Set at the end of "Testing Testing 1, 2, 3", Pinkie picks up on Rainbow's ability to learn while she's flying. Of course this gives her a kinky idea.
This one's for a fan of my other story, Evil Enchantress, which I didn't really like but he did. So I decided to fill my head full of clop and write down the best bits.
Contains mind control and implied sex.
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It may help if you tag the story. Romance would probably work, at bare minimum.
EDIT: scratch that, dark would work best.
4974747 Thank you. That was very helpful.
She really did not need much convincing.
That last paragraph.
Continuation?
4974792
The stuff on the rest of the cards was worse than the stuff I revealed.
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I don't know. There's another story I'm working on which may have a tie to Pinkie (but currently doesn't), but unless there's enough support I don't think I'll make a sequel, or another chapter. Which is sort of like a sequel in a sense cos it'll be with a different pony in a different scenario.
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I think he meant a second chapter, not necessarily a whole separate sequel.
that's one excelent chapter really hope for another. If there's really time for it
4974785 Drop the sex tag, it may be vaguely referenced(if at all), however that doesn't warrant the tag.
Nice, if you are going to continue get Twilight in on the act, then Pinkie's toys can play with each other for their mistress
"Hey,Pinkie how much for a Rarity job?"
"SPIKE!"
.....
Well Lord Willmo I am quite pleased but if possible i would greatly enjoy a couple more chapters, that is if you can be bothered/have the time to make and write/type them.
Please keep up your AWESOME work
Yours truly,
Mr. Zelda C. Brony
4977235 Don't Worry spike! for you it will be free!!
just help me control Twilight
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Thanks for the criticism.
4977235 (i chuckled)
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If you really want me to, I'll try, but I need to think of a scenario for Rarity first.
4977505 might I suggest she make some sort of outfit that allows her to control whomever wears it....
and she gets her mind corrupted by a fake tiara snuck on her head by diamond tiara to make Sweetie Belle's life miserable!
or something like those.... just a thought
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I don't know if I could make it happen. The fact that something didn't immediately come to mind means it probably wouldn't be a good topic for me to pursue.
4977832 i understand...
No criticism....just don't know what to say to that.
4985761 Agreed
This is actually pretty fun to read. Another!
5224260 There will be another, I'm writing one now as a matter of fact, but I've left it for so long that I can't remember what happens for 5/6ths of it.
5228180 Hmmm, well, you wish to co-write or RP something along these lines? Might help with renewing a bit of your writing energy.
5231899 Sure, what do you have in mind?
For shame there wasn't another one, this was rather good.
I kind of wish this one either had a prequel explaining why Pinkie wanted to do this or a sequel/second chapter about the others rescuing RD somehow and snapping her out of Pinkie's control.
8086536 Maybe I'll write it, but I have another story that I haven't finished yet that's still in the pipeline.
8089388 I'm kind of curious as to what that is.
8089400 It's about Yearling gifting Rainbow Dash with a magical book that can alter reality (neither of them know it can do this) and of course, smut ensues.
I've finished two chapters, but I haven't published the ones I've done yet. Should probably get to doing that soon.
8102547 Definitely sounds like it'll be an interesting read, if nothing else.
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