Sky's life hasn't been particularly... pleasant up until his high school years. Back-stabbing friends, lonely days spent sitting in his room, and painful love stories have combined to form the cause of Sky's ways. But meeting some new friends are sure to change his life, but will it be for the better? Will these six girls bring him the joy and happiness he hopes and dreams for? Or will they simply replay his past and cause him even greater pain than he has already suffered?
This is going to be the first book in a series I will be working on. I have decided that the series will consist of three parts: The Beginning, The Middle, and The End. Those names are up for debate and if anyone has any other ideas for names, I'm open to new ideas!
Chapters (20)
This is a great first chapter to a story. You did a good job introducing Sky in the beginning. You described the characters with good detail and gave them clothes to describe their personality, even though I can't really imagine Fluttershy in cargo shorts, but still! The only thing that I didn't really like was that you introduced the characters all a little too soon, but nonetheless, you did a fantastic job. I am really looking forward to more chapters. I added this to my favourites. I hope this story gets many more, view, likes, and comments. You clearly deserve it.
Oh, and may I ask, do the mane six know each other yet or not?
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The mane six don't know each other yet. They are all new to this school and came from different places, so the only person they actually "know" there is Sky.
Thanks! I love how this story is unfolding and it's great to know that you do too!
I did kind of rush with the introduction of characters didn't I? I guess I was just in a hurry to get to the interesting bits!
But thanks for the feedback!
Shipping
imnot saying there should be but I thinksky and fluttershy should ship
I like the concept of this story and I am wondering if at some point there might be a cross dimensional stuff #horriblegrammar
. How this story continues will be intersting and do you have an editor¿
If not would you like help editing¿
Lolz I'm using my iPad to read this (I almost never use any other computer)
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Thanks, I could use an editor. It would be great if you could help out! Thanks for the feedback! And regarding your question, you'll have to read to find out! :D
4506641 ok I'll help edit but I can only go on the site half time.
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Private messege me the unpublished view password and I can help edit
4503901 You made many mistakes in that comment. Oh, the irony!
I don't want to seem annoying, but when's the next chapter?
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Guys, I'm really sorry!!!
A lot has been going on lately, so I haven't even been on the site, let alone get a chance to work on the story... On top of that, my computer crashed and I tried to back up my documents, but it didn't recognize the file type my word processor program saves files to by default, so I lost the entire second chapter... 
(Luckily, I had the first chapter in a text format)
I promise the next chapter will be up BY NEXT FRIDAY. (September 19) I'll try to work in a lot, so there's a good chance that it will be up sooner!!!
Sorry again!
Alright, guys, the second chapter is nearing completion and I'm proud to say that it's coming along better than it would have before! I'm still aiming for having it up tomorrow afternoon, but it's possible that it won't be up until Saturday morning. I'm still typing like lightning for you guys! :)
The chapter was nice, though I'm surprised about how many jerks the guy knows.
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That's as far as I could read. I'll continue later. I've been waiting so long for this chapter!
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I'll be sure to get an editor on my next one before I put it up! 
I guess I had a few typos...
5040150 It's fine. Also, great chapter!
I know I'm taking forever with posting the new chapters. Yes, I have excuses. No, I won't share them in the comments. If you want to know, message me and I'll tell you. Now that that's out of the way, the next chapter will be ready for posting after I make some tweaks. I'd do that now if it weren't for the fact that I can't find my laptop charger anywhere.
But yeah, the next chapter will be up as soon as I am physically able to tweak and upload it. There's also a special little twist in this one, so you can look forward to that while you wait.
I enjoyed the chapter, though I'm surprised that Pinkie ended up with Henry. I hope there can be another chapter before New Year.
5250360 Don't worry! This isn't the end of their story...
I will be waiting for the new chapter by the 21st!
Picking up the pace for my loyal fans!
This chapter was nice, though I wonder what worries Sky about PP being with Henry
:O spooky
I think that I'm going to try to make some of my chapters shorter. It helps to get them out faster!
This chapter was quite the shocker. Aft how, I'm glad that you're starting to update more quickly.
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That was fast! I literally just posted it less than ten minutes ago! Not that I'm complaining, of course...
But, yeah! And there's going to be more surprises along the way!
Wow that Henry is a jerk. Hope pinkje drops him quickly after sky telks her please let him get hurt for what he did to aj.
I hope that this story is very long.
Huh, this got a bit more attention than normally in that past couple of weeks... Any amount is appreciated!
But back to what I meant to say before I was so enjoyably interrupted... My aim is to have the next chapter up by Sunday morning, but I may work on it tonight to get it finished up. Sorry I haven't gotten it up yet... The holidays were busy, school is getting hectic, and I recently got accepted into my favorite college, which, oddly enough, prompted loads of other things that needed to be finished. But, in case of any of you were interested, I am now, officially, enrolled in the previously mentioned college! :D
But, yeah. Thanks for the extra views, likes, and favorites! It really means a lot!
du du du duuuuuu SKY TO THE RESCUE
Nice chapter. I hope the next one comes soon so that Henry gets what's coming to him.
Liking the story so far. As for the bullies:
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Goodness... But believe me, I'm right there with you! XD
Poor Twilight.
This chapter is great. I enjoy the bonding session between Sky and RD and the fact that Twi is joining the group. Still, I really hope that Henry suffers for damaging Sky's friendship with Pinkie and being all smug about it. I hope the next chapter comes soon, man.
Am I evil because I'm hoping for a fire. Sky did make Pinkie cry.
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But not on purpose.
Well, I hope that you can write more soon. The storyline is intense.
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Yeah but I can somewhat see it could be a good event in the story of Sky's house is burning making him homeless, which could lead to good side parts.
I'm so glad you got this chapter out more quickly. I seriously love this fic!
You guys don't even know! I posted this last night just before 10 and I check it this morning with 42 notifications! I'm actually smiling right now!
But thanks for all your feedback! It really means so much that you all love the story so much! I'm planning on working on this story daily, which is why this chapter was out so quickly. In fact, the original plan was to get it out on Saturday, but I decided to post it last night anyways, as to not get too far ahead of myself. But again, thanks for all of your feedback!
Please make something bad happen to Henry
Okay, if I were Sky:
I'd understand Pinkie getting broken by what Sky said, but for Henry to be smug about it?
Fuck, I'd just go with the relinquished friendship and turn Henry in. Maybe even have AJ plead assault to extend that bastard's sentence.
Epic foreshadowing
Cause splitting up is always a good idea!
Identity is what I think you were going for.
Nice chapter.
I hope Henry gets his comeuppance.
And this, boys and girls, is a classic example of a very bad idea that will certainly come back to bite him in the ass