Several years later, after Twilight has become an Alicorn, the Academy of Magic and Friendship makes it's grand opening at last.
Sixteen ponies, former students of Cheerilee's class of fillies and colts, are summoned to attend the new high school on a tour. However, things turn sour quickly when the tour is taken over by a strange, black and white teddy bear, who declares that the ponies have to commit a perfect murder in order to go home.
In this edition of Dangan Ronpa, the events will stray from the canon series, but stay faithful to the character driven, dark humor style of Dangan Ronpa, so it'll be written as if it started in Equestria! No need to have played the games at all to understand the story, but it'll add to the experience if you're watching the anime/play(ed) the game.
But I Pinkie Promise that there will be NO SPOILERS of the Dangan Ronpa games.
Q&A'd by PigeonSmall
Proofread by thegreenone.
Also a TV Tropes page. Go nuts.
What the fuck is a Dangan Ronpa
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Lookie here
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Ew
>MAL
I love this story ! Hope you wil update it !
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Thank you for reading it!
I'll be updating as much as I can, but it takes a bit of time to make sure everything works out~ :p
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Hehe, thank you so much!
I'm happy to know I'm actually doing something right! :D
Anyway, thanks a bunch, seriously, and I hope you'll continue to keep up with the story!
This is absolutely fantastic! I love to bits and pieces! No joke, I found the narrative for this quite compelling and realistic. I would like to see where this goes in the future. Brilliant job!
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Thank you SO much! I'll do my best to keep up the good work! :D
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haha, whoops. >_>
In writing form, I didn't want to make it TOO much like the games, but I did'em at random. I'll keep note of it next time
But still, I had a bit of trouble wondering how to handle those FTE's >.>
Like, do i use time realistically, or do I reasonably use time the way Shady would use his, given his personality, or do I do it the way the games did it? I mean, I didn't know. >_>
But thanks to your critique, I got an idea.
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Basically, I'll try to do one FTE once per day in-story, or at least, find a way to make it work once per (Ab)normal days chapter.
something like that.
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The time of death, was definitely tough to determine, because I want there to be a wide enough gap between the death and the culprit having time to escape and create an alibi due to chasing Grace Lightning.
Also, The death announcement? That's actually an important factor to this case! :D
At least you're on the right track, and honestly, I'm nervous.
I think Imma gonna look over it one more time, make sure that everything is as I envisioned. >_<
The clues in the next chapter autta give a better vision on things.
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And I thank YOU, for taking the time to look over my story, soooo ya.
I mean, i try to keep my grammar mistakes n crap down to a minimum, but my eyes can only catch so many of'em.
So again, thanks for pointing'em out, and I'll get on it to fixing'em. :D
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Well shit.
Am I losing my touch? >_>
All i did was add a " deal when she dropped that thing.
orz
No wonder english is complicated. I'll get right on it.
Edit:
So i got to the error, and I see whatcha mean about "it's". It wasn't capitalized to begin with, soooooo, that error was there all along. >____>
But about that comma before continuing a sentence, it's a little writing technique i picked up on from a novelist, and I normally do it quite a bit, as I use it to insert an action in the middle of some dialogue, giving a bit more action, pretty much.
I wasn't sure if that was good, buuuuuuut, I figured it's fair game if said novel is a legit novel, not a fanmade gig.
Anyway, thanks again. I appreciate the help. :p
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More interactive, huh?
Hmmmmm... Well, if I had a larger readership of peeps that actually commented quite often, then yeah, I'd definitely be down for that >.>
This first trial overall is to draw in that missing readership. I'd impliment the idea from that chapter onwards. Somehow.
>.>
Holy shit is this good.
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Thanks for the compliment! :3
3259744 But if you want my advice, make the non-stop debates a little interactive. I go like this.
Dinkie doo: Well that could be your motive.
Shady: Wait something is not right here. Someone said something that isn't accurate but what wasn't.
After carefully thinking, I notice that what Diamond tiara said and that is where it hit me.
Just my advise. Also this is just personal but I hope DT dies weather by being killed or execution since I hate that characters unless you made her good in this one.
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Heh, the whole interactive Nonstop debates being interactive, I'd do it if more people commented on said story. :p
I've just been throwing'em in for experience and funsies.
I'd love to interact with my readership if they all showed some interest. Because y'know, that'd increase the FimFic chapter count by quiiiiiiite alot. :3
The suspense is killing me! Damn Nyte-Blade, you've got me lusting for another chapter. Snide comments, insults of intelligence; what haven't you thought of yet to make this amazing?
And maybe by posting on other sites you can build up the reader count, at the very least just the URL on forums and that.
(PS, I am so up for readership interactions! Stay awesome!)
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thanks a bunch for the compliment! :D
ooooh, going around and promoting my story is sort of a double edge sword for me. For one, I'm trying to avoid random dislikes. On the other hand, I've considered kinda promoting my story on muuuuuuultiple occasions. At least here on Fimfic.
Alas, I may promote more when I have more chapters posted. That way the peeps will have more to read.
no spike...? *loses interest*
Snips and snails!? *Gains more interest*
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Maybe Spike's not around for a reason.
For what? Who knows! :p
Please oh please oh please oh please...
Kill Diamond Tiara first...
or at the very least don't kill the CMC
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hehehe... >.>
With a story like this, only one can wonder~.
OH MY GOD WHO IS IT THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!
Also you took my advise. Now I really feel deep into the nonstop debate.
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True, you got a point.
But alas, I'll try to do the nonstop debates more differently when the Second trial and jazz come along.
I'm feeling a lot more motivated now that more and more of ya'll are stopping by, reading my work, and giving a comment! :D
3292529 One thing I look foreword is the execution. Those are the big pay for solving the case and I know I sound like a sick fuck.
3292435 ok we split it
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I put a lotta thought into the executions anyway, so you're not really alone there! >.>
My money's on Truffle Shuffle, if not now, then down the line.
Seriously, there's being a teacher's pet and then there's being a creepy stalker.
3295087 Oh I so put my money on truffle shuffle.
hehehe...
It's fun to see you guys try to guess the culprit >.>
Uu~pupupu~
I honestly thought snips would be dead by case three but I never thought he would be the first to go. Also the executions just gave me reason to be afraid of that bear. Not gonna spoil but god damn is that just a sad way to go.
When nonstop debates comes in. I play this song right here.
Sheesh. Shady kinda reminds me of my FOE protagonist. He don't pull no punches for baddies.
As for the story so far, I love it, but there is one thing that I absolutely need to say: make it clear who's talking. I know that it's hard to juggle that many characters, but sometimes there is no indication of who's saying what. Just work on that and other matters of clarity, and you're golden.
Also, wonderful execution work there now this is what I came here for!
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Yeah, I find myself missing that alot when I go back and review my stuff.
Yet I somehow still manage to miss/make mistakes.
But it's all good. I'll do my best to clarify next time! :D
3307334 Just keep writing a lot. The more you write, the clearer you'll get.
What? No, of course I'm not saying that just so you'll write more chapters so I can get my DR fix! Why would you think that?
(In all seriousness, I actually envy your speed, though it may help to move slower, take your time making sure its all perfect.)