A long time has passed since Cloud left Equestria behind. Now the time for the return is growing near, but what mental scars does the lost paragon carry? And can a romance shattered by foolishness regrow its roots?
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Nicely done. I've seen stories drawing on Star Wars as one of the stories the human tells the ponies, but being the Nightmare Night Act was awesome. Darth Cloud does have a cool right to it. And of course some of the younger crowd would cheer for the bad guy.
My only question: was the lightning Cloud's own trick for spellwork from Luna?
This was a fun chapter to read.
If that was the opening for Nightmare Night then I wonder that they'll close it with.
that was awesome
stayclassy