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For the record: The mention of Jerry Lewis in this refers to the old time comedian, not the Totally Spies character. Here's a vid of Lewis and his old partner, Dean Martin.
Holy funk waffles. This is getting good.
I now want this story to become a book. Just like Past Sins and FOE did.
OH GOD THE HATS
AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW... SKEET!
OMGWTFBBQ!?
...
...'K, I'm better now.
Well, they have found Hat Heaven and spread it to the elements, may mercy be shown on us.
Bozhe Moi...Celestia just turned to the dark side...
I see what you did there
Also, the part with the hats was hilarious.
My god. Ripped to pieces by the one you served duly. Well, at least no blood got on my good gun. And why does it taste like cinnamon? TURPA KIINNI!!!
There is only one thing to say in this type of situation.
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PRAISE THE SUN!
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Fricking Hell.
Absolute Power, Celly. Remember that.
Oh, crud. Queen Corona, anyone?
oh sht
So, the black sun will rise soon. This will be good. I feel the climax approaches soon.
Celestia you deluded fool.
When will they ever learn not to tempt fate? Does she (I presonally think it's a she) have a physical form?
I would have preferred seeing Cadance wielding this instead of the club.
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I also would have liked to see her on a dinosaur themed bike.
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Umm...can we get a link? If there is one?
What report?! My God, 10 seconds into your Face-Heel Turn, and you've already set up a logical fallacy! Double facehoof! Oh, wait! You told him to send the report when he gets it. Except he'll never get it, because Phalanx is dead! Right?
You just told Harbinger to act exactly as he was before you brainwashed him: when he was suspicious of you, you BRAINLESS IDIOT!
The second he realizes Phalanx isn't around, he's going to wonder just why the guard you've been glaring at for the past week is on a mission, when you would never trust him with diplomacy if you thought he was Slendermane!
This is why the villains never win! EVIL MAKES YOU STUPID!
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Oh, and, uh...good chapter! Can't wait for more.
The worst part of going mad, is that all too often you don't realize it's happening until it's far too late. I don't blame Celestia, I'm not even disappointed in her. She wants to protect those she cares for, no matter the cost. It's just a sad fact of life that this makes her so easy to manipulate, if anything I'm just even more pissed off at Slendermane now. I hope someone drops this story's equivalent of Holy Water on the demonic manipul8ing bastard.
Good chapter, the hat store part was brilliant and would probably be what the BLUs/REDs would do if they found one.
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It's not evil that makes you stupid, it's fear. Celestia was very fearful during that moment, and she acted fast.
Plus villains DO win sometimes, there's a whole trope based on it.
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I think this suits the first part of the chapter well!
Also, hats.
Also. GODDAMMIT CELESTIA!
>mfw this chapter
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They're almost ready and should be hear with the prosthetic in a few minutes.
How do you hear a prosthetic?
It's "Allons'y"
Is correct, I remember that from French class,
and if I remember further, allons, is the nous(we) form of "Aller", to go, and, "Y" wich means there, effectively it translates to "let's go", literally it translates to "(We) go there" the "We" being understood.
(After finishing chapter)
Oh Shit
swiss army rarity anyone?
So...
Ten bits says Gray Mann somehow takes control of the prosthetic or even uses to control Rarity.
And do I even need to say how Celestia's little bargain is going to end?fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/170/1/0/radiant_malevolence_by_thestoicmachine-d3jdw83.png
loving it.
Wanting more.
Medic used to not bother me, now he terrifies me.
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Also, Applejack's Fear being a Timberwolf seems kinda out of place among all of those Reflections and Betrayals.
Especially since it'd be easy to have her face the ghosts of her dead parents like you did Sniper, Spy, and Pyro.
Medic's Jewish......? I... but.... well............ okay, I can see it..... sort of.
So is Celestia going to have to abdicate when this is all over; now that she killed a pony?
There's some Warcraft vibes going on with Celestia near the end there. "Drink the blood of Mannoroth! Become powerful enough to defeat the Draenei (who we told you to defeat)!" "Drink the blood of Tirek! Become powerful enough to defend Equestria (against the ponies we told you were bad)!"
3662631 No! No! NO!
That last line really got me..
Try using the Zalgo text generator for the Masky speak. It should make it more "Mysterious."
Deities above! Celestia has become Nightmare Solaris!
