Note: This story is set in Season 4 before Tirek Attacks.
Joseph Taylor is like any other brony, and always dreams of being in Equestria but when he gets his dream granted thanks to a car crash, he finds a very weird surprise in store for him. The Equestria he knew is Gender-flipped, which means the Mane Six, Princesses, Cutie Mark Crusaders etc. are all Males and Ponies like Big Macintosh and Shining Armor are female.
Can he cope with this weird difference? or will this be too awkward and strange for our human?
Chapters (2)
You forgot the Sex-Tag.
What, what up the butt!
>Berry Punch
>Not Bubble Berry
There is two Berry Punches in town now?
I really like the premise of this story.
Elusive is...wierd
. Man, this comment sucks if that's the only thing I can think off this chapter.
...wait...rule 63!?
I like this... I like this a lot...
later he slips up and tells them about the other universe and they already new about it.
love these types of stories because we don't really get to see them that often but I'd prefer it if every character was gender flopped AKA the human being female but i'll take what I can get.
Oh and if Eris isn't with Butterscotch I will find you
also if you want to type it please put in some yaoi.
This isn't bad at all. It could use some proofreading/editing/etc., there are a lot of typos, grammar mistakes and such (you tend to forget periods at the end of sentences, for instance), but it's not too distracting overall. The plot itself isn't exactly new, but interesting nonetheless.
We hardly know anything about Joseph though, other than he's a brony, and supposedly an adult since he was driving a car. Developing his personality a little (but not necessarily his background story on Earth, as no one really cares about that in HiE stories unless it's relevant to the plot) would be nice.
Now it's time for a short review/MST3K/whatever:
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Eenope.
Indeed he is.
>Rainbow Dash
>politeness
>male version
>not hoofbumping the fuck outta you
Here's hoping meeting Macareina will have you reconsider.
So overall, this isn't a bad story, but not really a story in itself so far, more like a prologue. I'd like to see where this is going.
Also R63 Spike is Barb(ara?), and Pïnkie is Bubble Berry.
This is a good story.