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  • T Silver Spirit, Ghost of Equestria.

    In their quest to earn their cutie marks, and maybe find some answers for the strange events that have occurred, Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom and Scootaloo find that they have taken on more than they can handle. Question is: What will Sweetie do now?
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  • T The Baltimare Incident.

    Follow Soarin and other ponies as they go through a life changing event that will shape not just them, but the entire world as well. This is a crossover with the show Danny Phantom.
    13,109 words · 338 views  ·  24  ·  7

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  • 9w, 6d
    A new idea for the Baltimare Incident.

    Hello there, everyone.

    I hope you have enjoyed the stories I have written so far, and that you will be with me for more to come. But, as I am now working on my stories, a new idea came to me. Mainly, with my fic the Baltimare Incident. This fic has a wide range of events happening, and I can't possibly think and write them all down. Really. So many ponies/griffins/ and others, there is just so much going on, with individual stories for each. Now, what was that idea I mentioned. Well, why don't you people help me telling the stories of those who went through the ghost invasion? Anything is possible, as long as it fits in with the world that I have made.

    Should you be interested, and say: "Ah, hay. Why not. I'll write a chapter or two.", then there are a few rules that you should know about.

    (1) You can use any pony you want, as long as they are not used in the main story.

    (2) Think about the timeline set in this fic. The Main Six are still young teenagers, and have not yet become the Elements. Luna is also still stuck on the moon.

    (3) OC's are perfectly acceptable, Just make sure I am not using any possible OC ponies in the fic. Think about AJ's parents. Or possibly Scootaloo's. Your own created OCs are welcome though. Just ask me if you're not sure if a pony is used or not.

    (4) Don't go overly dark with your contribution. Of course ponies have died during the events in Baltimare, and you can have ponies die in your chapter, but keep it light weight.

    (5) More rules might come up should they be needed.

    Now, if you want to write a chapter, (in Gdocs if possible), PM me, and we will work something out. Also, I will publish it alongside my own chapters, give you full credit, and link people to your user page. And, most importantly. Have fun.

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  • 11w, 5d
    Explanation and small preview.

    Hey there, everyone. I thought I let hear from myself, just so you'd know I am still around, and busy with the next chapters of my fics.

    So, how is work going on the chapters? Why is it taking so long for Guilt of a Phantom to update? Will Sweetie Belle and Danny ever meet in their ghost/spirit forms? What is your favorite color? What is going on with Vlad? And, as asked by the thelostfather. I wonder if Sweetie will have any unique abilities? Maybe something cute and terrifying?...

    All good questions, and let's see if I can provide some answers.

    First, why is it taking so long to update GoaP?      Well, several things. First, of course, the fic Silver Spirit. It was still behind in the timeline set in GoaP, and it needs to catch up first, so that any future chapters written in both fics will match up as they interact with one another, and not that I need to find a way to make things work in one chapter while the other is already published. Of course there is also my work, and I am just lazy as heck. Also, daleks. It's rather complicated, and a lot of wibbly wobbly, timey wimey... stuff. Also, don't blink.

    But seriously, the next chapter is almost done. In fact, it is already done, but now I need to sync it up with the next chapter of Silver Spirit, so things are consistent. Of course, there is still one chapter before Silver Spirit has caught up, which is currently being edited by my editor, Vates Despero. Now, for the chapter of GoaP. It is a big one, to make up for the time in between this one and the last. Over 20k, unedited count. So there is that to look forwards to. However, I have no idea when it will be published. Sorry about that.

    How's work going on the chapters?      Good.

    Will Sweetie Belle and Danny ever meet in their ghost/spirit forms?      Maybe.... Oh, of course they will.

    What is your favorite color?       Purple. Wait, why is that question even here?

    What is going on with Vlad?       Right now? he's sitting in his tub, playing with a rubber ducky. Oh, and now he is screaming as he noticed me, and blasting several destructive beams of ectoplasme at me. I guess he couldn't was away his bad temper. Oh well.

    I wonder if Sweetie will have any unique abilities? Maybe something cute and terrifying?    As I said in the comment section of Silver Spirit: She does, oh, she does. But what could it be?

    Now, as you have been waiting for a while now for GoaP to update, I thought it would be nice if I gave you a small preview. Do know that this is unedited and might be altered in some way or another. Also, reading experiences might change during online play. You have been warned.

