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Duke of Canterlot


A CPA making his way in the corporate world.

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This story is a sequel to Cutie Mark Cleansers


The sequel to the "Cutie Mark Cleansers".

Apple Bloom, after being caught for her crimes, was locked away in Tartarus.
Apple Bloom meets her real father, Tirek, and the two break out to get revenge.

Chapters (28)
Comments ( 92 )

Put your vote in the comments section, :pinkiehappy: :applecry:

i vote for Jet Set, Upper Crust, Flam, Flim

Spike, Cerberus, Gilda, and Blueblood. I'm just saying this based entirely on how much help they may potentially be in stopping Evilbloom and Tirek. :rainbowdetermined2: Also, down with the evil-doers! :flutterrage::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::flutterrage:

Silver Spoon, Spike, Prince Blueblood, Gilda.

4721236 spike, cerberus, silver spoon.

Diamond tiara: only to be slain again.

Owww, you actually did it, you killed that little bastard :heart::heart::heart: I love you :twilightblush:

Whom you should resurrect? Personally I think that bringing dead characters back to life isn't a good idea. Let the dead stay dead, but whatever. I trust you will make of it an even better fic than Cleansers was (and I liked Cleansers very much :heart:)
So my list goes like that:
Spike - because I hope AB can kill him again :yay:
Gilda - but I don't know if it would be a good option storywise
the bird - just for the lols
Flim

Spike, Gilda, the bird, Flim

Pinkie Pie uses fourth wall. It doesn't affect reader Tepid Phantom.

Bull. I call bull! That has to be the WORST fourth wall joke i've ever come across. Why? Less on the fact that animated characters in a live setting says "Screw you, logic!" and how rubbery they are, but more so on how in-your-face the joke is. Oh, and the interactive? Yeah, other than Cerberus and Spike, no one is worth bringing back. But in terms of series progression, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon are worth bringing back for being recurring antagonists.

I ask you, Duke of Canterlot, to make your own choices. Who's worth saving and who's worth losing? And how the deaths impact the world these ponies live in? The good and bad things they've done? What they could have been?

I originally was gonnapost a different comment from what I experience, but I thought of getting that rant out. My apologies btw. I had a dream of what could have been a scene from your fanfiction. Being torn from Apple Bloom's death, Sweetie Belle was receiving comfort from... Sapphire Shores? Well, Sweetie Belle tolls for thee, I guess.

Oh and Apple Bloom was hunting for Diamond Tiara in the afterlifetrying to eradicate her soul completely. Yikes! I was gonna ask if you drafted any of these ideas for the sequel, but I'm jumping to conclusions that you don't know what you're doing. :rainbowwild:

Winners are Spike, Silver Spoon, Cerberus, and Gilda!!

I'll get the next chapter in this weekend.

I do say. Apple Bloom is taking an evil approach to this. I must put a song into this:

Can't wait for the next chapter

RC

Terrifing as crap yet intresting as hell. And alicorn bloom is just plain geografica horrifica.
geografica horrifica is a condensement of all horror stories and tail of deth and woe.
make more.

:applecry: /> :trollestia: = :twilightoops:

Translation: applebloom slaying celestia equals oh crap!!!!

Interesting way to go. Everything goes shit hitting the fan. I have a feeling you are taking the dbz route in terms of fighting, when everything seems hopeless until the last punch...

Maybe Zecora can find more ingredients to make another batch of revival stuff someday. In the mean time, they can keep Celestia in the freezer! :trollestia:

This will be interesting.

I think I know who's next.

And also , that escalated quickly

I used to find 2k chapters acepable, but after reading Fallout: Equestria, Xenophillia and Divided Rainbow, I'm starting to find the shorter chapters less than... acceptable... lengthwise at least. The chapters are well written, they are just too short for me now. :rainbowderp:

I know it is over but... it would have been hilarious for the four most not helpful to be back: The Bird and the 3 killed in the canterlot chapters (Jet Set, Upper Crust, and Prince Blueblood)

I am liking this better than the first.

I am sure Tirek+Bloom would like to resurrect Cherry Blossom.

Zecora has cheated death, Not yet has she had her final breath.

4874351 Hopefully long enough to make her turn against Tirek

4965153 I think it has risen to 99% of equestria (The 1% being Sweetie, Scoots, and the 4 resurrected)

Aw shit! All they need is for Applebloom and Tirek to fight and they will be too focused on each other to realize that their destruction would be imminent.

I think it would be interesting if Apple Bloom found a way to win.

I wish you bring back Snails; because Snails was Applebloom first victim and he could stop her & her farther in the story.

*Spitfire voice* 3 deaths in one chapter? That's an academy record!

The bird, Opal, Cerberus and Spike

Flash is dead! It's FAVE TIME!

I'm loving this story so far!

Please Apple Bloom, KILL Tirek, take the world as your own! Glory to the Black Apple Empire

As much as I like this story, I have one problem with it. Why the hell don't the main6 use the rainbow power they used LAST TIME THEY FACED TIREK! :flutterrage:
Or they could have sniped them befor the wall was up.:facehoof:
Also apple bloom kill tirek

The next chapter is certainly going to be interesting.

Why is it that I have a feeling that in the end Tirek will wind up dead?

Now what, with tirek gone will surrender the throne as well

Reminds me of that Kill La Kill episode
:applejackunsure:
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So akward here alone:fluttershbad:

I look forward to future updates.

I'm glad that I was bored waiting for Photo Dash to update again. If I wasn't, I might never have found out about this gem!

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Why? All it would do at this point would be cost Apple Bloom another parent, and that's if you did it with the Master Sword, and not a knife.

Aww...I was looking forward to more murder and mayhem, like in the previous story!

Will this ever get continued?

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