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Angelgrace


There will probably be mind control.

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Hey, I recognize this story, Trixie's New Assistant. From one of the old threads on Hypnochan back in the day. An anon posted it in a pastebin, which I actually still have a link to.

Were you that anon, Angel Grace?

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Yes, I made a couple of anon posts on Hypnochan. A beautiful place.

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Awesome! Small world.
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I always loved this story by the way. It's actually nice to finally know who the writer was, so I can tell you that I liked it.

Unfortunately, I never really got a chance to be around Hypnochan much before it went 404 forever. I discovered it literally a couple weeks before the take-down, so I basically had just read through the MLP thread by the time it went away. A true tragedy.

This story was... arousing. It's nice to see something new from you Angel Grace :pinkiesmile: But as you mentioned in a blog post, aren't you already working on too much stuff already? I just hope you don't overwork yourself or something because these stories are great and enjoyable. But then back to the main subject here. This first chapter had good clop, good grammar and not too many faults. I'm no professional critic or something but i'd like to give this chapter eight Trixie Mind Control Clopfics out of ten Trixie Mind Control Clopfics... odd rating system but who cares! Now have good day and i hope to see more kinky stuff in the future! :twilightsmile:

From the title, I figured that Angel was gracing some notebook... :facehoof::trollestia:

Hmm.... a bit rushed maybe but still nice. I'll keep watching thisfic for the time being^^

So I had another look at this, and no, I did not actually write it! I'll keep it up, but if the original author (Or FiM Staff) want, I will take it down.

In the meantime, enjoy a bizzare story from Angel's early days.

this is pretty good...but, what about what happened to Luna, and Tia?

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Huh. I wonder what did happen to the two of them.

4487680 even if Trixie took over the guard with mind control, (and now Angel) and Rainbow Dash...I don't think she's got the power to be able to take down Luna, AND Celestia, much less ONE of them via such a method. not without the alicorn amulet to power up. but then she'd just be taken over by it.

I bet Trixie distracted Ce3lestia and Luna by having Rainbow Dash open the gates to Tartarus while Trixie took control of Cerberus.:twilightsmile:

And thats the weird way to do a self insert:applejackunsure::ajbemused::twilightoops:

Comment posted by midnight-blaze deleted Feb 27th, 2015

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Well, I'll go ahead and credit you, then.

A lot of the stuff I have on my computer is saved from RPs; if you guys are interested, I can post them up.

A nice little start. Hypno Magic boosted by a mind control collar makes for a unique set up. It'll be quite interesting to see where this goes.

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This is stuff that's already written and sitting on my computer. Think of it as "filler"

This was awesome! And despite what it says t in the description, I'd love to see more.

It's alright, though there's not much to it beyond X hypnotizes Y. Kind of like the implication that her family became wealthy due to mind control.

I really liked it.
Would love to see more, you write MC really well!

4516784 Yeah, Id love to see some more mc stuff, especially if it was rped.

I liked the pacing and the nice smooth turning of Applebloom into her slave. I'd love to see more!

Ooh, possession is interesting. I'd love to see this expanded some time.
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A continuation of Sombra would be nice.

It's a niche thing since it's just that one episode, but I'd love to see more of this at some point.

Canon Sombra is dumb. Canon Sombra with a few tweaks is great, and there can never be enough evil domination fics for him.

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It's a concept I'm kicking around.

Well alright then...

u wanna go

fite me

winner takes name

Neat idea, but just kinda happens right away and it's done. Maybe expected more buildup? I dunno.

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Yeah, that memory magic with the princesses sounds fun , I kinda want to see that.

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I want to make it clear I wrote this in half an hour during a period of sleep deprivation and the concept of showing everyone how fucked up my mind was seemed really appealing at the time.

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I don't work with memory manipulation much. Might try it sometime.

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Well, if the idea comes around again, the theme would be interesting. With the memory shenanigans in the other room and the manipulation with Twilight, it's a neat combination. Dark without being over the top.

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You're both adorable, now hurry up and kiss already!

Great story, keep up the good work :twilightsmile:

I know this is a one-shot. But I'd really like to see a follow-up to this! Maybe one involving the Mane Six turning the tables on Trixie and making her their pet!

I wonder who would be next.

any changelings ones coming up?

“Oh please, a mane like that and you’re going to tell me you don’t like this?” T.

IM DEAD :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:

Kinda wish this got a sequel where the others hypnotized Trixie for revenge

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