    <<>><<>><<>>

    With a groan, Danny rolled out of his bed, landing on the floor with a thud. Groaning like a zombie, again, he slowly rolled on his back, while his tired mind, still very much asleep, was trying to catch up.

    And, as it did so, he became aware of a few things. Not sure how much, though. As he was still too far submerged in the drowsy, fuzzy cloud of fog that obscured his mind. But he did notice the slight headache, which suddenly became that much worse as he became aware of it. The second thing would be the partyhat sitting askew on his head, but his brain struggled to remember where it came from. Then there was the fact that he was lying on the floor, which was odd as well

    Groaning yet again, Danny finally managed to push himself up, and he wished he hadn't done so as a stab of pain shot through his already troubled brain. Placing a hand against his head, and rubbing his forehead, he blunk uncoordinatedly as he looked around the place he began to recognize as his bedroom.

    Another groan left him, and he slowly dragged himself up, taking notice of all the confetti littering the floor. It was then his brain finally managed to catch up, panting loudly as it tripped over the streamers covering it.

    "Right, Pinkie's party." Danny groaned as he lumbered into the bathroom, stepping under the shower, fumbling with the controls. He let loose a scream when he was suddenly assaulted by the freezing cold coming from the water falling on him. And he became aware of yet another thing. He was still wearing his clothes.

    Groaning yet again, he clambered out of the shower, dripping wet, and removed the soaked clothes, before trying again, now making sure the water was at least warm enough to prevent his manhood from shriveling up entirely. And, as the now warm water descended down onto his body, his tired mind finally started waking in full, and memories from last night came back to him.

    The party. Twilight. The dancing. Twilight. The punch. Pinkie. More punch, and with a strange aftertaste. A wickedly grinning Pinkie. Twilight, again. Cake. Cupcakes. Muffins. A grey, wall eyed pegasus fighting him over the last muffin. More punch. And things became kinda blurry after that.

    "Man. What did that crazy mare put in the punch?" Danny muttered as he felt life return to his body in a non transformative way.

    Still. Even as his memory returned to him, as well as the life in his body, he couldn't shake the nagging feeling something was still trying to catch up with him. Something important. But everytime he tried to figure out what it was, his mind only came up with the blurry image of a certain purple pony saying something to him. What it was, for the half life of him, he couldn't remember.

    "Meh. It is probably nothing." he muttered as he closed his eyes and just enjoyed the warm water.

    <<>><<>><<>>

    "Weapons?"

    "Check."

    "Targeting computer online?"

    "Check."

    "Thruster pack ready?"

    "Check."

    "Engines activating of the Sp-"

    "CHECK! Let's go, already!"

    "Sorry, can't do that."

    "What, why!?"

    "Because this is only a preview, and we can't reveal too much in it."

    "Damnit. Hey, Author, hurry up already!"

    "I'm working on it. I'm working on it. Sheesh, give a guy a break.

    "Rest when you're dead!"

    "Like that means anything in your universe."

    "You know what we mean. Get busy!"

    "Alright, alright. I will."


    Well, that's it, people. For now. I hope you enjoyed even this little bit, and are eager for the full chapter. Until then, I wish you a good day.

    - Powerdrainer.




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  • 14w, 4d
    New Story.

    Hello, everyone. I have published a new fic, which is connected to both Guilt of a Phantom, and Silver Spirit. Go check it out.

    The Baltimare Incident.

    It tells the story of what happens during the events that were mentioned in GoaP and SS, and it will give more backstory to these two fics.

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  • 24w, 5d
    Silver Spirit, ghost yell.

    5 comments · 120 views
  • 48w, 1d
    Song of the Wolves

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This story, in Danny Phantom's p.o.v., takes place after the series, but starts during the finale Phantom Planet.

In MLP's p.o.v., it takes place after season 2, but with changes that are not canon with season 3.

The story will take an alternate direction completely different from the finale Phantom Planet.

Danny Fenton, just your average teenage boy.

He goes to school, has to deal with bullies, homework, fight ghosts and keep his other half a secret from his family.

After an accident with his parents ghost portal his D.N.A. became infused with ectoplasm, turning him into a half ghost.

Now Danny Phantom, he took it onto him to fight ghost while struggling to learn to control his new found powers. Luckily he has his two best friends, Sam and Tucker, with him to help him deal with the everyday ghost life.

