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Now to go read that story, make a new shipping chart, and begin planning the various connection points out completely... Should only take a day or so.
I'm with Kenny here.
I am SOOOOOOO totally with Kenny on this one.
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Sounds fun. Just know that the ones I plan on doing are less obvious than the ones I don't.
Okay. As a fresh reader, I have a perspective for you.
Chapter 62 and 63 are crossovers. This is fine. Great, even!
But I have no idea who these characters are. They just appear, and Vincent and Lucy seem to know all of them already, so their identities/relationships are not explained. I get the veneon. Another Subject. Got it! Escapee, even. Cool! Good explanation for a new eeveelution I haven't heard of before!
Everyone else? I'm totally and utterly confused. If they knew Valerie in That Place That Shall Not Be Named, and she is an escapee, she escaped before Arceus broke the rest of them out. So how do they know all these other people/pokemon associated with her at first meeting? This is Vincent and Lucy's story, so if they met these folks before, we should have seen it.
At least one of them is a former human (maybe two? or three counting characters mentioned in passing but who aren't actually present? Confused!) so I know Vincent and Lucy can't possibly have met them before.
I'm getting used to the introduction of new characters via the frequent crossovers in this 'verse, but this instance needs a little more introduction in their introduction!
I'm sure I'll figure it out eventually/when I read this other story you crossed over with (it's now next on my list because it cropped up like this and I MUST KNOW!!) but I thought I ought to give you the feedback. :)