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And so the game "Robot Sentry Attack" was created.
Whoa. Action-packed, intense, thrilling.
Keep up the good work, good sir!
*Writes down Black Morrigan=treat for changelings*
I didn't know Soldier was a Pegasus.
Ah well, excellent story otherwise. Can't wait for the next!
2167542 He's not. I'll correct the typo now.
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....I love this story so goddamn much.
Just saying.
(Before Reading)
I think the terrible force Celestia had a nightmare of was the RED team
robot spah?
I like how you managed to insert canon Twilicorn into the story. This is going to be awesome.
So... Princess Twilight's here... Cheerilee managed to resist and repel her own Corruption... Berry Punch just took several levels in Badass by actually attacking Slendermane (it's not quite Punching out Cthulu, but it's up there...) and Brutality is gone for good.
Oh, and somehow, Grey Mann's forces have found their own way to Equestria. That certainly isn't good, but hopefully means that BLU will soon get in contact with RED and find out what's going on over there.
Can't wait to see where this goes next!
“You need a permit to build here,”
i came
I'm... more than a little iffy about you introducing Twilicorn into the mix. You were doing so well without her and honestly, while your retconning works here just as well as it did with Discord and in other places, I gotta say, the same problems apply here as they do to the show. Twilicorn just unbalances things too much and throws too much focus upon her as opposed to the other characters, adding too many snags in terms of character interaction and other actions to ever be executed without serious problems. Not to mention we're already portraying the team as a bunch of insane powerhouses here, and Twilicorn just makes things ridiculous.
Also, to me, seriously lessens the drama of Celestia being driven insane now that she's got a surefire heir in line that apparently is just as good at her job as any of the other princesses.
You're a good writer. I'll stick around a while to see where you go with this... but I just dunno. This could very well have been a bad thing to introduce beyond a simple "super sayian" mode. As in "game breaker" bad.
That was just to celebrate for the day being saved yet again all thanks to me mates, feel bad for gem-sentry though.
This is beautiful...
...oh my god yes. I love you so much. You've brought in the Fears! And, if my guess is correct, which gets even more love, Redlight!!!
this is really good, but i'm worried that twilicorn will be a bit too OP.
also- Cheerilee as most powerful earth pony? eh, i'm ok with this. points for originality; most go with AJ, Mac, or Harbinger Doom (interestingly enough, i've found him and Bulldozer Shy in quite a few fics but have never found who originally created them)
One of the greatest 20k words I have ever read. Thank you.
This chapter. I approve it.
Nice Doctor bits. Since you brought him in, would like to see more. Loving it (the whole of it), still not sold on Twilicorn but that will pass. Good stuff!
Edit: You should have a spinoff of the Doctor and his adventures against the Fears and whatever else he faced.
I can imagine Fluttershy's next level of Glare... KINDNESS GRASP!!!
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Data: Fluttershy channels the essence of kindness to suppress her target as well as deal (250/400/550) (+(1.3 per element power point)) elemental damage over 2.5 seconds.
Cost: 150/150/150 Mana
Cooldown: 120/100/80 Seconds
(Fun Fact: All the techincal data is correct. )
Reference: leaguecraft.com
So, my question is what are you going to do if it turns out that The Doctor knew his name all along or that his name was never bad or something, since I think you would have it covered if we did not in fact learn the Doctor's name by the season finale.
Also, I cannot wait to find out who the slender hoodie is, my theory is that it is Slenderman who wants to ruin Slendermane's plan for infringing on his turf
I had a dream this story update, now I just need to start a company dedicated to keeping the general population ignorant of people with powers.
hmm, Cheerilee broke free of the Nightmare, and the Nightmare continued living, that's an interesting twist. But what if someone was to make art of the element combos, Solderp and all them. SO. AWESOME.
I've been enjoying this story a lot, really. The only problem that I'm now having is the sudden multiplication of enemies. If it's not one it's another suddenly being shot out onto the field. They're just being stacked on top of each other with little to no break in between them. Plus, Slenderman. I may not be an Eldritch abomination expert but I'm pretty sure he's not invincible until the end of the story where everyone has joined forces.
