I just write whatever I feel like writing really. Likes: MLP, Pokemon, Steven Universe, Gravity Falls and FNaF. I'm working through my procrastination.
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He has drained the love of ponies like any other, he has done so multiple times, and without consideration or hesitation each time. He has fought, hunted, killed, and deceived. He is a soldier, he has always been a soldier. So why is he now in Ponyville wanting to make friends?
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Oh my god your fucking commas
Wow. What an original concept.
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I haven't really seen that many fics similar, I've seen a couple, but not really many.
And the plot thickens...
This is ridiculously good man. Please keep up with the story. I am extremely interested to find out what happens next!
If it hasn't already been brought to your attention, at the start of the chapter, you said that he didn't have the ability to create an original pony disguise, but then you made him do just that. A suggestion (take it as you will ^ ^) would be to change it to something like "He could create his own disguise, but doing so was highly strenuous, even for a changeling as advanced as the Queen." Apart from that and a couple missing punctuations, a great story with lots of potential that I can't wait to read the rest of!
You may have discovered his secret Twilight...
But you will never get the proof.
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It's because he was able to think of a loophole to making his own disguise, and is able to transform into it easily after that because he remembers what he came up with. Thanks for the suggestion, though. If you have anything to say about the other chapters, critique it always welcome.
Keep on shaping this story please.its nice when changelings aren't all displayed as monsters.
Really like it so far and keep it up :D
I shall wait until another chapter is out.
Btw. Nice job.
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I've seen this story on FanFiction.
I want to make a series if the changeling is successful in be-friending the ponies!
I'm sorry... this is going to sound rude or something.... but
I laughed so hard... it was completely random lol
pls restart series
Yet another story in the sadly dead pile.