author.
7108331 I honestly can't recall which chapter I talk about the properties of Imagination but the gist of it is that due to the fact that it has been imbued with a draconequus soul it cannot be changed into something else by Discord. Somewhere in lore rambles I stated that the one thing a draconequus can't change is another draconequus. Hope that clears it up.
1 I did not enjoy this chapter and I suspect you will receive some dislikes over it.
2 you accurately described just how bad Chrysalis fucked up by messing with a human but I think you made the rage come on a little too slowly
Well... That's one method of unlocking his Paragon powers...
Gonna wait for the twist and hope it doesn't drift into true tragedy waters. Hoping for the best.
It seems that nature itself goes to war for a moment.
I can't remember which characters know about the whole cancer thing that happened.
Is this going to be continued?
7688010 Ah, finally someone calls me on my bullshit. Short answer yes. Long answer the next chapter hovers at around 55-65% complete but as many of my readers (if you have had the patience to stick around) have noticed I have been largely absent. A reason for that... Well life coupled with writer's block is my excuse.
7688021 As a fellow writer, I understand the problems that are presented by the dreaded Writer's Block
Need a new chapter, that cliff-hanger is just mean. Love this series, keep it up!