A CPA making his way in the corporate world.
Bon-Bon was living a normal life in Ponyville. However, her life, as she knows it, will inevitably change when she learns a secret about herself... she is a Halfling: half pony and half changeling.
Now nothing will ever be normal again.
(1st person POV: Bon-Bon).
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Interesting concept, looks good so far.
Lotta potential, so I'm dropping a like and a fav.
Keep it up
Not bad at all. I hope to reed more soon.
Interesting, very interesting. Sometimes it's nice to see a slice of life story with a little bit of a twist thrown in as opposed to just reading all action adventure fics.
Very nice. Look forward to the next chapter.
I Like where this is goooooing ♥
Bon-Bon and Lyra's banter is great; you can really tell they're lovers.
This is going to be very interesting, especially when, not if, Celestia finds out. Also you could use an editor to look over your chapters for you.
Update in the middle of the night: Check
Give up the Halfling She-Elf!
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I can't wait to see who the other halfling is.
I bet the halfling is one of the main dudes. thats my theory anyway.
Watch the other halfling be Pinkie, that would at least explain a bit about how she does what she does... or its Vinyl because, why not?
....... BWAH???
29.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lxab4kv7xm1qf8kcco1_500.png That was pretty good, though you may want to think about revving down the number of ponies in Ponyville. I mean 48,000? Seriously? Human towns don't have nearly that many people, and we're humans, rabbits breed like us. Ponyville must be half a state if it's really got that many ponies in it.
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That's a good point. Ponyville doesn't really seem that large. I'll go with 5000 for now, even though the number is probably even less.
Manehattan and Canterlot would probably have the larger populations.
Eh, I dunno. Tyrantlestia and Equestrian concentration camps seem just a little out there...
Why does Scootaloo always end up as a changeling whenever there is one hiding in Ponyville?
4336464 the same reason that bon bon does as well. Fanon interpretation.
Perfect infiltrator form. Completely impossible to prove that they are associated with the changelings without grievous bodily harm, which would only make the State look bad if they tortured a 'pony' into submission.
Is Clean really Lemon Drops?
Damn. I thought wrong!
4335943 And you wonder why I absolutely hate most changeling fanfiction.
4406191 I like a little 'change' from the norm every now and then.
I wonder if a certain someone has control over her dreams, I wonder.
Am I the only one here noticing the eerie consistency in each chapter's word count?
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Do realise these are her dreams right...
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There have been dreams, but everything I was talking about was stuff that was said while awake.
Could it be that *gasp* there is no 100% good guy?!
I hoped that Flitter wasn't too crazy for Buck's sake.
Very Punny!
The story to me, On a the last few chapters feels a little rushed to me... I feel as if this chapter could be two chapters with more details...
And the talk with Lyra was entirely to short...
Just my feelings though....
This far... Its only dreams that Celestia is all mean and evil in... But dreams and reality could be two totally diffrent things... I'm not entirely sure what will happen if Celestia does turn out to be a dick like she is in Bon Bon's dreams but I hope she is more kind when things do happen with her outside of her dreams...
An intersting story thus far...
4336464 she's half pony silly
Nice job showing where DT became a TB from. Looks like the apple did not fall far from that tree. Never did like bullies picking on people just for being different, myself included among the bullied.
4472917 The author does say that they feel this chapter is weak, though.
4613193 True....
Erm, I don't mean to sound impatient or anything, but are you planning on updating this sometime?
This chapter totally broke my suspension of disbelief. You know if something is too good to be true? That's Bonbon's father.
He is an inventor? Okay, I can get that. He invented cars, all by himself? No, I don't believe that, but go on. And then, on top of that, he is a genius, a prince, and a master of shapeshifting? Sorry, but that is so far-fetched that my suspension of disbelief is totally shattered. And as a result, the whole story collapsed in on itself for me. Even if that turns out to be false in future chapters, he seems higher than Celestia now, and that is a serious problem.
And as PinkiePieFox said, it all seems rushed now. You had an interesting premise, but - and I am sorry to say that - I don't think I can read on now.
Please tell me that Bonbon won't fall this demon brat Diamond tiara
Any plan on updating this
Huzzah exposition dump!
Interesting that she's not running her own shop. Guess that came after..,
Ohai Papa!
Lemon Drops is a guy?! Hooie!😂😂😂
Ok, so not the Papa, but why is she so special to receive such covert attention? Surely hybrids aren't that uncommon...
Huh. Why not travel up red-eye Saturday morning? She's skipping the concert for no reason...
Princess, eh?
Heh, well that's an interesting family dynamic...
Well, when you're convinced yourself of something, sometimes it's hard to see the rest of the truth...