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hmm seems like a good fan fic though slendermane i wonder how it will be used in the story, it makes me skeptical, otherwise another tf2 fan fic is nice i have the ponies going to tf2 universe and BLU going to equastria kinda interseting to see how you both portray the charcters and compare each, so ill track this and keep reading keep up the good writing
Very good so far keep it up! Really enjoyable
So THAT'S what happened to Ditzy's husband and AJ's parents....Ponyville is almost as safe a place to live as Dream Valley.
By Celestia, this story is MAGNIFICENT!
this is good
Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Too much shit going on.
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This fic REALLY deserves more attention!
Poor pyro
I'd say Slendermane isn't really fitting for the foot-in-mouth humour that TF2 puts on death. However, crazed followers of Discord might work, as they would probably be insane enough to give the BLU team some competition in the batshit-insane department. That, and exploding chocolate milk.
And I have to ask the question on everyone's mind. Will Sniper's Jarate basicly be him pissing on the target from above?
oh my god...best...fic...EVER
While I'm not entirely sure how well you'll pull off BLU vs. Slendermane, what you've got so far brilliant. I'm honestly a little confused as to why I haven't seen this on Equestria Daily yet. The story is going at a good pace and everyone is in character (though some of the accents have been inconsistent). Considering FiM is character driven and TF2 is all slapstick and dark humor, it was a good idea to give BLU tragic backstories to give them depth to match the ponies and explain their acceptance of the comedy of tragedy. It was also smart to make the peaceful ponies afraid of the violent nature of BLU's fighting styles.
One thing I just want to point out is that Celestia referring to herself as a princess and not a queen makes perfect sense and doesn't need a backstory to explain it. Equestria is a diarchy ruled by two sisters whom are presumably of equal in power. Since they are siblings and not spouses, neither one can use the title of queen, because while there can be multiple princes and princesses, there can only be on queen and/or king. This is why Equestria is really a principality.
Yo dawg, I liked this site so much I got an account, so I can keep up with this story while I keep up with this story.
I like it.
It is at times like this I wish I could draw, so I could draw BLU ponies vs. Slendermane xD
This is amazing!!! Keep it up!!!
Also how the characters react to BLU are priceless.
Spy:May I borrow your earpiece?
Spy:This is scout! Rainbows make me cry!
Best joke in this chapter.
Damn....I kinnds feel sorry for Pyro . She is my favorite character in TF2 so i like her very much
I'm thinking maybe Pyro has multiple personalities? She says when she took over, she swore she'd protect "her"... So there was a trauma and the Pyro personality took over from the other one to keep herself from getting traumatized? Ehh, I'm just thinking. Can't wait for more!
Well, tis is turning out to be quite amazing! I quite enjoy how the mane 6 react to BLU, and the backstories for the BLU Members are a nice touch.
Also, just wondering: Is slendermane originally from Silent Ponyville, or is that a reference like how the whole sadistic Pinkie storyarc was a reference to cupcakes?
Another missing word,after pyro's nightmare, "She something strange". Guessing there's supposed to be a 'said' in there.
Cool! you added Pumpkin and Pound.
Okay. In the FF.Net version, this was written before "Baby Cakes" aired. Nice to see them added. Although…
-"When she woke up from her dream, she something strange…"
Huh? Please correct.
And one question: As this is absolutely after "Sisterhooves Social", what's Amethyst Star's (Sparkler's) role in Derpy's family?
This is great so far, the griffon (I think that's what it was) attack provides a good explanation for the abscene of Mr. and Mrs. Apple as well as Derpy's biological father, maybe that's what happend to the parents of Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and Scootaloo.
The merceneries having somewhat tragic background stories is a nice touch, I feel especially bad for Pyro.
This is the best TF2+MLP FiM crossover fic I've ever read.
P.S.: I find it intresting how you made the Cakes immediate relatives of the Pie family, good use of Lauren Faust's statment that the Cakes love Pinkie Pie as a daughter.
I think I understand Pyro.
Again Engineer is my favorite character in this cross. Not to mention I'm looking forward to more Sniper and Spy.
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Chimera attack.
very good, long chapters.
Soilder{RAGING WAR CRY} heavy{BRUTAL JUGGERNAUT} engie{ANGEL HEARTED BUILDER} spy{KILLING GHOST} medic{THE CHATTERING CLOWN} scout{THE LAUGHING DESTRUCTION ? D} sniper{HEART OF ICE} demoman{THE GEAD ONE?} pyro{LOST SOUL OF FIRE}
935830 I'm pretty sure the titles were said in the order the classes are on the class selection screen
"ThE ChAtTeRiNg ClOwN..." = Scout
"tHe RaGiNg WaR cRy..." = Soldier
"ThE lOsT sOuL oF fIrE..." = Pyro
"tHe LaUgHiNg DeStRuCtIoN..." = Demoman
"tHe BrUtAl JuGgErNaUt..." = Heavy
"ThE aNgEl-HeArTeD bUiLdEr..." = Engineer
"ThE dEaD oNe..." = Sniper (Harasses everyone, so is targeted by other team)
"ThE hEaRt Of IcE..." = Medic (Likes to perform "surgery")
"tHe KiLlInG gHoSt..." = Spy
Great chapter, im suprised each chapter has plenty of words in them. Keep up the good work
Pyro leaned down to stare at him for a long moment, making Angel squirm uncomfortably, before saying, “Well, aren't you the cutest little hunk of hassenpfeffer I've ever seen?”
Angel ran for his life. He wouldn't come out of hiding until late tomorrow.
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nicely done, good lols inded
Awwwwwww
Fluttershy shushing Pyro to sleep almost made me cry :")
The scout he ran fast and died a virgin
"my holographic disguises are now actual shape-shifting,"
Wait, he shape-shifted into Rarity...
...
Oh.
Oh my.
Aside from a few personal Preference . (pyros gender not being hidden and being shipped with engi being the big two) Good story I enjoy it so far and will keep reading great job. I love how you put references to TF2 memes in (rainbows make scout cry) (spy talking about hat fortress)
There are 2 pyros im ok with
girl pyro
and super gentlemen pyro
Slenderman, ponies AND TF2.
I approve.
Good thing the BLU team won't be missed, as the Red Team now has robots to deal with. I wish the robo-Scouts would shout good ol' micspam (Need a dispenser here!) when your team was getting owned.
Big word for such a simple farm pony.
THREE SLENDIES?!?!?!
and so it begins....
This is how I think it goes.
"ThE ChAtTeRiNg ClOwN..." = Scout
"tHe RaGiNg WaR cRy..." = Soldier
"ThE lOsT sOuL oF fIrE..." = Pyro
"tHe LaUgHiNg DeStRuCtIoN..." = Demoman
"tHe BrUtAl JuGgErNaUt..." = Heavy
"ThE aNgEl-HeArTeD bUiLdEr..." = Engineer
"ThE dEaD oNe..." = Medic
"ThE hEaRt Of IcE..." = Sniper
"tHe KiLlInG gHoSt..." = Spy
Now that was rude of them. Sure a craze over socks does sound weird, but the whole thing stopping because of Luna liking them?
Poor Luna.
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I think Medic was the dead one. Remember Medic talking about how many times he's been killed, and how?
should it be said??
All we need now is a storm of mann co supply crates to bury ponyville.
So, Slendermane (Slendermare?) is spying on Celestia. Hmm, interesting.
The amount of 'giggling' in this story....
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1565759 yea I saw the same
Pyro is humming 'If you believe in magic', right? And sombody should make a soundtrack arragement for this story!... Pretty please.
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You can talk!?