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PassionQuill
Just a guy who loves to write stories. I hope you enjoy some of them.
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I know almost nothing about the Penumbra series other than that they were supposedly pretty creepy. I loved Amnesia, though, that's for sure. My lack of knowledge, however, just means that this is gonna be nice and fresh for me. I look forward to more.
I loved Penumbra far better than Amnesia, and I'm infinitely happy this story exists. I see you're sticking pretty close to the actual plot, so it'll be really fun to see if the mane six have a run in with the... well, you know.
Also, I demand you bring Clarence into this fic! I want to see his reactions to Pinkie Pie's stream of consciousness.
4678615 Yeah, my plan so far is to at least stick kinda close to the story in Penumbra, which is also a game I love way more than Amnesia hehe. So, you can kinda expect to run in to you know who. Clarence was the best thing about the second game, so if I ever reach that far, he would be introduced. Though, I gotta say, seeing 4 dislikes already has killed my mood to write more stuff for now
I do have a second chapter that just needs a bit of work, so I guess I will finish it and see what happens.
4678628 Don't let the dislikes get to you. I've had a similar experience where an adaptation I wrote was met with overwhelming negativity without any feedback. It may just be a hunch, but I think a lot of people simply don't understand the source material for stories like these, so it doesn't make as much sense to them. After all, fanfiction readers are notoriously fickle. Please, please, continue this at least until Clarence comes in.
4678628 Given that the story is tagged "Mature-Gore" and "Dark", that may be the byproduct of people downvoting your story because the genre isn't to their liking. How about this, I'll read the first chapter sometime later and come back with my thoughts, sound good to you?
4678628 I've been in a worse boat than you. The first story I submitted got seven dislikes (if you care I deleted it to improve it). So a few dislikes is better than seven.
4678742 It's 6 now, and will surely grow beyond 7
4678765 Meh... You have likes so that's a start... It's more than I can show and those crossover fics are really hit or miss when it comes to people's reactions.
4678765 I took a look at it, and while Applejack's dialect did get repetitive at times, I saw nothing severely wrong that warranted a downvote from me at the very least. That said, modifying it can be a great idea. Maybe let it sit for a while and ask someone who is good at proofreading/editing to take a look and offer advice more in-depth than I can give you. Don't fret, because there is potential in this fic.
I keep reading this:
"Applejack receives a letter from her parents. there's just one problem, they've been dead for many years. And dead ponies cannot write letters. It´s illegal."
4679114 It is totally against the law to write letters when you're dead
Just ask Celestia, she knows 
4678790 I always accept what people have to say and their critique, and this story actually has an editor
I'll see how I feel about it after a while, I'll at least produce the next part of it before calling quits. (If I do call quits) Oh and thank you for your honest thoughts about my story. I appreciate them. I hope I can get better with writing Applejack's dialogues.
4678666 Thank you for the sweet words, I'll try to not let them get to me. I'm fine with not getting lots of likes or views, but dislikes do get to me. I don't want to bother people with my writing
I'll see if I can keep the will to write this story, but I don't know yet. I will release a 3k+ chapter soon enough, after that we'll see what happens. Not sure if I will ever reach to Clarence, I got lots of stories to write, so at best, it won't be for a long time 
4680521 Not a problem. Promise me you'll keep writing, because as I've said, you have a lot of potential. Also, I agree that it can be difficult to write for Applejack.
4680546 Oh, I'll always keep on writing, no matter what. I'm studying this kind of stuff at the University of Florida. I'm getting better as time goes on, and I will be a professional one day. Only thing I would quit would just be this story in particular. Though, still not at that point, might just let it rest for a good while after releasing the next chapter
And AJ is definitely a bit tricky. The whole accent thing is hard to write. Glad I've gotten some help in how to do it by a friend, maybe me being a foreigner makes it really hard to figure out how the spelling should change for her accent 
I miss this story.....