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Fuck yeah first!
Heh, infernal orchestrina, anyone?
Seriously, I fucking love this story and would have its babies were such a thing possible
Cool. Thats all i can say.
THE PLOT THICKENS
Also, I LOVE how fast you got this chapter out. This was easily one of the best yet.
KnightMysterio, YOU ROCK,
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Sometimes inspiration just hits me.
So now you have included the administraitor and it turns out she's every bit the Elder-you-know-whatabomination we've always assummed and we see what the RED team has been getting up which is absoultely nothing thanks to the adminstraitor.
Now the question is what fusion we will see now, Pinkie Pie+Scout, Rainbow Dash+Sniper, Spy+Zecora, or maybe even two or more fusions including the return of Appledemo or was it Demojack, Flutterheavy or was it Heavyshy, and Engineerity or was it Rarigneer?
1024097 AppleDemo, FlutterHeavy, EngiRarity.
Also, if you look at the story carefully you should be able to guess which fusion is coming next.
1024107 I want to say it's Pinkiescout or Scoutie Pie but something inside me tells me that it might be wrong.
This story should be made into a movie
Or at least a MLP special
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It's Sniper Dash.
The first 2 to have done anything are 2 Earth Ponies, and 2 Unicorns.
Sniper and Rainbow Dash are the only pair with 2 pegasi.
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The Dead One - Medic (Although not for any in-game reasons.)
The Heart of Ice - Sniper
Dat plot... exposition
Hmm it seems the music only effects those who are Extremely Loyal to something or someone.
1024064 In the form of scout's Sandman? BOINK! PLAY BALL!
I like how your already tossing in season 3 aspects. loving it.
And bringing Merasmus into the story? Brilliant.
here is the song that goes with the lyrics for those of you that don't know
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If there are Homestuck references, they're unintentional. I've never looked at Homestuck before in my life.
Well that one of the creepiest thing I ever read. I'm getting a pinkiescout running around singing giggly at the ghostys and smile and saveing the day
Holy shit
...i am smiling...laughing a little...more fear is needed
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Please, please, PLEASE let Discord be freed! What is a favorite character to someone if he barely gets any screentime?
I can't get that song, "Daddy Discord" out of my head, it's fantastic!
I heard the song before reading the chapter and i thought it was catchy.
I heard the song after reading the chapter and i consider it morbid.
That's potent writing right there.
MOAR!
Pinkiescout and a BOOMBOX!
To be honest I think you need to make a joke chapter to break up all these morbid themes, maybe Saxton Hale going to Equestria and taking care of things with his DAMN BARE HANDS
Edit: A much more belivable reaction to The Doctor;
“You're an important factor in this. Our master knows of you... knows the things you have done in all of your lives... and HE IS TERRIFIED OF YOU.”
Suddenly Slendermane teleports out of nowhere and starts licking the Doctors horseshoes and begs for his forgivness.
After the doctor drops slendermane into a crack in the universe with the TARDIS his future self left around the corner, he takes BLU back home and gives them all Fezs' that blow the admins mind. Because Fezs are cool
And that's how Mann co. was made.
SHIT, This is getting really scary. Just.....SHIT.
1026524 Saxton HALE!!!
That cliffhanger... FUUUUUUU—
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Time will tell how accurate the Pinkamena-thing's statement will be.
This chapter...just this chapter. Finally Slendermane is attacking EVERYWHERE instead of being racist and only attacking Equestria. And I'm betting the next merging will be Sniper and Rainbow Dash. Simply due to the class selection screen: Flutterheavy, EngiRarity, and then, Rainbow Sniper or Snipe Dash or...This is Scout, Rainbows make him cry.
Cliffhangers?! Why you...
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I have discovered, through scientific experimentation, that the Scheherazade method of storytelling is an excellent way of keeping people interested in the story.
And the plot thickens again, good job mr knight
In Griffhala on the borders of Equestria, Gilda could only watch helplessly as her father flew about wildly, screaming, crying, and begging the music to stop.
RAAAAAAAAGE!
Gilda lives in Cloudsdale.
Tinydetail Man, AWAAAAAAAAAY!
1030962 Was it ever said that she lives in Cloudsdale? Or was she just attending school there?
*sighs* Fine. Here.
She was visiting her father that day.
Also, for the purposes of my story, she moved out of Cloudsdale some time during whenever her last appearance will be (depending on whether or not she appears in Season 3) and is now living in Griffhala.
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AH.
1032597 I'm going to be dueling with you all through the writing of this story, aren't I?
Ah well, love and tolerance. Have a muffin, on me.
truthfully, I kinda expected that response out of Discord given him in this story. As I'm a fan of the story's where Discord is a good guy, not necessarily nice, I guess I'm just being hopeful aren't I? But I do kinda wonder if the song has a purpose or is meant to just be creepy. I kinda assumed that Discord had his part in the song though....Also wouldn't Discord be opposed to the destruction of all this life? I mean less beings around means less beings being unpredictable and if bad becomes the norm, then it would be commonplace and boring. Figured one of the ponies could pull that or something i dunno
Oh, boy this intesifies rather quickly. Looks like we will be expecting some "boom headshot" lines in the next chapter, as it looks like we're going to have Sniper Dash fusion (which probably means that Rainbow Dash wont be blind anymore, thank Celestia for that).
And this fic was updated rather quickly, and you even managed to implement some of the season 3 elements into the fic (I wonder if there is going to be any TOBOR or MvM references once that update happens).
On the related note, I came up with my perfect ending for this fic. All mercenaries got their elements of harmony, and when they activate them, all 18 of them summon alicorn versions of Lauren Faust, Jayson Thiessen, Gabe Newell and Robin Walker to do 4 on 4 fight with Slendermare and masky ponies. And Robin could use his Valve Rocket Launcher. (although that might be a bit of an overkill, but Slendermare totally deserved it). That would be an epic battle.
And as always keep up the good work, and make the second part of this ASAP (I hate cliffhangers, but who doesn't). Wish you all the best
~HCN
I feel like this is relevant.
http://chzbronies.files.wordpress.com/2012/08/my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-brony-like-dividing-by-zero.jpg
Also, some of us haven't watched the Season 3 leaked stuff... so, while I LOVE your story, please keep spoilers out of it...
Mariko? You mean like THIS mariko?
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1038429 All shall be revealed in time.
1024256 I agree 100% with this statement
Sincerely the Doctor
I advice listening to black sabbath well reading this, I started shivering near the end.
sixhundredandsixtysix stars for you
Meanwhile, This guy hears the music
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1024408 Meh I was close
Liked the story from the very beginning, loved for the longest time how this was written.
THEN I got to Mordred's lullaby. Any fan of Heather Dale, TF2, AND PONIES deserves a thousand gold stars.
We shall be the bestest of friends, you and I.
Very nice story, never thought i love a grimdark story with mlp involved. You did well my man. Long chapters, eventful developments, and hooking chiffhangers, you really know how to do your stuff. Way to go man
I wonder have are you going to implement new events in TF2 canon.
Gray Mann killed Blutarch and Redmond. Tobor is coming. A new challenge for you.
1072593 Dude, spoilers, I hadn't read the comic yet.
But I can work with the new development. All I see is 'new subplot.' And if things get too convoluted, I'll just put an AU tag on things, and no harm will be done.