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Duke of Canterlot


A CPA making his way in the corporate world.

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Apple Bloom wants her cutie mark now!
An idea pops into her head.. maybe she can rid the world of all the undesirables and then she'll get a cutie mark for her deed.
She persuades an initially reluctant Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle to join her on the quest to finally get their cutie marks.

Cover art by: readingthebookishard

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 93 )

Why do i see Applebloom with an assisin cutie mark now....

Holy shit! Excuse my French, but I believe that this will become the next Rainbow Factory! Awesome!

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Not assasin. Swastika.

I wonder who's on the list? I really hope Hilda is one of them...

4606034 *Gilda?

I hope Flim and Flam are. But I feel Trixie and Iron Will should be spared.

When's the next chapter

4606539 Gilda the Griffon from Season 1 Episode 5, 'Griffon the Brush Off'. Gilda is or rather was Rainbow's friend from the past. You might want to binge again, to refresh your memory of all the bad characters.

4609146
Right, but you said "Hilda".

4609267 Oops typo sorry. My finger must've slipped. :P

How does a mute animal like a bunny crack jokes? I'm guessing scootaloo was a little on crazy pills before apple bloom. When this is over,I plan to make an after the fact comment on the ending chapter in the style of a news reporter talking about the incidents when or if their caught for their crimes or not.

4612315 Hmmm Derpy might be a target, then again, she might not... Who knows, we'll see.

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If wall-eyed town hall destroyer Derpy isn't a target at some point I call serious bullsh*t on Apple Bloom's ideology.

Even more than it is now, I mean.

4614356 Yeah, with that in mind, I will say that I will not enjoy Derpy's death. :fluttercry:

4614521 They better not kill ditzy or else i will go nuts onthose foals.

#spareditzy ! Shes a good mother!
You can slice Blueblood in half for all I care, though.

Hey if Derpy is on the list will it play out like the youtube video Derpy gets pranked or will it be different??

Huh, I wonder who the next kill is, I hope it's that prince that was a prick to Rarity at the Galla.

Wow. AB has really taken a swan dive right off the Cliffs of Insanity, hasn't she?

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Honestly, given the way AB's standards on who to kill keep expanding.. I expect her murder list to eventually include all of Equestria.

I wonder how long it'll be before she kills Granny Smith?

Yeah AB! Go all Kira on Prince Blueblood!

4639097 I like the picture!
Applebloom has certainly gone a little crazy so far..:pinkiecrazy:

I'll be honest, while it's fun to see Blueblood die.. the dialog between BB and AB felt a bit stilted and artificial.

:rainbowdetermined2: Someone's been watching Game of Thrones...

I can't wait to see the moment Apple Bloom's sins finally catch up with her^^

4639153 have you noticed my chapter 4 question???

4632422 It will be a surprise if Derpy is on the list ;)

Awesome fight and unlike the other murders, this was actually a fair fight, which brought out a nice change to the usual underhanded tactics of Apple Bloom. I can't wait to see the next target.

Feels like you took some of the plot from Death Note. I hope that the CMC would be able to cleanse Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara before they got caught.

Definitely interesting so far.
Can't wait for the next chapter!

Just how does Apple Bloom know an assassin?:trixieshiftright:

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Is it alright with you if I use that pic as the cover art?
Seems more fitting than what I currently have.

And all the Derpy fans cried bittersweet tears of anguish. Sweet, sweet tears! :pinkiecrazy:

OMG, that fic is perfect. Just P E R F E C T. :heart::heart::heart::heart: I hope she will get away and continue with killings. I silently hope that AB will someday get rid of that useless shit Spike. He is so pathetic. Break his legs, Friendship is Witchcraft style!

And so Derpy finally comes into the picture. Though it might be bait for Applebloom, set up by Sweetie Belle. There was way enough time for Sweetie to spill the beans.

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Love it!!
There should be a :applehappy:.

If you didn't like the ending, let me know.. I have an alternate ending in my mind which can replace this one (or be its own separate chapter).

Awww yeah! I was right! Please check my comment on the previous chapter to know what I'm talking about. I love it when I guess things like this correctly! :pinkiehappy:

4700642 I liked the ending alot, but please post the alternat chapter as another chapter. I'm curious as to what it is.

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Awesome, Apple Bloom versus the bird!

DAAAAYYYYUUUM Applebloom's become Light Yagami from Death Note!........................................ NICE! :pinkiehappy:

Why would you kill Derpy!? :fluttercry:

I feel so sad that silver spoon died :(

That was just...retarded:fluttershyouch:

:trixieshiftright: You have got my attention.

4606539 Trixie should but I wanna see chrysalis or discord D.E.A.D

BREAKING NEWS!This just in: Best friend of recently confirmed dead colt has commited suicide.

(also I will right my comments from now on in newscaster form and maybe normal)

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