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T́͞͏he͠ ̧͡sha͜͞d̀o͏͝w͝͡s͢ ̕a̛wa͘͜͝it N̢͡͡ig͜ht͏͡҉mą́r̡e҉ ́͟Ś̴͝o͘l̴͠a̶͏r̀͠i̴̕s̵̴̢'̶͞ ̷̧́e҉̡ve͏r̸y̨͟҉ ̡o͢r̕dé͠r̴̶̀,
̶̴Th̨͞e͡y̢̕͝ w̡͢h̵͡ǫ̨͘ ҉̵̛c̵̡͞a̢͠ús̨e ̶̀f̀͡r͡ie͘ǹd̶̀sh̶͘į͟p͞͝'҉͡҉s ͠d̸i͞s̡͜or҉̛dȩ̢r̢͡,͠
́͢T̵̢h̸̵́e̷̕ ̵̨͝s̴͟͞u̷n̡͞ ̀w͜il̡l҉̷ ҉̵r̸̕͡i̡sé̷̸ ̵̶a͏̵͘n̶d̀͟ ͘͝t̛̀͡he ͟m͟o̴̡͝o͏n̴ ẁill̡ ̶҉fa͘ll̷͘͞,̨͏
̧͝A̸͞s̴ ͟l̨͏on҉g ̢͜a̵̛͏s̢ ͜t͜he̢͢ ̡͞s͘͝h̵͢ąd̢͡o̷͡w̵̕s̢ ̢b̴e̸̵a͟͢͡r ͠h̀́e̴͟͡r ̢̢̢c͘a͏l͜͜l͞.̵̢
̵͘
H́a̕͘r̀͡b̸i̶n̸̕g͘e̶̶r̶̴'̢̨͠ś͢ ͝͞f͞à̷l҉̵͜l ̢̕҉h̡͞a̴̷s ̷͘s̕ig̢̧ń͢a̷͠l͏͠l̵e͏d͠҉ ̸͘th̕͠e ̵́e͟n̶͞d̨,́͘͝
̵F́ó̀r ̸͝the̵͠ ̴͠E̢̧͝l̡͟é͢m̶͜͝ȩ̷n̴t̢͏͢s̕͝ ͠o͏f̶͡͡ ̨͜H̴̡a̷rm̴͜o̡͞n͢ỳ̸͏ ̶̴c̸a̛͠ǹ̡͘ń͢o͞t̨́ co̧m̨p̵͞r͝e̡h͘e̵n̕d͏̨̀,
T͏͞he̶͟͡ ͜fa͟c͏t̛ t̛͠h̨̀͘a҉̵ţ ̷̴th̕èi҉͏ŕ͏̧ ̶̛͡b̨͠e̵l̵̢͝o͏͠v͢͡e͡d͘͠ ̵ŕ̵͜ul͢҉e̢͘r ̷h̡a̴̶s͝ bę̨҉c̸o̶̷m͡҉e,͟
͏͏T̸̸́he͟͝ ̷t̀h̕͡i̡n͠g̴̵̷ ̧̀t҉̛h̡éy͜͡ ̸͘m͘͜o̶s͜t̨̢̀ ͠f̷e̛͢a̷r͞,
̷͢The̷͘ e͟n͏̕e̵̶m̸̡y̛͠ ̴h̶̢̢a̵͡s ̵͘w͠͝͝oǹ.̢̧͢
͝
̡͝B͏ut ̨t͞҉̧h̷e̛͞҉r̸̡e ̸͘̕is̢͏ ͘s̷̨͝t̛̀i̷͘͟l͘͘͞l͜ ̷h̨̧́ơṕ̢̨e̸͏,͢
͏̀Fo͝r̷̢ ҉̧T̀҉h́e̴ ̴̡Ho͠o͏d̢̛͞e͜d͘ ̨͢O͞n̵̷̛e͟ ̕͡҉h̛͢á̀͠s̨ c̀o͘m̵̨̕e͟,̛̕͠
̸̶̧T̸͟ò̴͢ ̸d҉͞e͟͠f̡͡é͢͡at͠͞ ͘͡҉t͜͏h̵e ̡͟͞f̢̡a҉́c̢͠e͝l͢ȩ͡s̸s̡ ̴on͠ę̡͏,̶̡̛
̸An̷̨͡d r̸̕escu̵e̵ ̷́͜t̛h̴̵͟e͏͜ S͠ù͢n̡͘
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This doesn't count as spam, right?
