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Comet Burst


The man without a plan.

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Though I walk through the valley of deep shadow, I fear no harm, for you are with me.

Navigating the post-mortem world is a nearly impossible task without guidance from somepony who has been to the other side before. For just a few rose petals, anypony can ask the ferry of the dead, Charmane, for her aid to the next realm.

But, what if you never paid the toll?

And what if nopony is willing to pay it for you?




Edited by Cerulean Voice and vren55.

It was going to be an entry for The Most Dangerous Game contest, but I ran out of time. Turns out I tried to cram too much in.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 10 )

Oh look, you made popular box. :twilightsmile:

Hmmm, I like to see where this goes. :)

Definitely following, this is an interestingly done story :twilightsmile:

A interesting read, and its nice to see an interesting character to something that most fanfics don't cover. I want to see more of this story.

A reasonable beginning, I look forward to seeing what Charmane was worried about... maybe that he would become a poltergeist or some such if he held on to strongly to his life?

A nice start, and how nice that they buried his body amongst the trees without having to cremate him first.

Sombra does not know yet that he has passed on to the other side.

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