A long time has passed since Cloud left Equestria behind. Now the time for the return is growing near, but what mental scars does the lost paragon carry? And can a romance shattered by foolishness regrow its roots?
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Aww, filler chapter. Oh well, they're important too... I guess. Can't wait for the action though.
I've been rereading this story, and I've noticed that there've been several instances of run on sentences, use of the wrong words, spelling mistakes, and finally two instances so far where there's a redundant word. Here is the second one.
Redundant 'have'.
It's still a good story though! I like it.