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PassionQuill


Just a guy who loves to write stories. I hope you enjoy some of them.

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After half a year of kinda working hard on his project, Richard finally succeeded in creating a real living pony from the show. Though, it wasn't precisely what he expected. The Twilight Sparkle he created didn't come with the personality she had in show. Instead she's secretly an evil creature who's slowly learning more and more about the world around her, using this knowledge to figure out how to best kill her owner, and destroy the world.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 22 )

Its so adorable

So far, I like this. Let's see where it goes.

Hmm, I enjoyed this so far :twilightsmile: Let's see if little Twi succeeds with her evil masterplan :twilightoops::twilightsheepish:

4426290 Glad that you've enjoyed it so far :twilightsmile: *Snickers* oh if only you knew what I have in store for this story :rainbowlaugh:

Soooooo CUUUUTE
:rainbowkiss: :rainbowkiss: :rainbowkiss: :rainbowkiss: :rainbowkiss: :rainbowkiss: !!!
She's already succeeded in killing me with the power of D'aaaw.

This is what happens when you play god; you get murdered by cute chubby ponies! :derpyderp2:

What do you want, monster? Don’t you know you cannot stop my quest, my resolve is… oh gosh that’s nice… right there...” squeaked Twilight as Kevin gently scratched the area behind her ears.

My only weakness! :twilightblush:

So, I guess she can squeak speak after all; there's just a language barrier between them because the humans can't speak Squeak. Please continue :twilightsmile:

oh god... he's making more ponies that want to murder him :rainbowlaugh:

4540353 Aaaww, glad you like the story :twilightsmile: and trust me, none will survive her evil rule, none at all :pinkiecrazy:

Been trap in a stang and useless body, cannot been able to do anything and worse of all, been aware of waht you have lost and how awfull your situation is while big ugly things are enjoying your situation.
Yep, from Twilight POV, it's pretty dark.
Also, yeah fluttershy!
Keep the good work.

I have a plan indeed hehe, a plan to end the giants once and for all…

The humans better beware :twilightoops:

“ple!”

:rainbowlaugh: I HAVE NO CLUE WHY I FIND THIS SO HILARIOUS BUT I JUST DO!!!

You know... I kinda hate their stupidity and how you made them so dumb, but i like more see what twilight Will do to them:trixieshiftright:

4640283 Sorry to hear you don't like how I've written them. Though, they will steady get smarter and smarter :twilightsheepish:

4641248 no, dont worry about my comment. i would hate to see your fiction modified drastically for that. I just pointed that becouse...i dont like dumb stories and the site is 'unfortunately' fill with those and with few gems. Your story is interesting and without those 2 (idiots :trixieshiftright:) the plot wont be as is it now. So dont worry much and post a NEW chapter soon, i reeeeealy want to see what she Will do to them

4641343 It's okay :rainbowwild: It will progress as I've planned for it to progress, and I doubt you or anyone will have any clue of where this story will go :rainbowlaugh: Oh if you only knew :trollestia: The next chapter is almost done, but I'm currently at Everfree Northwest so won't be back for a little while. Also got a lot of other pony stories in the works. I think I have 25k words of pony stories that isn't published right now :rainbowlaugh: But yeah I know a lot of stories are filled with dumb, and honestly this is pretty much one of them as well. I had a really dumb idea so I'm writing it every now and then. That is also why this story isn't a priority for me :twilightsheepish: But it will be updated in about 10 days or so :twilightsmile:

4641438 this fiction isn't dumb, just those 2 guys and that had build the fundation of the story. Im sorry if i made you Belive that. I assure you that the subject of the story is realy attractive. A Pony building in a lab who later rebelled aganst his creators isn't stupid or poor material rather like science fiction, and i realy like it :ajsmug: and since is twilight the 'evil' pony, i can't miss it .
As i said before, dont let my comment tarnish your opinion on the story. Since you're busy with other fiction i leave you alone... But dont think about cancel or leave the FIC incomplete, i woudn't forgive you :trixieshiftright: and i have a death note

This chapter was short but good

4682872 Glad you like it. Though, sorry for it being short :twilightsheepish: Hopefully when I find the will to write next chapter, it'll be a bit longer.

Comment posted by Shock Jock deleted Jul 12th, 2014
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