Pinkie Pie turned herself into a Lamia and wanted to celebrate this with her friend Twilight Sparkle, in a very "special" way. Twilight will soon find out, that snakes aren't really that creepy and that they can be quite eye catching.
Sorry guys. This is my first time that i post here and i really suck at descriptions. This was originally an RP i did a few months ago, with Mightyshockwave and i thought i post it here. It's one of those shameless hypnofics and since i and Shockwave have no standards, we're probably the only people that like this story.
Joking aside, have fun. Comments are appreciated
Chapters (3)
Ok шнат !!!
Woo, awesome randomness with snakeponies!!!
Gonna be blunt, there were quite a few spelling slips but nothing to take away from the story.
I would like to see some form of follow up, maybe for both endings because who doesn't want to see a) Pinkie controlling the rest of her friends, and b) a room full of mane 6 lamias?
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Thanks for the comment.
Who knows. Maybe i will look deep into my big brain and actually come up with a follow up. Can't guarantee anything though.
Ooh, another hypno writer. Good show.
Can't go wrong with hypnosis. I like that it required more than just a few seconds to have Twilight hypnotized like a lot of hypnofics.
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Yeah, i find it boring in some fics, when the victim is so easily hypnotized. For me, the induction is a very important part of the fic. Seeing how the victims mind crumbles, as the hypnotist sends all these words into your head.
Man, when you said shameless hypnofic, you weren't kidding!
I like it.
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Great that you like it.
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Go ahead. I have nothing against Anthro. Lamia is still Lamia.
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Don't turn this comment section into a Pro/Anti clop discussion, thats not what it's there for.
4893757 Sorry it wasnt my intention, Ill delete the posts
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Yes Bon Bon.
I think this is the first story on FIMfiction to have a lamia in it. I congratulate you.
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That's actually not true. There are several other lamia stories on here, that i was inspired by.
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aw :( in any case, it was really good.
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Thanks.
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Yeah, i know. But i didn't wanted vore, since that would've been too obvious.
Well I was NOT expecting this levels of creepiness this chapter reached in the last few paragraphs...
Well, I just read all the chapters in this...
And while the first chapter got creepy near the end (and I'm not going to comment on the 'Bad End') this ending balanced it right out to nominal creepiness levels! Yay!
Probably won't read this ever again but I'll leave an up-vote just for the experience of reading this!
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Hey, no problem. I know that it's not for everyone and i can even see that some people might be creeped out by it.
Thanks for the upvote though.
I was reading hypnofics and i really want a sequel to the bad end IT WAS JUST SO GOOD
Can you do a sequel? It looks cool!
THIS IS GREAT!
..idk why I like this ending so much lol
I won't say that I liked the bad end, but I do think the good end was sufficiently pinkie-natured.
Not sure that a single instruction to not fear snakes would be sufficient to work like that, but hey, this is magic hypnosis.
Well this was fun, while the good ending did make more sense for Pinkie's character I still like the bad ending just as much cause I'm a sucker
You have pleased Pinkie, BYE!
for these kinda books