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Sorry for my outburst, I am VERY excited for the next chapter, Rainbow and Sniper = Sorry, its just so...
Wait
Soldier and Derp-
This fic is beautiful, you are a genius, thank you so much you wonderful person, thank you, thank you so much. I hope one day to make a TF2 story, keep going my friend, I have faith.
Again, thank you, so, so much
Thank you...
Wow is this epic. I really can't wait for the final installment of this arc.
I sense the birth of the merge of Pyro and Trixie on the horizon. There will be fireworks!
BUUUUUUUUUURN!!!!!!!!!!
Oh shit is going to hit the fan agin
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I shall slap your hoof! *slaps hoof*
Oh yes...an update. I am crying tears of joy.
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It updated bro. Still regret stabbing me?
So I hop in the shower and when I emerge lo and behold a new chapter of Waking Nightmares.
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYY!
Am I right to say ROBOTS!?!?
Hehehe...
HEHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!.....
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Noooooooo... There will simply be FI-RRRRRRRREEEEEE!!!!!!
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*Slaps to the Moon*
IS THAT OKAY FOR YOU?
Man, I hope the break out starts with Dr. Adrian getting hit with jarate. Magic or science, jarate breaks all disguises!
Also, a few formatting hiccups I noticed...
Rarity breaks off in the middle of speaking, and the second Deirdra should still be Derpy.
Probably should be "hope so" there...
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Okay. Noted and corrected.
The hazards of writing at 3 in the morning.
...*Death from awesomeness*
That's all.
The mercs are introduced in the order of the Meet the Team videos.
This is developing nicely. I actually didn't notice when Zecora started rhyming again until she herself noticed it. Brilliant pacing.
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But where is SANDVICH? He is the most important one! They won't be able to break out without the great Sandvich!
4667830 Congratulations! You win a cookie. That you must get yourself. :3
Oh, boy. They aren't going to know WHAT hit them......
The Medic in an insane asylum, but he's not a patient.
This confuses me.
i love how you put the tf2 characters in the order of the meet the team videos
It's Fräulein, not Fraulein
Aaaaah, so that's why the cake's kids aren't there. Probably why rarity and sweetie's parents aren't ether, they were off traveling somewhere.
Like I said last Chapter, Prixie (Pyro/Trixie) is imminent.
i love how you had each of the elements interact with their respective class. Very clever! Ditto with Medic's message!
PLEASE update soon! The Suspense is killing me!
btw: Yay! Pound and Pumpkin are safe~!
Nyu~!
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4668026 Apple Bloom's still hugging her, she's just commenting on Big Mac being Big Mac.
Oh medic... you are great...
Aaaaand... huh boy. Inevitable bombshell to be dropped on Applejack...
glancing at Rory as he shifted the
tranqpiss loaded sniper rifle in his hands.---FTFY
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Doctor Adrian is the Nightmare version of Doctor Horse(the doctor from read it and weep) or the robot commander medic(forget his name).
4667752 Like fire~! Hellfire~!!
I'm curious as to Timothy Reks' crimes
BURN, BABY, BURN!!!
This story is awesome. I've neglected to tell you that after all this time, but this is truly a marvelous narrative.
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You smart son of a...
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*SUDDENLY REALLY GIGGLY*
I LOVE IT
YES YES YES YES YES
Trixie Pyro merge comeing
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Thank you for keeping their original names in the narration. I wouldn't be able to keep track of all these new names.
4667630 *slaps hoof* Kinda weird, slapping a hoof...
4668042 I know, I just wanted to make the MAH BOI reference
I demand that either they blow up the roof in the main room and rappel in for the rescue, or the next fusion makes a new door. With fire.
how long then Intel the next chapter? please tell.
4669138 i would go with this song personally. Fire on the mountain feels a little... tame for Pyro.
4670012 Your honesty is appreciated, and I'm sorry you're not liking the way things are going. But for purposes of the scenario I have in mind, I need this scenario presented as is, the villains combining the familiar with the unfamiliar. (If I had to cite an inspiration of any kind, I'd cite Insterstella 5555 and what the bad guy did to the aliens he kidnapped as inspiration for how I rewrote the memories of the ponies.)
I hope you enjoy future chapters, however if you decide to stop reading from this point on, then I will not be sad, nor will I be angry. My only regret will be that I failed to entertain you, for which I am truly sorry.
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Damn right
AWESOME!!!
One little thing I caught.
4669338 Maybe clopping?
oh wait, that sounds bad.
Thanks, fandom.
So are we going to get the Pyro-Trixie fusion? I'm hoping so. Because of all the Nightmare attacks, this mind breaking makes me want the bad guys to actually suffer. Like really, fuck them, I don't care what Batman says, kill them. I think even just half the Pyro will suffice for that.
Having Trixie break through the illusion of insanity gives interactions with Pyro, the craziest of the lot, potential for greatness. This one scene has already done more to bring them together than that lame-brain idea of having Trixie absorb Engineer's bad memories. Besides not making a lick of sense, and having little interaction with Pyro herself, it didn't improve their connection at all. I suppose it was suppose to be saying that they're both touched in the head... but Trixie doesn't seem changed at all! It doesn't even get brought up here, in an freaking mental institute! Besides the actual memory transference scene, Trixie's suffering is never brought up except for a throwaway conversation during the Running of the Leaves. She makes dealing with trauma seem like such a breeze, that it's actually just distanced her from Pyro.
Also, for the fusion name, don't go with Tryro. It sounds too weird. I would recommend:
Pryxie
Pryamoon
Trixie Pyramoon (it would be cool to make this version of the Pyro verbose as Trixie, and give a fuller name).