A completely insane yet somehow sane Brony gamer dies in his Universe and is given Reality Warping powers by the Incarnation of Death herself in order to let him fulfill his dream: Go to Equestria. And guess what? It's only the beggining! Read and Review! Your review help me keep writting this. And I really hope you like it!
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582656Yep. Here we go again.
........ The F*** just happened? Was he talking to a voice in his head?
hey gary stu, havent seen ya in a while, how ya been?
582656 Could you explain yourself, please? If you don't, I can't improve my story. Thank you for reviewing.
582682 Nope. He talks to himself. I told ya he was insane. But there's a reason for that.
582770 A Gary Stu? Um... you might be right in there. However, there is a difference if I'm not wrong.
Gary Stu cheat almost always. Wataru Kamijo doesn't do that very often, maybe the first chapters he will use his powers, but only to get the hand on the powers.
Oh, I'm gonna be checking the comments for a few hours, so be free to ask.
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there are THOUSANDS of stories just like this
>guy dies
>get's strange powers from god or whatever
>goes to equestria
>is shipped
>sad part
>happy ending.
it's very cliché, maybe if this was uploaded back when season 1 just started, it would be well received, but now it's just a copy of a copy of a copy etc. etc. etc.
582911 Actually, yeah. You got it mostly right.
Wait, no, I can't tell you, it would spoil the surprise. However, I can tell you something. What 'makes' him a Gary Stu is not the powers, is he fact that he has read Many fanfiction and played hundreds of games, the powers are a boost, or, if you want it, a key.
>guy dies
>get's strange powers from god or whatever
>goes to equestria
And yeah, he is getting shipped. However, that's where everything changes.
Happy ending?
Now what kind of key? Well, you'll have to wait to see.
By the way, nice avatar.
582966
still, the concept is very overused, I'll watch this for a few chapters but if it doesn't get some interesting plot twist (no pun intended) I'll use my connections...
(jk but I'd like to see something VERY unusual.)
582989 Something very unusual, you say?
*checks already written chapters* Chapter... Eight. Or less, if I post double chapter again.
Um... might do that today again, after all, I'm posting in Fanfiction.net as well, check my profile if you want. Almost same name.
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I know of fanfiction.net, but I abandoned it. Makes fluttershy cry
583153 Really? Why?
583186
because it's unorganized.
585309 Yeah, you are right.
Hello there! Here's is Chapter 2! Enjoy it!
P.S: Somepony does know from where does the Social Link comes from?
628390 Yup! That's why! It's a shame I can't put more than the eleven colors I have, because I wanted to give everypony a characteristic color.
...Unless there's a way to have more colors and I don't know it.
By the way, sometimes I do the same, dude. So it's okay.
Switched pov, so many times I just got lost.. I just don't know what went wrong.
643032
I knew there was gonna be a few problems with that.
Well, the story is mostly written from the point of view of Wataru, and there will be many different point of view from other characters. However, there's as well the point of view introduced in the first chapter (The third person POV), that's from MY point of view, and after that is Wataru Third Person POV, where Wataru is watching from the 'show's camera' point of view... which shall be explained further ahead. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cloudchaser_dealwithit.png
Really likin it so far keep up the good work oh and liked faved. I can sooo relate to this character he does what i think i would do plus hes insane like me
I'm truly deeply sorry everypony!
With school, writer's block and other certain activities that shoudn't be told unless I want myself dead (jk with last one), I didn't have the actual time to fully work in the fanfic.
I promise that next time I shall tell you before hand.
784535 Thank you! And thanks for following me.
...
Okay, that sounds pretty bad. Almost makes you look like a stalker, so sorry.
Ugh! Stupid compute that cannot brain properly!
Make Celestia turn evil.
This is boss, continue...
Can I tell you a little secret? If you want to hear it... wait until I finish answering the reviews
797886 DO YOU WANNA KNOW THE GREATEST WORD IN EXISTENCE?! I said... DO YOU WANNA KNOW THE GREATEST WORD IN EXISTENCE?! THE GREATEST WORD IN EXISTENCE IS... KAMIJO!! THAT SHALL BE THE GREATEST WORD IN EXISTENCE, NO, EXISTANCE!!
Thank you for your review.
799234 Do you think that? Oh. My. Goodness.
And we haven't even started! I have faith that the future shall be filled with awesome!!
A question... someone has played BlazBlue? My favorite character are Terumi and Taokaka...
Oh yeah... I almost forgot to say the secret...
The post hath been doubled!
BOW DOWN BEFORE MY INSANITY!!
HAHAHAHA!!
Slightly confusing...
799872 What?
Erm... sorry if the chapter dissapointed.
Another chapter, mares and gentlecolts! Hope you like it! Oh, and I have the Chapters Six and Seven ready to update, working on Chapter Eight, but I need a beta for them so... if somepony feels interested, say it.
Second!
Third!
Fourth
Fifth and ccccCombo breaker!!!!
Lol
876024 You know...? It would be kinda nice if you commented about the new chapter or something.
Anyways... I will update the next chapter when I have... erm... 45 reviews? Yeah... and maybe 20 likes too. That would be nice.
876061 sorry I just did that for giggles^.^ but anyway the chapter was ok( not bad but also not great)
880923 It's okay, don't worry
And you are right, it is not the best chapter I wrote. It's like the cinematics part on a videogame, but bore not, because the next chapter shall focus mainly on the episode #25 of the second season and the one after that shall have... THE CANTERLOT BATTLE!! YAY!! I am currently re-re-rechecking that episode because I have never written a battle and I'm quite worried about it.
P.S: Did you notice that Wataru behaves wierd...er?
882649 it's hard to tell it feels like you forgot to put something in but I can't really tell.
878438
>holding an update hostage
Fuck off with this shit.
Otherwise, I've quite enjoyed this story.
Yay! I finally have re-re-fixed the Seventh Chapter! This one is the good.
However... here's the sixth!
Leave many comments! They keep me and the story alive!
Oh, I almost forgot!
Cliffhanger! BWAHAHAHAHA!!
woooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh!!
First! (Besides author)
Erm... would anypony like to comment about this story? Please?
Hello! thenamelessauthor here, and this is the seventh chapter!
Now... seriously.
I'm hungry! Write some review about the stories, please!
Tell me what you don't like, what you do like, are my character correctly written?, how could I improve? Tell me what's on your mind.
Thank you.
i give it nine thousand and one
's!
943078 Thank you! Tell me, how was it the Wataru vs. Relius fight? And the Wataru and Twilight versus Relius fight? The 'Reality's Infernal Rapture', 'Eternal Coils of the Dragon Serpent', and the 'Black Onslaught' are from the 'Blaz Blue' series, just like the songs that Spike and Fluttershy sang. (Just a comment.)
Oh, and I left as well a 'Freeman's Mind' reference too.
Of course, maybe you never heard of them.
the fights were good. the pink and yellow text was unreadable and i didnt pick up on the referance. i havnt seen them all...943698
943824 Oops! Sorry, it is that I write with the Dark Background option, so I recomend it.
I really need to get a copy of that manual...
-Jorofrarie
i love how this story just seems to ..... throw a little chaos into the mix. it makes things so interesting
944581 Yup, Wataru should too. And thanks, chaos always goes well into any mix. You know what else?
Secret: Everything written in that changes whe something changes.
Another Secret: The walkthrought is divided in one, two, three, four, five... MAYBE six or seven parts. Can guess why?
946508 (insert trol face here) thats why