Together they went through all kinds of supernatural adventures. Together they stood in the way of many ghost attacks. Together they kept their city, Amity Park, safe. Together. Always together.

Until that one fateful day. The day that everything changed. The day that three became two and Danny's life changed forever. Struggling with his guilt for his failings and letting down the one meaning most to him he runs away, desperately trying  to get away from the nightmares that haunt his memories. But, as the saying goes: ''You can run, but you can't hide.''


Click: Silver Spirit, Ghost of Equestria, to go to the side story of this fic. Which is important, as a lot of things happening in this fic are important for Guilt of a Phantom.

And click: The Baltimare Incident for the story that happened before Goap and SS, GoE.

Read them in this order.

1. Guilt of a Phantom.

2. The Baltimare Incident after the chapter: Hunting the Hunters Hunter. Earth.

3. Silver Spirit, Ghost of Equestria after the chapter: The Day the World Looked Pink-ie Pie.

And click Song of the Wolves for another story connected with this fic.


Do know that the chapters have both spelling and grammar issues. I haven't been working with an editor, which I have fixed now. I'm going through the chapters to tackle any and all mistakes that either I, or my editor might find, to make it all more coherent. The same thing holds true for my attempts at the dialect for Applejack and Apple Bloom.

First Published
2nd Jun 2013
Last Modified
2nd Jun 2014
#1 · 77w, 3d ago · · · Nightmare. ·

I remember that show. It kicked ass. Good story!

#2 · 77w, 3d ago · · · Nightmare. ·

Take my YAYS!

:flutterrage:

#3 · 77w, 3d ago · · · Nightmare. ·

Jesus man. 10k words for your first chapter?:pinkiegasp:

Wow, I'm impressed. I haven't even started reading and I'm already liking it.:twilightsmile:

#4 · 77w, 3d ago · · · Nightmare. ·

Okay, I actually read it... most of it. I mainly skipped over everything that was from the show. And I have to say I'm a bit disappointed with this fic. Equestria with tears in reality where all humans can go into it? Hmmm.:unsuresweetie:

I'll track it, but I hope you can really entertain later on.

#5 · 77w, 3d ago · · · Nightmare. ·

This is a pretty good story. I look forward to reading more. Will you be pairing Danny with anypony?

#6 · 77w, 2d ago · · · Nightmare. ·

Not the best start.... :unsuresweetie: but I will keep an eye on this, just to see where it goes.

#7 · 77w, 2d ago · · · Nightmare. ·

>>2667942 It is not that simple. I have already told that Danny needed a pass to enter into Equestria, and so does anyone or pony else. They cant just go to one world and back as they see fit. It is carefully monitored, or as carefully as it can within the Danny Phantom universe, and they need a pass to traverse worlds. I will go a bit deeper in to this subject in a later chapter as  Danny will go through control and enter the realm of magical, multicolored ponies. As for the many tears in reality, I thought about it as a rippling effect, or seed as I call it in the fic. The first tear that appeared in Amity Park was the seed. It caused a ripple that went around the world and slowly opened other tears to other parts of the magical realm. These tears are guarded by both sides, and you cant just walk through. I will tell more about this in future chapters. As part of the story, and Danny´s character development, we will see more and more parts of Danny´s past, and the changes that forces him to become the man he is today.

Well I cant tell much more without spoiling, but I hope that this will clarify certain details about the first chapter.:twilightsmile:

Anyhow, please continue to comment, and tell me what you like or don´t like, and how I could improve that what you don't like.

Thanks in advance. :pinkiehappy:

#8 · 77w, 2d ago · · · Nightmare. ·

>>2671078Well I know people needed passes... but Danny was living in a pretty shabby apartment. How could he afford a pass? Or did he steal it?

#9 · 77w, 2d ago · · · Nightmare. ·

>>2671165 He did save up for several months, and stopped paying his rent for a little while, giving him the amount of money he needed to afford the pass. Also, he still had a little bit of his life savings on him. But I do get your point, I might need to make a few alterations to make things a bit more logical.

Thanks for your input.:raritywink:

#10 · 77w, 2d ago · · · Nightmare. ·

>>2671179No problem. Any idea when the next chapter will be? And if it's not too much of a spoiler, about how many humans would you say actually went into Equestria?

