In their quest to earn their Cutie Marks, and possibly find some answers for the strange events that have occurred, Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom and Scootaloo soon learn they've taken on more than they can handle. How will they deal with this? And what will Sweetie Belle do now?
Sex tag is there for innuendos and references to the act in later chapters. There will be no clop.
This is a crossover with the show Danny Phantom, and a side story of Guilt of a Phantom. I would suggest reading that story first, as this story will interact with the main story from time to time. Especially in the beginning of this fic, as it will start after certain events at the hooves of our three fillies.
And click: The Baltimare Incident for the story that happened before Goap and SS, GoE.
Read them in this order.
1. Guilt of a Phantom.
2. The Baltimare Incident after the chapter: Hunting the Hunter's Hunter. Earth.
3. Silver Spirit, Ghost of Equestria after the chapter: The Day the World Looked Pink-ie Pie.
"Crusader Spirit"
I notice you had Danny last name as Mansion instead of Fenton. By best guess is you had Danny marry Sam and change his last name to that name instead of Sam changing her last name. Also once you have Danny find out about her powers (Or you can have them met in their ghosts forms) Have him give a few points to control her powers.
4134191 I would go with that too!
4134365 no it is not that go read "Guilt of a Phantom" to find out why he changed his name to Manson
Hmmm when Danny Finds out.... Sweetie Belle is now a Halfa? I wonder if he will reveal his secret to her?
4135199 The guess was for the author and I was agreeing to you Ghost cry for Sweetie Belle, Though this story is making me think of a theme song for Sweetie Belle. It still being work on and I only got the beginning for the theme.
4135818 I know that by the way thanks. I think it fit her perfectly and I really can't wait to see what would happen WHEN Danny finds out that Sweetie is a Halfa
I feel that Danny would help Sweetie learn to use her powers, while re-learning his own.
4135919 Same here! Well, here the part of Sweetie theme. It a little base off of Danny Theme, like I said I'm still working on it.
"She a Spirit...Silver Spirit...Silver Spirit, Spirit, Spirit.
YO, Sweetie Belle was just a filly when her friends found something that others thought was silly."
I'm afraid that all I got.
I'm not good at rapping. But it a start. Need help on that and maybe Powerdrainer can use it.
Whoa whoa whoa, hang on a second. Let me read into something for a second.
You said there are now 4 "Halfa's" and you gave us clues as to who they are. Evil and Guilt are easy, because they are Vlad and Danny. The forth is easy as well, because that's Sweetie. But let's look at the "Wanderer" for a second.
There are two pieces of information we have to consider about this:
1. What is said about the "Wanderer"
Omitted is that the "Wanderer" is looking for Danny.
2. Dani. Now considering that she is a clone of Danny, we could discredit her.
Now, if the "Wanderer" is looking is looking for Danny, and receiving the help of others, then I think I know who this "Wanderer" is.
The "Wanderer" is Sam.
Meaning Sam isn't completely dead.
Sam is very much still alive.
4137932 Maybe you are looking a bit too much into this. I was actually referring to Dani, clone or not. She was "born" through the cloning processes by Vlad, the "Darkness". And through Danny's help she found her way into the "light". And she, as well as Tucker and Jazz are still looking for him. And as for the whole wanderer thing. Well, she is living on the streets, wandering around to find a place, but never sticking around for too long for her to get caught by Vlad. Hopefully this clears things up a bit. And as for the four halfas. Well, I'm not revealing anything much, but you might be onto something with another being out there. Or not, and I am just being a massive troll.
But as for Sam. She is dead, as in six feet under. Sort off. There never really was a body to bury.
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What. Since when does this happen to anything I make?
Did... Did I inspire someone to be creative?
*Inhales deeply* SQUEEEEE!
4138948 Heh, heh. I'm a huge Danny Phantom fan and I really like your story. I didn't read the other one, but this caught my eye more then that one. Like I said for Sweetie Theme, I'm still working on it but I need some help for the song. I did the whole song before but I didn't like it, so I'm trying to come up with one that fits her.
And I really what to see how Danny reacts to Sweetie being a half ghost. I'm sure everyone what to see that. Plus Danny Phantom is where my User name come from.
4136131 Need some help you say. How about this for starters.... Oh crud. Now I am doing it as well.
She's a spirit... Spirit, spirit... Silver Spirit. YO, Sweetie Belle was eight years of age, and she wanted to be a very useful mage. She's a spirit. But she and her friends were up to no good, causing all kinds of trouble in the neighborhood.......... And so on.
4139377 Not bad, I'm trying to use the Danny Phantom theme song to make it. So buy me time and I should have something for you.
Great story. Very interesting twist in making Sweetie Bell a halfa. I look forward to seeing how this will affect the main story.
As for a battle cry how about Spirit Up.
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Am I doing it right?
4142833 Short of.
We are all waiting for the next chapter. I don't think I have the theme by then though.
