A long time has passed since Cloud left Equestria behind. Now the time for the return is growing near, but what mental scars does the lost paragon carry? And can a romance shattered by foolishness regrow its roots?
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That ending XD
I'm glad they didn't into sitcom cliches of letting a little nonsense spat evolve into something dumb yet massive. The spar was pretty sweet two.
Also... what that a changeling we spotted?
Luna you dolt, yeah I think the entire Bonbon encounter was a changeling. Still, how much is his Paragon blood pushing him to fight at self-destructive levels? Really sucked both ways about Berry, hope he makes it up to her.
Really liked how you were able to show the princesses in a casual situation. Not having to don a regal mask and interact as normal family.
SEXY TIEMS HOOO!!!
anyway, pretty good chapter. tbh i kind of forgot about this story after a while. but im glad i fav'd it.
Keep up the good work!
I think you said 'hoped' instead of 'hopped' once.
6698749 Not unlikely, do you know where by any chance?
6698853 Uhh, I think it was somewhere in or just before the sparring part. I'm not sure. I didn't copy the sentence.
6709091 Fawks? What are you doing here? Did you discover this through a terminal? And how is the vault dweller?