Bon-Bon has the biggest crush on Lyra, her roommate and best friend. However, Bon-Bon has been too afraid to tell Lyra the truth for fear of destroying the strong bond they already hold.
It is the day before Hearts and Hooves day and Bon-Bon has decided that she will ask Lyra out on a date. Bon-Bon decides that she can't take it anymore and must let her feelings for Lyra out in the open.
Bon-Bon decides to follow Lyra around to get ideas on what they could do for their date, if Lyra says yes that is.
Idea by linkman443.
Story by Duke of Canterlot
Chapters (6)
Nice. Turned out better then I thought. You sir have inspired me to keep writing ButtonBall.
This is interesting, keep going.
Hehehehe, Im still liking this. Good on ya.
Looking great so far,
tracking for now
You know what im imprwssed for two reasons.
1. You manage to keep my attention fully for this whole weekend with this story.
2. You wrote all the chaptrw with EXACTLY 2,000 words each.
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Glad to hear it, thank you for your kind words!
Dang. 2,000 per chapter exactly. Is that even possible to do? Well, I guess it is, since you did it.
Oh my! Lyra and Twilight?! There's a shipping you don't see that often. Poor Bon-Bon.
Oh yeah, for a pony with a name like Filthy Rich (emphasis on the 'Filthy'), and being the father of the fandom's most loathed pony [or at least mine anyways], he's not so bad as I thought he would be.
3922414 no but seriously how do you do exactly 2,000 words each chapter?
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The initial drafts for all three chapters were around 1900 to 2100 words. I thought it would be fun to see if I could edit them so they were exactly 2000 words.
Probably won't keep that up for the upcoming chapters though lol.
Another awesome chapter. Wow, drunk Bonbon is quite the pony.
I've honestly never been a huge fan of cussing in mlp stories. Pretty much every other adult theme is fine, but for some reason, I just can't properly picture them cussing. It's really a personal preference, so don't take this as serious criticism. I usually just replace the words with different ones in my head anyway. I really enjoy this story, I just thought I'd put my two cents in.
DRUNK BON BON VS. BERRY PUNCH
Awesome chapter, and exactly 2000 words, impressive.
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MOAR!!!
Aha, you wenet for the classic team up, break up thing. NIIIICE.
P.S. 2,000 words how?
those fkin lines man x'D
Interesting turn out there. Glad I'm reading this fanfic with Valentines/ Hearts and Hooves Day so close.
Why is each chapter exactly 2,000 words?
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Because each of those chapters has 2,000 words.
Awwwwwwwwwwww
3941747 I just meant that it's a little weird that they all ended up with the exact same number of words.
Wait! Is this The End already?!
Awwwh.
And in the end.
The Love you take,
Is equal to the Love
You make.
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Lol, I got to 2000 words/chapter through editing, wanted to see if I could do it, :D
My initial drafts for these chapters were all around 1900-2100 words.
Beautiful story, love it.
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3942532 i love how those two images are even facing eachother
Last chapter: Well, it felt like a knife was cutting my heart into pieces, (it was the good kind of pain
) Very good story, I wish there was more stories like these.
3956861 Agreed.
Omg! In the little bar thingy at the top of the site I got a Bon Bon and Lyra one (the one where they are on the bench) while read this! Oh and good good read means good good good story I think.
Wait Bon Bon was drunk? I thought she became a internet troll.
What's pinkie planning?
very cute story. ^.^..
loved the story
Review from the Pleasant Commentary and Review Group here
3942086 did you call for an editor :)
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Lov e it so far but, why is Bonnie working an office job, not a candy mare?
3924798 NO PLZ CONTINUE!¡!¡ Or else I'll reveal your connection to the Illuminati, for letting you have 2,000 words per chapter∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆!