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Klonoahedgehog


I'm from Puerto Rico and Mlp is one of my favorite cartoons, my favorite Video Games are Sonic the Hedgehog and Pokemon.

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Thanks to the Element of Magic 3 girls find themselves in the Digital World with one mission: track down the Elements of Harmony that have been scattered across the Digital World. Along the way they will encounter many enemies and rivals just to accomplish that one goal.

I'd really apreciate it if someone would make me another title image.

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If there are any spelling errors i apologized, my first language isn't English.

And i'm also sorry if the chapter itself sucks, whenever i write something i can never think of a good start point basically i can think up most of the storyline but i can't think of a start. :ajbemused:

I basically couldn't think of a better dream sequence, i already had the Falling out of the bed thing at the beginning.

There were also a lot of things i wanted to add but i didn't want to drag this chapter out. Most of it will be put in the next chapter.

prodigious. this is getting exiteing if i must say.

I haven't read this yet, but it looks interesting. I notice from the cover image that you have given Applebloom goggles. I approve. Also judging from the cover image, you seem to have chosen the Season 2 Digivices. Digimon are awesome.

this seems promising, and giving applebloom a coronamon? i always figured he would be celestia digimon, but oh well.

1121742 Yeah, before i wrote this and i talked to people about it they had the same reaction. :trixieshiftleft:

The idea was so that Apple Bloom had a Coronamon and there rival has a Lunamon.

so far the story seems good, but you really could use a proof reader/editor, for it's covered with typos, grammatical errors and confusing and awkwardly fraced sentences.

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Yeah somebody already asked me if he could do it. Once i'm done with the second chapter i'll take him up on hi's offer.
I just don't know how to do it.
Like do i send him the chapter in a message?

I had a little bit of writers block while writing this, the first few bits were hard to do.
I was gonna add a Digimon analyzer sequence for Coronamon's Armor form but i'm not really clever enough to make any Apple puns or jokes.
And i couldn't decide on what song to put in the fight scene but after a while i decided to go with We are xros Heart.
I couldn't even figure out a name for hi's armor form until last minute in fact all 6 armor forms i can't think of names for them.
If anyone has a better name for it post it in the comments. I would really apreciate that.

Also this took so long because i had to get it proof readed and the guy i sent it to was very busy.

I hI'm not really proud of this chapter. :unsuresweetie:

Anyway i added music to this to improve the feeling while you'r reading.

Also blame my internet provider for taking down my internet connection constantly over the past month. I was also gonna add a bit more here but i'l save that for the next chapter. I'll make that one a little longer.

why is the story centered and not left margin??

This is great stuff. I'm a huge fan of digimon, infact i've seen every Series/season. can't wait to read more.

1310688 Sorry, force of habit. I'll edit it right away.

Also i noticed some errors in this when i re read it earlier, but because they amuse me greatly i'm gonna keep them in.

i61.photobucket.com/albums/h62/KnightoftheColossus/ani-phoenix-bashful.gif Also i kinda didn't want to point this out but Twilight and Apple Bloom are supposed to be humans in this. Which makes the talk about hooves kinda weird. But i guess i could make some excuse for it.

I noticed that 3/4 in >.< I thought I fixed those errors after finding them :fluttercry::fluttercry:

Trixie as a digimon emperor analogue. This is awesome

I used the soundtrack from the first season of Yugioh to pump me up to write the first bit in this. Surprisingly, it worked. :derpytongue2:

Also parts of this may seem rushed, i wanted to get this chapter out before season 3 started, maybe i'll come back to this and edit this but for now this is how it stays.

Once again i could use some help thinking up names for these Digimon, i can't think of any and it could really help.


Also i was gonna upload this on Friday but i went to go see Wreck it Ralph. Great movie!

You can tell by the music selection in this one that iv'e been playing a certain game recently.

I was originally gonna have Lunamon destroy those Digimon but then i thought that it's a bit early on to have actual Digimon deaths, and it would have made Lunamon seem a bit too overpowered.

To be honest i don't really like this chapter after looking at it now. I don't know why but it feels kind of rushed but at the same time i feel like i can't anything else to it.

I'm surprised something like this didn't happen in Adventure 02 regarding the digimon's accaptance of the protagonists.

Digimon, my old arch-enemy.

1845980 This is a Digimon story, and I'm a pokèfan, therefore, I have to be unhappy about this story. This rivalry between Digimon and Pokèmon is as old as time.

1846006 I'll never understand how people make those comparisons. I always stuck with the idea that Digimon has a better show and Pokemon has a better game... By the way how do you get that "e" to be like that?

1846039 Just hold down the e button, and a little table thingy will pop up.

1846006 And yet you came to what's obviously a crossover with Digimon.:ajbemused::derpytongue2::rainbowderp::unsuresweetie::facehoof:

I'm calling Laughter! And there's nothing you can do to stop me!

... From calling it.

Very good so far. MUCH better than your other story... *shudders at the memory*
I will tack and follow this and maybe give it a like when I get a few more chapters into it.

1952531 Thanks but right now i'm suffering Writers block.

I love you for writing Digimon.

School now so read later.

Digimon is my favorite TV series of all time, I applud you for doing such a crossover.

1974906 It's my favorite show too. It's the only show where i have almost every episode memorized. :derpytongue2:

I'm really loving this so far, but the typos and grammar mistakes are really distracting. Maybe ask someone to edit it? I would, but I am stuck between 3 constantly updating stories right now, so I'm kinda busy.

2086514 I know a guy, ot just takes him so long to edit them. I feel like i would fall behind if i had people wait for him.

2142935 In this situation i think the second seasons opening fits better.

that ending is from cardfight vanguard I am a fan of cardfight vanguard I even play the game

An interesting take on both series for a crossover.

Love Spike as a purple Agumon :heart::twilightsmile:

And yes, get an editor; I understand having to deal with a different language to write something, but that was a bit hard to read through.:twilightsheepish:

3995537 I had an editor. He just sort of disappeared of the face of the planet.

hey what dos bukermon look like it was't good on his looks :unsuresweetie:

4955263 I might have to draw what hi's design is huh.

Every time I see this fic updated, the digimon theme pops into my heads and makes camp for a few days. They had a really good marketing technique.

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Thanks! :D I didn't think people still read this story.

5456194 I always read yur stories and others yur the best dude:rainbowdetermined2:

love it hope there is a sequel to this story

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