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wow, someone adjust quickly don'tcha?
Oh... and good luck exporting everyone...
Word of advice, never put all your trust in Google translate: NEVER!
Aside of that, great chapter, I really like this take on the mafia, most people go with the 'cossa nostra' but thisone looks quite american, or well, eequestrian...?
SSSSSSSAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNDDDDDDDSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSs
Yeah, exporting creatures you have no training or real nohow of isn't the best idea...
Loved this chapter. It's nice to see other experiments get to have happy lives.
You asked for it...
"mobile" means "capable of movement" in a very generic way, it's not really used in italian, you should replace it with "libera", meaning 'free'. The rest is... ok, if this is meant to be a song, but sounds a little weird.
This one made me sweatdrop. Italian do not use "-s" for plural, you meant "stronzi", with the final '-i'.
You probably put "damn" in the translator, and it traduced it with the verb, which is wrong. You meant "maledetta" as adjective of 'reason', ragione, but in Italian is jot really used. You should write "maledettamente buona", 'damn good', it's the correct colloquial form.
The rest, surprisingly enough, is not that wrong, even if it sounds a lil odd, mainly for different use of words between the two languages. If you ever have to put italian again, maybe pm me first with the sentences, ok?
Peace out!
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Thank you for the editing, and as for the song...
I'll just admit to pulling it from somewhere and leave it at that.
And by now, if you've read any of my other stories, you should recognize this for the threat/warning/promise it is:
Sure, Mary can make another appearance!
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It will sound a little rude, but I can't say I have read any of them, sorry about that. I'll guess you meant that you will use and abuse of my help until one ofthe two doesn't drop dead
Bring it on.
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Let's just say you've given me an idea.
It's a decidedly bad one for Mary.
Hoopa- I've got thirty bits on Axle destroying them, ten on Abby cursing them, forty on Vincent and or Luke snapping their minds, and fifty bits on at least one of them getting eaten!
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Question:
If Luke breaks Business Mind and feeds her to Axle after he destroys their main base of operations while Abby curses Quick Notes, what does that do to your betting scheme?
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Hoopa- .... dammit, I'm losing a lot of bits, I'll have to dip into the national treasury again if that happens.
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But seriously, with me, the obvious bets are never the ones to make.
I mean, occasionally I'll fall into overused traps, but the ones that pay off are the things you don't think of.
5024217 ...I suspect at least one head is going to be exploding. Like this.
5028608 THAT'S A WASTE OF PERFECTLY GOOD JELLO!!!
for those who don't know...