#11 · 77w, 2d ago · · · Nightmare. ·

>>2671225 The next chapter is still unknown for release. I just started on it about an hour or two ago, already close to 2000 words. As for how many humans. Well there was first a large flood of humans and ponies going back and forth between the two worlds. That is one of the reasons why there is a control station at every tear. The full reason behind that particular reason though, I can not say. Not yet.:rainbowkiss:

I have not yet decided on a number of humans and ponies that traversed between worlds. It was a large number in the beginning, but now with more control it is reduced to a more manageable number. For now, just think of it as ponies/people going back and forth to learn about each others respectable worlds. And of course, ghosts. BEWARE. ahum.

I will cover more of this in future chapters.

#12 · 77w, 2d ago · · · Nightmare. ·

>>2671336Kay. Well I hope you can get the next chapter out soon.:twilightsmile:

#14 · 76w, 5d ago · · · Regret. ·

Wow. 12k. Longer than the last one.

#15 · 76w, 5d ago · · · Regret. ·

Why? Why must you write an even longer chapter and STILL not have him in Equestria yet?:fluttershysad:

#16 · 76w, 5d ago · · · Regret. ·

>>2690259 Just so that you know, Danny is in Equestria.

It is in the last part, yes. But he did cross to the other side.

#17 · 76w, 5d ago · · · Regret. ·

>>2690282I know he is... but it's there for like, one sentence. I mean, why would you write so much just to stop when he got to Equestria?

#18 · 76w, 4d ago · 5 · 1 · Regret. ·

>>2690292 Did I stop writing? Huh, I didn't know the story was already complete. Strange? :rainbowhuh:

#19 · 76w, 4d ago · · · Regret. ·

Great chapter.

#20 · 76w, 4d ago · · · Regret. ·

>>2692959You didn't. You just stopped writing the chapter.

#21 · 75w, 6d ago · · · Arrival. ·

Great chapter. So Danny has caught Luna and Celestia's interest. What will that lead too? Will we be seeing Dani later in the story?

#22 · 75w, 5d ago · · · Arrival. ·

>>2717187I do have plans for Dani, but I can't say anything about it. The same can be said for the princesses, the will play some role in Danny's life, but how... Well I can't say. You know.. Spoilers :twilightsheepish:

#23 · 74w, 1d ago · · · Arrival. ·

OMG!  I think I know who Danny is gonna be paired with!  But I won't tell because that may ruin your story!

I hope you post the next chapter soon, because if it isn't posted soon, this comment is gonna drive a lot of people crazy!

#24 · 74w, 9h ago · · · Arrival. ·

>>2777314

I hope you post the next chapter soon, because if it isn't posted soon, this comment is gonna drive a lot of people crazy!

...Hmmm.

#25 · 74w, 9h ago · · · Arrival. ·

>>2777314 But seriously. I am working on the next chapter for some time now, and it is going to be a big one. And seeing that I have posted only 10k chapters so far, that means something. It is currently over 15k, and more is being added.

Yesterday I even had a moment were I had a light bulb appear above my head, which, all in all, was weird, but I chalked it up to magic. Not sure how my co-workers responded to it though. :twilightblush:

This moment of enlightenment made me change several things in the chapter, and what I am going to add to it. It will, however, give more depth to the caracters in some way. I do try to stay true to the canon characters which we all came to love and respect, but not everything can be the same in a world that I create. Especially with the Danny Phantom characters. They are six years older since the series stopped, and a lot has happened to them during this time. So some changes will be in the characters that does not seems like that of the series, but I try to stay true to them as much as I can. Luckily I have a lot of reference material. :pinkiehappy:

As for your idea of who Danny will be shipped with, Pm me with what you think. I will not confirm or deny anything, but I am curious to see what you came up with.

Also, :yay: seven down votes so far. This story is somehow doing a lot better than I originally thought. Probably magic, or possession by ghosts, Or magical ghosts. Now that would be something. :twilightoops:

Ahum, anyhow..... Right, let me know what you think of the story so far, (this is for anypony that reads this comment!), And tell me what could be better, what you liked and any mistakes I have made. I try to better my own writing, and have succeeded in some way already, but I need to improve even more, I  know I can do it. So, please tell me about any and all mistakes, or what I did good, and I try to use this in the future.

Ok, this was a lot more than I set out to write down, so I just leave it at that.

Have a good day.