This story should be turned into a book once it's complete. I would buy it five times over. It's that good.
When Twilight went alicorn mode , I flipped my lid and started playing "You May Call Me Father" from Bayonetta.
I admit that now things may become a little corny regarding her, but it's mostly because what was supposed to be a three-parter got split up between seasons. Twilight is developed and established, but Twilicorn isn't. In canon, is she annoyed by the title? How does it affect her friends? What are their reactions, after the coronation hype has died down? We aren't going to know until next season, so until then, this just doesn't seem as badass as it would have before the S3 finale, or as complete as it probably will once S4 comes. It's still badass, though, and tying it to Sniper's troubles and an"accept yourself" moral make this one of the best chapters yet.
AHEM!
Ready?
*takes a deeeeeeeeeeeep breath!*
YOU MAGNIFICENT BASTARD!
Oh!
Almost forgot!
You are the God of Retconning.
...
That's all I had to say.
this is an amazing fiction, keep up the good work
Ah yeah that was awesome.
MOAR!
Also:
I lol'd at this.
first you take into account discords reforming, then twilight alicornification (it is a word, look it up )
you sir, are a genius at altering the story to take into account official canon well done plus I had a minor fangasm when twilight alicorned up
and I cannot wait for pyro/trixie, twilight/medic and zecora/spy chapters, keep up the good work
That Was Amazing Mate
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter.
Wonder What Happens Next Chapter.
Who else cried at the end?
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It's like an episode in text-form!
You go, Cheerily!
...
Um, does Barricade have a clone or something?
Anyway, This had so much win in it I don't think it gets much better; A Nightmare got EATEN by Changelings, Berry Punch attacked an Eldritch monster with a broken bottle of booze, Twilight went Super-Saiyen 3 on evil-sniper, and so much more-
I salute you, sir!
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Maybe he just wants to see if he can beat 'himself' as it were.
I. Can't. Believe. I read all 20k of that. Wow.
You have amazed me once again KM!
Off to play TF2!
I wouldn't be surprised if Cheerilee kept some of the smoozy plant-powers (but nice, of course) or if the changelings turned out to be leftover from when the previous Element of Love was shattered (possibly by smooze?).
Great chapter, but I really don't want to be Rainbow Dash right now.
It's her turn to have a Nightmare after all.
I thought that they were Daleks for a while there :P
But finally I can see Rainbow Sniper!
Best fusion is best.
Also, that scene with Sniper accepting BCS as himself reminded me vividly of a similar scene from a comic.
It's still a marvel to see/read.
2169110 that was also a theory I had
Greatness! Although I would love to see more Pyro action.
[Requesting permission to enter retreat mode.]
[Negative.]
[Requesting permission to enter retreat mode.]
[Negative.]
[Requesting permission to run the fuck away from the magical creature that can probably junk my metal ass in under a millisecond.]
[Stay there or I'll junk you myself.]
Just realized.
We've seen Painis Cupcake, Christian Brutal Sniper, do we get to see Vagineer in the future?
(I'm not sure if I want to of not...)
2167794 KnightMysterio originally made them. I referenced/cameo'd both in 'From Nobody to Knightmare' and Blackwing liked them enough to decree them canon to the Chessgame of the Gods.
You mess with the foals, I break out the hot coals!
Also you're doing an ace job with those retcons. Although I am rather curious as to how Twilacorn will affect the flow of the story. Do you have plans to edit chapters further back to include references to Pyroland and Twilacorn? Eh.
Also, the robotic spy sapping the gem sentry was a bit of an idiotic move on his part. Unless, of course course, the point was to send a message. Hrm! Food for thought.
these nightmares are so annoying!
That bit with the tourture devices scared me. But damn did I like the chills it gabe me. Wonder what the next fusion is going to be... hoping for Pixie.(Yes Pyro and Trixie's fusion name. Sue me.)
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I seriously thought those were Cyberponies talking for the longest time.
And to the author himself, where are you getting all this stuff about the Doctor's adventures in Equestria? I know absolutely nothing about any of these events.
Were the fighting styles of the mane 6 inspired by Fighting is Magic? If so, then cool.
This story is so awesome! Cant wait for more Rainbow Sniper action!