Greatings I am Rathbane (muhahaha) just kidding actually a pretty nice guy with a cool sounding name.
Spira Trance is on the hunt for a rare and unique gem and fortunately for her she possesses hypno magic and her pendant to entrance anypony to help her on her way. Unfortunately for every other pony, Spira Trance is on the hunt for a rare and unique gem and she possesses hypno magic and her pendant to entrance anypony to help her on her way.
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Might want to edit that description, it repeats.
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It's meant be like that for a humor factor.
It was a nice concept. Never going to complain about more hypno. But the hypnosis scenes were pretty much "swing pendant, enslave subject". Induction was almost nonexistent.
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Yeah. I was on a bit of deadline without access to my usual computer room for privacy so the hypnosis suffered. Glad you liked it.
This just leads me to think, what are the other seven items to the Royal Nine?
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I never gave it much thought. Just seemed like a cool name. Though it just screams fanfic fodder doesn't it ^_^
6609710 It feels like this fic could have more chapters where Spira could find the rest of the items. It has a lot of potential, and I think it would be awesome for Rarity: The Shadow Thief to make a come back.
what was the first item? I'm curious about that...
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Heh sorry never really planned more then thinking up just one since this was strictly a one shot.
This story was a letdown, I'm sorry to say. The villain of the piece wins? No one knows? Everything goes exactly according to plan? I found it awfully boring, and irritating that the thief--the hypnotist, Spira Trance--got away with all of this, and got away clean. The writing needs editing as well.
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I like the fact that Rarity here has a thief outfit. Maybe she's actually in the thieves guild?
Now, Rarity did NOT hide her tracks. That movie star knows she did it, and will come back. So, what happens when Rarity finds out that she hypnotized someone to steal jewels?
Why, master thief Rarity will just have to steal them back and return them to their rightful owners.
That would make a perfect ending to this if you decide to continue