#26 · 72w, 3d ago · 3 · · A fresh start. ·

I go to my favorites looking for something to read and I see this. Then I see the word count...

JESUS CHRIST! This chapter is a beast!

#27 · 72w, 3d ago · 2 · · A fresh start. ·

"What are you going to say next? Maybe he is a ghost too!?"

Ohhh, the irony!

And I love Spike's comment to Danny's apron!

The princesses also seem to find Danny mysterious and interesting.  It may not be long until Twilight or the princesses find out his secret!  NO SPOILERS!!!!

Keep the chapters coming, Powerdrainer!

Great chapter my friend! Please update soon!

Oh god, the shadow just absorbed NMM.

Oh god, the shadow just absorbed NMM.

#31 · 70w, 3d ago · 4 · · A fresh start. ·

"Dannycus Humanicus"?...i think i face-palmed so hard it rivaled Carl's by a milipoint.

The chapter was good.  Quite a lot of humor with the CMC!  And poor Luna can't help Danny.  I hope the next chapter is more exciting than this one!  I can wait another week or 2.

Danny's shadow + NMM

Hmmm... Frightmare anyone?

:pinkiehappy:

And this is my first time posting for this story sooooo I shall say~

GOOD JOB SIR! (or Madame) I loves the story and hope ta see more~

PS. Anyone know if the rumor of new Danny Phantom season coming 2014 true or no? (heard it somewhere, forgot where, and was wondering if it true or not) Cause I too wonder what's with his white hair turn black hair in ghost mode dealio and wish the creators would explain the dang thing...

PSS. (semi-grammar snob time) "brake" should be break if you're talking about taking a break. Sorry, just irks me. I high five my face for you.

:facehoof:

>>2915741 It is sir, and I too heard something about a new season, but I cannot confirm it though.

And with his white hair turning black in ghost mode, :rainbowderp: don't you mean the other way around? You know, black turning white. Just like Michael Jackson.

And thanks for the correction, I have edited it and if you spot anything else, please let me know.:pinkiehappy:

>>2915843

Nah I meant what I meant. Ya know regularly Danny's hair is black when he's human right? When he turns ghost, his hair would turn white. But during the episode where he gets his ghost wail power (the episode where he versus his future self), his hair turns black during the shout while his power was still on. Then it reverts back to white while his ghost mode was still on before reverting back to human. Not sure if it was because of his power being drained because of the shout or it was a "level up" but it confused me ever since I saw it years ago. The creators never really explained it... so yeah...

:rainbowwild:

For your purview(starts at 0:20):

>>2915903 Ah, like that. Yeah I don't know how that worked either, probably due to the severe drain on his powers like you said. But whatever the case, I do hope that the rumors of the new season are true, maybe we will get some answers there.

How does this story not have more views?!

Words fail me; all I can say is that this fic is awesome. It does everything perfectly, imo.

Grammar mistakes and misspellings notwithstanding (it's not intend, it's intent; ex: with hostile intent).

All in all, I LOVE THIS STORY.

>>2950889 Thanks for the correction, I will make sure to keep an eye on it in the future :twilightsmile:

As for not having more views, it's probably because the story never has been featured. :ajsleepy:

Oh well, maybe next chapter. It would probably also help if those that have not yet up-voted the story would do so. There are 83 favorites, and 63 up-votes so there are still some who could make a difference.

Any how, thanks for your input, and have a good day sir or madam. :pinkiehappy:

Sorry, haven't done this in forever. First.

Now that that's out of the way. Good chapter as usual. Nice close to 20k words. More than makes up for the long wait time.

Edit: Oh god, the Nightmare is coming back.:facehoof:

Danny´ lesson to Twilight about basic astronomy reminds me to Peter Dickinson´ one to Omadon in "Flight of Dragons".

>>2973898

Oh god, the Nightmare is coming back.

Maybe, maybe not. just wait and see what I have planned. I am 95.2 percent sure you don't know what I came up with. :derpytongue2:

>>2974300I have a fairly good guess, but that's all it is.

You had to break the fourth wall, didn't you Pinkie!

brake->break

Ugh I am to tired for this
to->too

as far as tho go
tho->to

Awesome chapter, grammar passable, and misspellings at a minimum.

It's 4 am! Why are you posting this!:twilightangry2:

>>3060177 Well, it is 1 pm over here... So, yeah.:twilightblush:

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