A long time has passed since Cloud left Equestria behind. Now the time for the return is growing near, but what mental scars does the lost paragon carry? And can a romance shattered by foolishness regrow its roots?
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NOOOOOOO! Curse you cliffhanger
Doesn't Cloud's house float? I thought Swift would freak out a bit.
I see no issue with Swifty deciding to put off dealing with Cloud till another day. If you don't need to pack more weirdness and 'excitement' into a day; don't.
5920321 That will be dealt with in a future chapter, you have my word on that.
ah this is gonna get good
stayclassy
You're bad at grammar and spelling.I see you ending speech with a period when you shouldn't quite often, such as –
In all such cases, it should be a comma instead of a period.
5921429 Thanks, this is the type of criticism I can improve from.