SkyScraper Intermedate. A school were everybody fits in. Jocks, Whores, Nerds, Emos, Fanboys, those kids who wont shut up about one game, all year round, and the social outcasts. The end of the 8th grade finally has come, Formal Dance apporaching, not to mention spring break.
Could Things really get better?
Or is everything going to suck?
Find out in this eventful tale of romance! Or whatever it is...
Made by Myself and MrDoctorPinkie
Edited by Me
its good keep it up
this is a good story. you did a great job of portraying the humanized versions of the main 6.
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Thanks for the suppport!
It means alot to me.
This is my first romance fic and my second fic in all, so I'm not so sure how this'll turn out.
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you're welcome!
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Its defiantly yours alright,
Nice so far. I like Colton best. He seems classy. And who exactly is Ruby?
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Sorry, suposed to be Rarity. Fixed
Okay, I'm sorry, but this is a huge pet peeve of mine. When a new character starts to speak, please make a new paragraph for it. Not doing this makes an otherwise very good story unnecessarily difficult to read, and therefore much less likable. I favourited your story anyways, but please remember to do that.
Thank you for your concern! I will take that into notice, and just to say, this was written on PiratePad, i dunno if that changes much,.
This is fim fiction. Please try to use the main 6 more 'cause this chapter was mostly oc/human based and not at all interesting.
err well i think that if you use the main six more it will be epic
Sorry for the long delay. Vsbloom and Emily dash, your getting your wish.
this is good please update
That just made my week.
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2005673 i aim to please
Well alright, Next chapter will defiantly be up tomarow.
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Totally.
good chapter i get slapped a lot too
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Thank you, kind sir!
"we"
are there more of you, or are you referring to the royal we?
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Nope, Gman and I wrote and are writting this.
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Actually it's both answers.
We very appreciate your(Ith) Concern(Ith)
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thou is most certainly welcome
Well, The next chapter will be up today. Im feeling creative, or thou is.
EDIT; Ok so sorry! I was having "Windows 8 Problems." Go figure.
Looks as if someone *coughgmangough* has been "disabled" from his laptop
Darn, and were getting to the better parts.
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Yeah. I am...
(This was sent on the kindle that you can only read on)
Procrastination is stopped, among with a re fill of motovation. I apologize for the "year" wait
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HELLYEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
This needs LOTS more proofreading. Grammar is awful in this chapter
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Sorry man, I'd edit now but
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*girl
thanks:) your story deserves alot more views
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Thank you. But for now, We will be completely shutting down this story (after long gaps :0 ) for good. As you may or may not know, The Hub has came out with a movie that is now in theaters known as "MLP: Equestrian Girls."
The movie is too similar to this poorly made fic with the human stuff, that I will proboaly watch and adjust the whole story line of this by 300%, finding out all the factors and other info thats in the movie, and apply it to the new story. it'll make much more sense
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Okay then, that's cool. I look forward to seeing the revisions.
... Du Fuq lol jk nice chapter