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Luna's nightmares herald the arrival of nine soldiers from another world: the nine mercenaries of Builders League United. When they arrive, they are turned into ponies! As they adjust to life in Equestria and investigate the strange goings on, Celestia is haunted by a terrible force...
hmm seems like a good fan fic though slendermane 
i wonder how it will be used in the story, it makes me skeptical, otherwise another tf2 fan fic is nice i have the ponies going to tf2 universe and BLU going to equastria kinda interseting to see how you both portray the charcters and compare each, so ill track this and keep reading keep up the good writing 
I'd say Slendermane isn't really fitting for the foot-in-mouth humour that TF2 puts on death. However, crazed followers of Discord might work, as they would probably be insane enough to give the BLU team some competition in the batshit-insane department. That, and exploding chocolate milk.
And I have to ask the question on everyone's mind. Will Sniper's Jarate basicly be him pissing on the target from above? 
While I'm not entirely sure how well you'll pull off BLU vs. Slendermane, what you've got so far brilliant. 
I'm honestly a little confused as to why I haven't seen this on Equestria Daily yet. The story is going at a good pace and everyone is in character (though some of the accents have been inconsistent). Considering FiM is character driven and TF2 is all slapstick and dark humor, it was a good idea to give BLU tragic backstories to give them depth to match the ponies and explain their acceptance of the comedy of tragedy. It was also smart to make the peaceful ponies afraid of the violent nature of BLU's fighting styles.
One thing I just want to point out is that Celestia referring to herself as a princess and not a queen makes perfect sense and doesn't need a backstory to explain it. Equestria is a diarchy ruled by two sisters whom are presumably of equal in power. Since they are siblings and not spouses, neither one can use the title of queen, because while there can be multiple princes and princesses, there can only be on queen and/or king. This is why Equestria is really a principality.
Luna's harness dissolved off of her, her eyes glowing with power as she stalked towards the Diamond Dogs and Dig Dogs. Pyro, giggling madly and leaving flaming hoofprints, stalked forward with her, Luna's body seeming to absorb what little light there was in the room, until only Pyro's flames and Luna's glowing eyes provided the illumination...
Finished reading this and i really love it.
This is the best FIM/TF2 crossover I've read, (I've only read three, This one included...) So Awsome! 
I shall now glare at the screen until the next update comes down from the heavens. 
Or climbs up from the depths of hell... what ever you prefer. 
I usually avoid crossovers like wildfire, but this one exceeded all my expectations! (Not to mention the size of the chapters... Dat size is magnificent!)
Loving the story thus far and even though I have mixed feelings about the rollercoaster that keeps tossing the characters from "normal life" to "grimdark creepy", that is nothing that would stop me from wanting to read more and more of this.
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter :)
.....that's it!!!
When this finishes, I'm taking on the project of turning it into an actual audio recording! And oh how do I desperately want to!! I mean, I have ideas to try to gather up VAs and some music!! It sounds very ambitious, and it is, but it would turn out marvelously if done right!!
This is so good, and I'm glad it finally updated! :D
Ciao!!!
*SPOILERS N' STUFF*
So, is it safe to assume you'll be giving backstories to more of BLU?
This chapter was pretty awesome. What with FlutterHeavy, Alicorn-Applejack and Trixie outta nowhere 
This is some real good stuff (if slightly cheesy in places).
Keep it up!
As wierd as the whole HeavyShy scene was, this was a good chapter.
I know this is pretty far from the ending, but I'm honestly hoping that everyone gets to see BLU in their human forms before they go (if they do, in fact, leave). I can just see it - particularly with Heavy and Fluttershy.
"Aw, little shy pony, don't cry...don't...*lip quivers*...don't..." *Crushing bear hug* "WAAAAAAAAH!"
"Applejack shook head as watched Spy start to flirt with Zecora. found Demoman by himself, Berry Punch having gone off to stop Ruby Pinch from trying to climb a bookshelf to get a book she wanted. He was mixing ice cream and Scrumpy in a cup, making himself a float."
May want to revise it if you have time. ^
"Applejack shook his head he watched Spy start to flirt with Zecora. He found Demoman by himself, Berry Punch having gone off to stop Ruby Pinch from trying to climb a bookshelf to get a book she wanted. He was mixing ice cream and Scrumpy in a cup, making himself a float."
May want to revise it if you have time. ^
(FUUUU got the first one wrong sorry.)
I'm thinking maybe Pyro has multiple personalities? She says when she took over, she swore she'd protect "her"... So there was a trauma and the Pyro personality took over from the other one to keep herself from getting traumatized? Ehh, I'm just thinking. Can't wait for more!
Well, tis is turning out to be quite amazing! I quite enjoy how the mane 6 react to BLU, and the backstories for the BLU Members are a nice touch.
Also, just wondering: Is slendermane originally from Silent Ponyville, or is that a reference like how the whole sadistic Pinkie storyarc was a reference to cupcakes?
Awwwww... I was really hoping for a Masky Cupcakes chapter to relive the fun in new and exciting ways!
I even wrote a safe for work excerpt! This immediately following the part where Pinkie rips Masky pegasus's feathers off one by one and doing other stuff to the wings.
Masky Pegasus let out another of it's primal roars, which were so pain filled and miserable Pinkie couldn't decide if the roars pleasured her, knowing that she was causing this much pain to the pony who had blinded Rainbow, or if she was scared by it, as it sounded more unnatural than anything she had heard before. "Aww, does that hurt you?" Pinkie sneered, admiring where she had put the wings back in. The place above a pony's hooves was quite tender, even in supernatural beings. "I guess maybe you shouldn't have blinded my friend!" She cried. The party pony returned to her cart of fancy tools and weapons, including an odd shovel with a sharp jagged side invented by Soldier. She picked it up, wondering what the damages could be from pressing the toothed end into a certain pony's body, ore how much pain breaking it's legs by using this as a blunt weapon there would be. Pinkie gave a slight laugh at how many ideas this simple tool had, and soon it had grown into a roaring maniacal laughter, drowning out Masky's cries of agony.
So what do you people think? Shall it become a reality for this fanfic's fanon?
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