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So once again we have two Nightmare's to contend with, but it seems as though Equestria is whole heartedly bucked.
Column A: Nightmare Brutality (Not the most original name, imho) is gonna butcher our beloved crew while they're stuck inside his mind. Also, CBS seems a little... convoluted if you ask me. Not the concept of him being Sniper's darkest bits, but his back story. Just... it seems almost amateurish in that part.
Discord part was most intriguing. I also like how you're doing damage control for whatever storm the finale chucks our way.
Then Nightmare Gardener... aka... Cheerilee's Garden vs. Doctor Who and Co. THAT is going to be freaking incredible.
I yearn for me.
2074387 You never know. He might be making things up to throw the team off. *coughtotallynotanattemptatasavingthrow*
Also, I can work with almost anything. At this point, the only thing that could throw the story AU is the Crusaders actually getting their marks in-season.
CHEERILEE! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Also I started watching Doctor Who AND I GET THE REFERENCES NOW AHAHAAH
Damn, why you gonna kill children, it wrong
...Oh, this is not good. I'm really worried for Dash more than anything...
A school play- No. NO. Not THAT STORY!
The entrance to the dream sequence I can only think of this
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Someone had to post this.
Anyway, another great chapter! Nice played with Discord.
Yes the Christian brutal sniper is unleashed and their isn't a damn thing I can do about it!
Such win!
Cheerilee's Garden? Christian Brutal Sniper?? Leaving no GMOD beast or gory MLP fanfic unmentioned, aren't you? What's next, Vagineer???
Oh God, I just gave you ideas...
You're actually adapting the story based on Season Three as it airs? Damn. Respect.
It's amazing how you are integrating each new episode as it happens. The Discord bit really was the best part of the story so far.
...this hurts my brain.
Oh man, this is going to be fucking good.
Oh god an update... yes...
Are there going to be more Freak Fortress Bosses making a cameo?
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:/
What next Vagineer? Demopan? Ninjaspy?
I think I got that quote.
I sink - THINK! - you mean "zan"
I'm not even going to try to spell that word, but you dropped a syllable from it
So we've had Panis Cupcake, Demopan, and Christian Brutal Sniper, I swear if Vagineer doesn't appear ib this fic at some point I'm going to be disappointed.
I sense either TwiMedic or FireTrix for CBS and possibly Rainbow Sniper for Nightmare Gardener.
Also I see you are making predictions about the Season finale. I personally feel like how you wrote Alicorn Twilight is to some extent what the writers will use (the whole having it be a super mode minus the I did things I shouldn't have although that could be implyed if we see that Twilight has trouble controlling her Alicorn Powers)
Now your using cheerilee's garden, I lost count which infamous dark fanfictions are left?
well, atleast now I know where in canon timeline this occurs, judging by what Twilight said, I'm saying over a year after Season 3 Episode 13.
2074399 *reads otehr posts* Wait, is this Christian Brutal Sniper thing legit? *looks it up* Oooookay. So apparently it is, and I take back what I said earlier about the amateurish and convoluted part. This is actually a thing.
How, as a purveyor of Gmod and SFM, how did I NOT know about CBS?
MOAR UPDATES>
Getting kind heavy with the fannon here, but then again you're giving them very entertaining character traits and frankly I usually fall off my chair with laughter at least once whenever I read a chapter, them Snoipahdiles
Ooh, Night- no doesn't deserve a capital- nightmare gardener. SO BLOODY THREATENING.fingfurious
I'm more scared of Fluttershy.
Can't stress enough how much I love this story!
Been following it on fanfiction.net, and I have loved every chapter of it ever since you started!
Characters behave properly, things make sense, and it's overall awesome.
Been following silently for a while (ever since you started. actually), but I waited until now to post an honest review.
I love the long chapters, and they provide endless entertainment.
Characters behave as they should, and backstories MAKE SENSE.
They are great, and they all seem to bring out the character's personalities, Hence, Soldier is the way he is because he wanted revenge on the people who destroyed his family.
Some funny moments here and there, and characters seem to act like they should in the environment/situation they've been put into.
Everything just fits together, details are expressed nicely, and I love the references everywhere!
Going to read the newest chapter now, and I want to say thanks for being awesome!
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you fool youve doomed us all
AAAAAAAAH
Nightmare Gardener? Whuh?
Thank you KM.
I'm writing a fic and was having writer's block on a Fluttershy scene. I finally have a way to clear up the Discord issue!
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All I can think up of left is Rainbow Factory, and RD hasn't had her nightmare yet (or does this count as it?)
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They already did Demopan in Chapter 7.
Liking the Christian Brutal Sniper reference
Truthfully, I found the Discord part the most interesting and near-heartwrenching!
Once again, another amazing chapter has been delivered in good fashion, and I await the conclusion!
...*remembers what needs to be said last* Oh yeah. Cheerilee's Garden! *sprints away*
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It would be spelled Cute-ceaƱera.
MOAR!
Fine sir, can we get a VAGINEER or SCUNT around here? Maybe a pootbird? Buddhist Murder Pyro? Any Meme Fortress 2 character?
why not use the original concept of cbs
Uuuuummmm... School play? Cheerilee's garden... That story... Not looking forward to the next chapter....
these chapters take a while, but they're amazing!!!
Smokin dat dream ganja mon!
2077131RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPE
Wouldn't it make more sense for Soldier to just buy the lights and then put them on the weapons instead of getting new weapons? While looking through the files of Source Film Maker, I found that the lights are separate from the weapons themselves.
Good chapter.
Unrelated: Man, Christian Brutal Sniper's theme is catchy. I pulled it up as soon as I recognized him.
A GMOD monster and a creepypasta fanfic at the same time?
(in c3po's voice) WE'RE DOOMED!
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I thought were a mute.
2078699 Im typing.
2074387 human nightmare gardener: media.giantbomb.com/uploads/0/2488/2266410-zyraprofile_large.jpg
2076953 We need Creepy Medic and Painis VagiCake.
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no worries mate, I'm sure that you can beat CBS somehow! it IS your mind after all!
2076593 What about the tumbler researcher twilight, it would fit with the medic's personality.
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He basically has full control while I watch him try to slaughter me mates.
And if you also think about it, what happened to my human counterpart?
Started reading this on fanfiction.net when I found out it was on fimfiction I just had to compare check it out and I must say it is a brilliant story