Matrix, Captain Matrix, that's all he's known as, nobody knows his real name, for its hidden by his past life so well that even he tends to forget,
19 years old, 19 years old and yet he's accomplished so much, but experienced things that nobody should go through at such a young age.
He became a pilot for the royal air force, performed well and made a reputation, made a few friends but was an outcast, a freak to most all because of what he was.
That didn't phase him, none of it, but what did though was the loss of the remaining family he could ever hold close to him.
Now, now he takes flight for the last time on earth, before approaching the brink of death and entering a new world, a world he could only ever think of being in his own dreams.
But what could happen to him here, here in this new world?
Who will he meet?
Will his life change for the better?
Or will he crash and burn again, just like before......
On hiatus until I find the time, effort and self esteem to re-write the entire story.
credit goes to veteran O'awesome, silverstien222, cyclone flash, split second and red tear(subtle rampage) corosive dash and ShadowFall for being part of this
new cover art credit goes to unitoone on deviantART http://unitoone.deviantart.com/check out his work
this is my first ever try at writing a fanfic just need to wait until it gets submitted (hope it does) your views are appreciated
No offense, but your capitalization's a mess man.
Get it fixed.
it seems good. Im having a story shortage at the moment, and ill watch.
Brony4Days
thanks for the hint ill keep it noted but its 01:00 am right now and i have school in morning but i will be hoping to upload second chapter at lunchbreak so stay tuned also im looking for a cover art i have a febw suggestions but im always open to ideas
One does not simply give an enlisted man a $300 million dollar jet.
Rambopilot
all will be revealed later after he eventually explains his story of that one fatal day im dissapointed that i already have 5 dislike but no i shall continue writing mystory hoping it shall get better and i want to thank everypony who have already favourited the story and the one like so far there is more to come
i like it.459558 can't seem to understand why people don't like my stories ethier.
459558 i like it. can't seem to understand why people don't like my stories ethier.
lordjohn of snowwood
thanks when ive got time i'll have a look at your storys later yeah right now i has school (boring)
p.s. you wouldnt happen to know anypony who can do cover art would ya if not im ok with it
I don't usually read fic with humans in it, but this caught my attention. +1
Darkslayer7
well thank you kindly good sir you have earned yourself one of these
Write More please you are tormenting me I think that this story is very good
ponytime
im glad you think so you know im ofering places formore characters in the story
mooooooooore. i must have MOOOOOOAR
snipesalot0
oh its moar you wantz well moarz you shall getz when i have acess to a pc instead of my ipod
silverstein222
is this for my fic or for the haylo 2 fic a bit confused here
494113 SO MUCH WIN
but you might want to fix up your speech because it gets really confusing when somepony is talking and when they are not.
anyways GRDDDDDEAAATT STARAH!
saxon
erm thanks i guess i'll try and sort out the speech for the next chapter
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! more?
snipe>>508713
i told you all i would be uploading a new chapter soon didnt i well hope you like it there's plenty more to come
TROLOLOLOLOLOLO YEAYEAYEAYEA BUMBUMBUMBUM!
519159
ooooookkkkaaayyyy i dont know what that ment but i guess it was a good thing so erm thanks i guess
519218 really you dont know what that meant? you trolled at the end of the chapter.
519255
ah I see
I like it!! keep up the good work man, I love the way you've laid out your story so good work!! defiantly deserves a like!!
524072
why thank you sir hopefully the next will be out soon...once i get my hands on a pc again
oh shit!!
527851
oh shit indeed
I NEED MOAR!! oh, and i love this story!! keep it up!
527955
and you shall tonight when i get home from school so i can finish the next chapter
this is some good stuff!!
529517
why thank you and for your reward the moustache has been doubled
529774
Its really hard to read. Punctuation would be nice... If you wouldn't mind, that is
529859
i know i know i try my hardest but i'm the best at times and when you dont have a pre-reader it makes it a little bit harder i wil try and sort it out so its bit better in future
532592
i know that what a pre reader does but how do i give them the chapter so they can check it and stuff i'm a bit confuses on what to do with that ?
532757
aha well thats solves that problem thanks mate
You seriously need to use proper punctuation. Don't just throw thoughts in there.
Example: Dammit! I thought, What the f***
Don't use apostrophes to talk
Example: "Hey Dash!" I yell at the cyan pegasus, eager to talk to her, "What's up!"
yeah i know i try but now that i have a pre reader he can help me with that thanks dude
yea! the next chapter in the propho- i uhh mean uhh awesome story
539342 i dont understand what you mean please explain?
539395 the cult didnt give me premission to speak of the propoche- did i say cult?! i uhhhhh meant group now where was i? oh, im not allowed to speak of the prophocey
539532 what prophocey
542798 k dude