There is lamp, that holds a Genie, this Genie may grant one wish. This genie is a human trapped in the lamp as punishment by Princess Celestia and all that ever has been wished is selfish wishes. But then he meets Twilight Sparkle: a selfless and friendly mare.
Just how will this go? Read and find out.
Intresting very intresting indeed
To do what I've wanted to do for a thousand years, get revenge on princess Celestia.... SHE WILL NEVER HAVE CAKE AGAIN! This time she's sticking to her diet
Interesting.
I like
Need moar.
Pls?
I would like to see how the princesses react XD
SEQUAL.......well if you don't mind I mean.
5791350 I agree this needs an sequel but they should take there time with it we don't need an bad one for an great fic.
>> TheDawsonator1 and you great job this was the first fic in months to make me laugh.
In-your-endo
5791940 (powers up attack infused with a bitch slap with Elements of Harmony power) I'd start running.
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"I... I'm free. Quick, wish for something crazy! Like, say "I want the Nile!" Wish for the Nile!"
"Umm... I wish for the Nile."
"NO WAY!"
Oh, how we all miss you, Robin Williams.
Also SEQUEL! Now? Please?! :fluttersad:
He was free of the lamp, but then Twilight turned to him. "Any self-respecting genie should be in a real lamp and grant three wishes." He felt himself fade into smoke and then into the gold lamp next to Twilight. "Beyond infinite books, what else do you want, Twilight," said Spike. "I'll have to think on it," said Twilight as she placed the lamp into one of her desk's drawers.
Wow This was good. A very unique take on human in Equestria. Well done
The concept has a lot of potential. You could make an amazing fic if you expand upon it.
5791350 "Sorry Celestia"
"TO THE MOOOON!"
I notice you seem to be missing a LOT of punctuation. Periods at the end of sentences and commas inside dialogue tags.
You need a comma in the dialogue tags for like, everything you have that doesn't end with a ! or ? And a period at the end of every sentence.
So I expect when Ben pops in to see Celestia, she tries to imprison him again.
OH! Maybe Ben can imprison Celestia in that lamp for 1078 years as payback? Or curse her so that all cake that crosses her lips turns to broccoli?
There isn't more to this, is there?
I hope there is...
Maybe not innuendo, but I do feel the need to make a reference.
Unlimited Cosmic Power!
Itty Bitty Living Space
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Phenomenal Cosmic Powaaaah!!!
itty bitty living space
5792545 Can you make a sequel to this one? One that shows Ben talking to Celestia?
I read the genies' lines as Robin Williams. Is that weird?