If there are any spelling errors i apologized, my first language isn't English.

And i'm also sorry if the chapter itself sucks, whenever i write something i can never think of a good start point basically i can think up most of the storyline but i can't think of a start.

I basically couldn't think of a better dream sequence, i already had the Falling out of the bed thing at the beginning.

There were also a lot of things i wanted to add but i didn't want to drag this chapter out. Most of it will be put in the next chapter.

prodigious. this is getting exiteing if i must say.

I haven't read this yet, but it looks interesting.  I notice from the cover image that you have given Applebloom goggles.  I approve.  Also judging from the cover image, you seem to have chosen the Season 2 Digivices.  Digimon are awesome.

>>11192841119284 Yeah, yeah they are.  

this seems promising, and giving applebloom a coronamon? i always figured he would be celestia digimon, but oh well.

>>11217421121742 Yeah, before i wrote this and i talked to people about it they had the same reaction.

The idea was so that Apple Bloom had a Coronamon and there rival has a Lunamon.

so far the story seems good, but you really could use a proof reader/editor, for it's covered with typos, grammatical errors and confusing and awkwardly fraced sentences.

>>11255631125563

Yeah somebody already asked me if he could do it. Once i'm done with the second chapter i'll take him up on hi's offer.

I just don't know how to do it.

Like do i send him the chapter in a message?

I had a little bit of writers block while writing this, the first few bits were hard to do.

I was gonna add a Digimon analyzer sequence for Coronamon's Armor form but i'm not really clever enough to make any Apple puns or jokes.

And i couldn't decide on what song to put in the fight scene but after a while i decided to go with We are xros Heart.

I couldn't even figure out a name for hi's armor form until last minute in fact all 6 armor forms i can't think of names for them.

If anyone has a better name for it post it in the comments. I would really apreciate that.

Also this took so long because i had to get it proof readed and the guy i sent it to was very busy.

I hI'm not really proud of this chapter.  

Anyway i added music to this to improve the feeling while you'r reading.

Also blame my internet provider for taking down my internet connection constantly over the past month. I was also gonna add a bit more here but i'l save that for the next chapter. I'll make that one a little longer.

why is the story centered and not left margin??

This is great stuff. I'm a huge fan of digimon, infact i've seen every Series/season. can't wait to read more.

>>13106881310688 Sorry, force of habit. I'll edit it right away.

Also i noticed some errors in this when i re read it earlier, but because they amuse me greatly i'm gonna keep them in.

Image: http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h62/KnightoftheColossus/ani-phoenix-bashful.gif

I noticed that 3/4 in >.< I thought I fixed those errors after finding them

Western digimon is best digimon

Trixie as a digimon emperor analogue. This is awesome

I used the soundtrack from the first season of Yugioh to pump me up to write the first bit in this. Surprisingly, it worked.

Also parts of this may seem rushed, i wanted to get this chapter out before season 3 started, maybe i'll come back to this and edit this but for now this is how it stays.

Once again i could use some help thinking up names for these Digimon, i can't think of any and it could really help.

Also i was gonna upload this on Friday but i went to go see Wreck it Ralph. Great movie!

You can tell by the music selection in this one that iv'e been playing a certain game recently.

I was originally gonna have Lunamon destroy those Digimon but then i thought that it's a bit early on to have actual Digimon deaths, and it would have made Lunamon seem a bit too overpowered.

To be honest i don't really like this chapter after looking at it now. I don't know why but it feels kind of rushed but at the same time i feel like i can't anything else to it.

I'm surprised something like this didn't happen in Adventure 02 regarding the digimon's accaptance of the protagonists.

Digimon, my old arch-enemy.

>>18459711845971 Why?

>>18459801845980 This is a Digimon story, and I'm a pokèfan, therefore, I have to be unhappy about this story. This rivalry between Digimon and Pokèmon is as old as time.

>>18460061846006 I'll never understand how people make those comparisons. I always stuck with the idea that Digimon has a better show and Pokemon has a better game... By the way how do you get that "e" to be like that?

>>18460391846039 Just hold down the e button, and a little table thingy will pop up.

>>18460061846006 And yet you came to what's obviously a crossover with Digimon.

I'm calling Laughter! And there's nothing you can do to stop me!

... From calling it.

Very good so far. MUCH better than your other story... *shudders at the memory*

I will tack and follow this and maybe give it a like when I get a few more chapters into it.

>>19525311952531 Thanks but right now i'm suffering Writers block.

I love you for writing Digimon.

School now so read later.

Digimon is my favorite TV series of all time, I applud you for doing such a crossover.

>>19749061974906 It's my favorite show too. It's the only show where i have almost every episode memorized.

I'm really loving this so far, but the typos and grammar mistakes are really distracting. Maybe ask someone to edit it? I would, but I am stuck between 3 constantly updating stories right now, so I'm kinda busy.

>>20865142086514 I know a guy, ot just takes him so long to edit them. I feel like i would fall behind if i had people wait for him.

>>21429352142935 In this situation i think the second seasons opening fits better.

I guess