4143730 Short of.... Eh.. Okay, I guess.
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.... Okay. I'm not really sure how this will help you with that theme song you're working on. But hay, what do I know, right.
4143755 I didn't mean that "short of" but hey, your just trying to funny. Still working on it and I'm mixing mine and yours started to hopefully get some thing else.
Huh, no comments? Here I was looking forward to seeing if anyone pointed out the things I just fixed.
Well this one is ready anyway, I'll start on the next chapter tonight but I will probly(I know it is spelled 'probably' but I'm trying to type my accent and that's how I say it!) have to finish it in the morning.
"Everypony STOP!... It's Spirit Time!"
"Time to get Spiritual!"
"This time the Silver is going to take YOU!"
"Go Go Ghost Rape!"
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Hey, is there something you can do about the whole story being done in center script?
4178338 Actually, it is something I work with as a part of my own writing style. But, I guess that if it is a massive nuisance to my readers I can change it. But I have worked with it for the entire duration of both this fic, and the main story this fic came from. In fact. You're the first one to ever mention it to begin with, so I'm not sure what the others think of it.
Is it really that much of a problem? I want to know, as I want to make this story the best it can be. Both in writing and the way it looks.
4178357 Well, it's just kind of a nuisance. I usually see the center alignment thing when people a write a song, or write the premise at the beginning of the chapter, of they're writing a note. I've never seen it as a full on story.
I can understand you like writing this way. I just thought you had accidentally left it like that, like when authors accidentally italics a whole chapter.
4178386 Well, I must say I did first try other styles with how the text showed on the screen. But this just felt right in a way. If it is too much of a nuisance I will change it, but it feels rather forced to me should this happen. Should others mention it as well, I will alter it. I do hope you enjoyed the story though.
4178400 Oh, I do enjoy the stories. I just though I would make a comment just in case in was a technical error.
4178435 Thanks, the effort is appreciated.
Not a bad start for Sweetie Belle training. Well, I still don't have the theme song for Sweetie Belle in her ghost form but I'm still working on it. Can't wait to see how school goes, and who knows? You might have her fight a ghost. Like Danny did when he got his powers.
Awesome!
Them discovering how Sweetie's powers work is the most adorably-cool thing EVER!
Editor's Note:
Remember this chapter ends with Sweetie Belle going to bed the night before the chapter 'Training Day' in Guilt of a Phantom.
Because it was only a photo... and they were dead. Completely and totally dead and unable to communicate with the living in anyway.
What part of "They're dead and can't hear or respond to your desires" do you not get?! LET IT GO!! They are gone forever and they can never come back!
... or not.
And easier thought than said, and easier ignored than thought. And thus the problem was ignored! YAY FOR EASYNESS!!
It had lived with Rarity for years, it knew when it was time to get the hell out of Dodge.
No no no Sweetie, you have to make the Nicholas Cage face when you say that, do it again.
So ghost intangibility is like clouds? Pegasi can touch them?
4206364 And the crazy blast of energy Sweetie shot during her improvised training was the flash of light mentioned at the ending of the previous chapter of Guilt of a Phantom
Throughout the entire chapter you were saying three instead of tree. My god it frustrated me so much!
4277548 Okay. I have no idea how this happened, but the edited version was apparently not uploaded. Like the chapter title says: What the hay! Any how, I uploaded the edited version, so any three/tree confusion should now be fixed. Sorry for the inconvenience.
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I'm silently screaming. Don't ask why because I don't know.
4282761 Probably because I apologized on the internet. It is not as bad as dividing by zero, but close.
I'm Going Ghost! -> I'm Shifting Spirit!
One question comes to mind. Why did you name her Silver Spirit?
Danny Fenton=Danny Phantom.
Vlad Masters=Vlad Plasmius.
Sweetie Belle=Silver Spirit?
Whenever someone became part ghost, they gave themselves new names, but those names still had part of their real names in them. Silver Spirit would be a much more appropriate name for Silver Spoon.
I think it would have been better to keep my original idea of Spirit Belle.
4297610 Perhaps. But it is the whole covered in gold dust, then having it turn into silver as Sweetie became a spirit. So, Silver and Spirit. I can see how it would make sense to keep a part of her original name, and I tried a couple variations, yours included, but I just liked the way this sounds. Besides, it might just be part of a greater whole in this story.
will danny find out and help train sweetie belle
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It been awhile since my last post but I have come to problem with Sweetie Belle Theme for this story. I FORGOT IT!
Ugh, with only the start of the song written down, I never got around to working on it. Can some one help me? Oh, and how the next chapter coming Powerdrainer?
4356322 My editor is currently busy correcting the next chapter. Don't know when it will be done, but I don't think it will be that long. Couple of days give or take. Maybe less. I'm making no promises though.
4357922 Ok, thanks. I was wondering.
Crusader Spirit
Spirit Up
Everypony STOP!... It's Spirit Time!
I could also make this into just: It's Spirit time.
Time to get Spiritual!
This time the Silver is going to take YOU!