Ţ̷̢̙̮̗̳̪̖͚̇̊̀ͯͭ̅H̴ͬ̏ͥ͐̒͆͛͑̉̍̔͊͗́̚҉͙̯̯̻̟Ẹ̸̴̬͓̹̗̝̜̹͇̗͙͎̖͉̫̍͐͗̑̾͐̄̿͘̕͟ ̸̡̪̫͔̲̤̣͙͓͔̖͍̠̦̖̱̼̬̰̣ͪͮ͌̊ͮͭͤ̽̏ͫ̅̈́ͥ̇͒̒̍̚S̡̥͉̱̭͔͖͉̗͕ͣ͛̑̒ͦ͆̽ͣ̽U̶̻̬̱̘͌ͦ̎̆͋ͨͤͫ̑͋̐̐̀̒ͣ̆͡Ṋ̷͇͈͕̪͕̱̻̱̖͍̼̉͆̒ͣͥ̒̂̈͂̆̋͌̄̅͞͡͡ ̢͖͕̜ͨ͊ͭͮ͆ͫ̒ͤ͌̐̔ͮͭͥ̄̇̕͠͠I̛̜̬̞͓̝̜̳̯̘͕͙̭̝̪̜̿ͬ͒ͥͤ̆̈ͯ̈́͗͒͋͛̏͢͜S̵̷͍̪̖̗̝̝̣̩̝͓̥̏͐̃ͥ͒͒̇ͨ͑̈̎ͥͅ ͩͫ͒͆̋ͥ̂́ͯͯ͂͗҉̴̀͜҉̫͉̦͔̪͖̝ͅͅR̵̨̰͉̻̺̲͎̖̠͈̘̹͙̳̩̦̗͊̅̄̅͌̈́̍̈́̄̒̃͒͌ͨ̍̑̊͠Į̮͙͓͔̰̪̖͔̥͎̼̠̫̞ͮ͊ͧͯ͐ͮ̚͢͟͟ͅͅS̴͉̳̬͇̓ͪ́̌̇͊͊͊ͬ̿̄ͪͮ̑̚͘Į̺͔̼̞̹̯̬̜ͧ̈́̔̇͒̑̿ͬ̑͢N̵̹̜̞̝̭̘͔̹̖̹̘̆͌́̆͊͌ͥ̿ͬ̿͊́̉̌͒̒́̀̂̕͢G̷̸̡̢̙͍̜̠̘̜͚̺̭͙̃ͮ̓̆
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Hąv̨e͢ ͏y̴o͢u ͜ńo͠t̸ ́b̀e҉e̛n͝ re͡ad̶i̛ng?
Celestia'͏s̸ r͝eşo͘lve͘ ͜h̸a̧s͠ b͜e̢e͟n ͜f҉le͢etin̕ģ,̨
͘She hás̶ brái͝n͞w̧as͢he͞d her̕ guard ̢int̛o̴ b̢eli̧evin͡g,
Fo͞r s͏h̕e̵ h̢as ̧bęc̡ome͜ ̨dar̕k ͏a͝nd͘ ҉m̢is͟lea̢din̢g̸.
I think I'm gonna talk in riddles in all my comments just to screw with people, plus, 3671789, thanks for telling me about this text generator by accident.
Didn't you say that Octavia was Harbingers granddaughter not his niece in the previous chapters? Because if not you can just call me crazy.
shit.................. this is going downhill....
she is been corrupted.
Bloody hell mate, this is a full blown novel!!!
How many chapters do you intend to have for this story?
Also, are you planning to turn this into an actually paperback/hardback book? I would seriously love a copy if so.
Also, also, do you do any other writing that isn't mlp related on other sites? Because again, I would love to read some those if you do.
well then
nightmare solaris...
did not see that coming for some reason
and celestia is an idiot again
WHY WOULD YOU LISTEN TO THETHINGTHAT HAS MADE EVERYONE GO EVIL 99.999999999999999999999999998% OF THE TIME
THATS JUST BAD LOGIC
AND DRINK THE BLOOD OF AN EVIL DEMON KING
f**king hell
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Well, he did say it clinked on the floor...
Well, Shit. THIS IS GONNA END BADLY!
..... We're Bucked...
XD
Poor Phalanx...
I'm suddenly reminded of this:
To quote Zecora: "We're doomed."
this is how french canadian masacre english
“Az aye recoll...” the rapist said, “dis iz de veary sayme bat you beet me to dept wit.”
Scout just stared, shivering in fright. “No... No no no no...”
“Oh oui,” the rapist said, getting a two handed grip on the bat. “Time to repay de fayveur...”
Funny story one time I was at a mall and they was doing a hat sell and I was wearing my BLU team shirt and I went crazy in there best day ever TF2 FTW and awesome hats
The spy corps is conspicuously absent taking into account that they were supposedly instructed to shadow Celestia's every movement.